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Posted: 8 years ago


Superb update rashmi 😊
😆 all thinking Hw he gt to know... Aree it's obvious any servant told him... Com on he will nt spy on u all by camera he just worried fr u all... Thts it. 😆
Ohh my my new Entry tht too of Ajay Lady Love... Like it 😊
Hmm so ther is someone whom Ajay Love n get nervous 😆
Ye toh normal h Sab Ki yahi halat hoti h chahe koi kitna bhi thought Kyu n ho 😉
Okk... Now luk lik Ja really strt changing he tk his frst step... He without thinking do something just bcz he feel so... Gud
Let see wht nxt...
Waiting for nxt 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago


Update nxt soon 😉
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Chapter 31


(other side Jalal was sitting on his room and feeling guilty again listening Ajay words).

his heart said : look after what you did still Ajay want your family to be support you and you.

his mind said : I think there is some reason for that after all he is officer and businessman to he is very clever he never do anything without reason.

his heart said : everyone are not cunning like you okay so you better forget about revenge or change yourself and don't listen to your stupid mind.

his mind said : how dare you call me stupid you emotional fool because of you because of you he always get week.

His heart said : no because of you he became bad men whom no one love.

(getting frustrated with his mind and heart argument Jalal shouted).

Jalal said : shut up you both I made decisions I always listen my mind and I seeing the consequence and now I will listen to what my heart said to do I will accept everything and do everything to change my self now no argument.

(listening his words his head started paining and his heart feel good but one more person was there who listen to his determine words and entered in his room and hugged him tight getting sudden hug Jalal get shocked and looked at the person he get happy).

humayu said : I am happy my son that you admit your Mistake and now determine to face challenge and in this I am with you my son and I want to apologize to you for yesterday.

Jalal said : no need for that dad it was your right to get angry on me in fact I should be the one to say sorry I was mad in rage that time I didn't thought what I am doing is right or wrong I just did it and now I am ashamed at myself you know what dad when I was in hospital I thought to plan something and take revenge from Ajay but after yesterday listening all of you don't know why my mind is not in confidence about revenge thing and now I don't want to take revenge because it will not lead me anywhere in my life.

(listening this first his father get angry but then listening everything he get happy and again hugged him).

humayu said : that's like my good son.

(hamida who come there to talk to Jalal see this and in Happy voice).

hamida said : you don't have only your father with you I am to with you in this journey okay.

(saying this she hugged him to and with that they share a family huge after few minutes).

hamida said : now leave all that and let's go I made your favorite food I will make you eat by my hands.

(listening this both father and son get happy then humayu in teasing voice).

Humayu said : so all the love for your son and what about me my love.

(listening him hamida get shy).

hamida said : stop it and behave yourself front of your you son you are flirting.

Jalal said : don't worry I didn't heard anything and if you both kiss each other then I am now closing my eyes.

(listening this both hamida and Humayu started laughing there like hell after Few minutes Jalal to join them in laughing).

hamida said : now let's go or else the food get cold now come.

(with this everyone goes to dinning room and sit on there respective chair hamida then serve them food and started feeding Jalal by her hands and like this they all share very good time with each other).

(other side Ajay was in his home and taking rest when he get call from Jodha he smiled and he received her call).

Jodha said : Bhai did you had your lunch and medicine or not.

Ajay Said : don't worry Angel I am not careless like you about my health.

Jodha said : Bhai don't tease me.

Ajay Said : then what should I do you are asking me that I eat my lunch or not when you yourself didn't eaten anything.

Jodha said : I am missing you Bhai and I don't have mood to eat anything.

Ajay Said : I am missing you to Angel and I want to meet you to but I have important work here to do.

Veer said : we can't meet now but we can see each other in Skype not is it.

Ajay Said : good idea let me open my laptop now.

(with this Jodha Ajay both open there laptop and come to Skype and looked at each other).

Priya said : hey monkey why were you smiling now did you propose Ritu.

Ajay Said : Hitler I have many important work to rather then proposing Ritu.

Veer said : he dude don't be shy why don't you propose her after all she love you so much.

Ajay Said : what to do men I I get nervous with her.

(listening this Jodha Priya and Veer Started laughing).

Ajay Said : don't you dare to make fun of me okay.

Jodha said : Bhai why do you get nervous when you know she will not reject you just tell her that you love her to.

Ajay Said : fine I will propose her today okay.

Priya said : good idea now I am hungry let's eat lunch guys.

(with that Jodha Priya and Veer take there food and Ajay other side take his and everyone Started eating there food Ajay was not with them but they were seeing each other in Skype and was happy with that like this they had there lunch then Jodha Veer Priya left for there shift work and Ajay goes to his room and plan to propose Ritu so he get ready in and goes to her house and take her to best hotel of his which was decorated Because of his order and seeing this Ritu get shocked but then get happy to see the decorations because it was just like her taste so she hugged him).

Ritu said : it's so beautiful Ajay I loved it.

Ajay Said : I am glad you like it now came.

(with this they both goes to the booked seat which was only for them and reaching there like gentleman Ajay take seat out for her and make he sit comfortably and then sit front of her to and ask in calm voice).

Ajay Said : what would you like to have.

Ritu said : nothing Ajay just tell me why you take me here and why there is no one.

(listening her Ajay get nervous but he to is mastermind in masking his emotions so he in calm voice).

Ajay Said : actually I wanted to tell you something that's why I brought you here and there is no one because I booked whole hotel today for us only.

(listening him Ritu get surprise then in calm voice).

Ritu said : and what is that.

Ajay Said : well we have whole night to talk first tell me would you like to dance with me.

Ritu said : there is no way I will deny your beautiful request.

(with this Ajay take Ritu hand in her and take her to dance floor where very soft music was playing they dance very romantically with each other they were so lost in that when suddenly Ajay bend on his knees and with lots of love and questions nervousness he looked upwards in her eyes and in calm voice).

Ajay Said : I am not very romantic and not a fan of movies neither propose any girl in my life so don't have any idea what girls like to have in there partner so I am sure you will not like this all old fashion way of proposal but I would like to say that I love you Ritu from the time I saw you I felt strange pull or attraction towards you whenever you are around my heart started beating like there is no tomorrow I would like to say I will protect you from everything and I will try my best to fulfill your every wish I want to make you mine with your wish so tell me will you be mine will you spend your life with me will you marry me will you share share your problem and worries with me will you become partner of my success will you Ritu tell can I have a honour to become husband of the most intelligent gorgeous girl and if your answer is no then let me tell you there will be no other girl in my life in future it is my decision now tell me will you be mine.

(listening him Ritu get teary and smiled in happiness and nodded her head in yes and seeing this Ajay get happy and then he take out the ring from his pocket).

Ajay Said : can I have your permission to make you wear sign of my love which make people aware that you are committed my love.

(she was so emotional with all this that she don't know what to say so she again nodded her head in yes and seeing this he slid the ring in her finger and very softly kissed her hand).

Ajay Said : you know you are first and last girl who make ne nervous about my heart feeling and you will be the only one in my life till my last breath.

(listening this Ritu put her hands on his lips to stop him saying anything after this and in soft voice).

Ritu said : never say like this I Will die without you I can be set from you but can't see you hurt I love you so much to see you even talking about death Ajay.

Ajay Said : the thing which make you worry I will never do or say my love but for that you have to give me your million dollar smile.

(listening this she smiled whole heartily and seeing this he hugged her tight when after few minutes they heard voice congratulations guys we are so happy for you both listening this both turn towards left side and saw Jodha Veer Priya on Skype and congratulating them they smiled at them).

Ritu said : how did you both get to know about this.

Jodha said : not only we guys the whole world is aware now that most handsome bachelor and powerful businessman is now committed to his lady love.

(listening this Ritu get shocked and looked at Ajay with questioning look).

Veer said : when he was proposing you it was live telecast on the channel and when you accepted his proposal the the telecast get over so we for congratulating called you on Skype.

Ritu said : what if i rejected your proposal Ajay you know how insulting it can be for you oh my god Ajay how could you do that.

Ajay Said : there is reason for that love first I know you love me and I was confident about your yes and second I wanted that now the whole world will be aware that I am committed now and you belong to me so no girl will throw themselves on me and neither any boy will try to flirt with you and third if you reject me then to it will be fine because like I said no one will be in my life accept you I hope now I made myself clear love.

(listening this Ritu started crying and hugged him tight and like this they become officially committed couple).

(and seeing all this in television Jalal family get happy for him Abdul and Jalal was happy for him to Bakshi get shocked to see this but then get happy for his happiness Kabir to saw this and looked at Bakshi and understood her emotion but didn't said anything like this they all were happy for each other and everyone get busy in there work and 3months get passed other side Jodha and Veer broke up with each other and Veer to after understanding her emotion let her away but there is nothing happen in there friendship they were happy and busy in there work and time to time talk to Ajay. and Mirza with the help of Kabir make Jalal business powerful and Ritu take the case of Jalal and prove that in court that he was in secret mission on which he was helping officer to destroy drugs smuggling and the people he killed were gangster and smuggler and for that he have to do something wrong to and because of that court didn't give him any punishment and he get save to after that he take his business and started working hard in that Abdul become his partner in his company Mirza did exam and by passing that become doctor like he dream everything was going fine).

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Posted: 8 years ago


Rashmi 🤗
It was a Wowesome update...
Oh I loved it 😃
Finally Ja took decision n this Tim his heart win... Yaaye
See the effects of gud thing Just he thought to b Listen his Heart he gt his Parents his Family back 😊
Ajay n Jo prt always Sweet... This Tim all tease so much Ajay tht in Last he decide to propose Ritu...
Ajay Propose Ritu n She accepted 🥳congrats 😉
Woah... Ajay mk it Telecast... So tht everyone knows the whom he belongs n to whom she belongs... Aww thts so confident N romantic possessive 😉
Everyone saw ther proposal Ja n his family n all r happy fr him Bakshi too ... She was Lil sad but gt happy in her happiness n kabir notice all tht... Hmm... Y I feel kabir n Bakshi 😉 😆
So lik Ajay planned everything happend lik tht.. Gud... But y I feel ther is sum Twist coming in our way... 😉
Let see...
Waiting for nxt 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago


Update nxt soon 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: lovespari




Rashmi🤗
It was a Wowesome update...
Oh I loved it 😃
Finally Ja took decision n this Tim his heart win... Yaaye
See the effects of gud thing Just he thought to b Listen his Heart he gt his Parents his Family back 😊
Ajay n Jo prt always Sweet... This Tim all tease so much Ajay tht in Last he decide to propose Ritu...
Ajay Propose Ritu n She accepted🥳congrats 😉
Woah... Ajay mk it Telecast... So tht everyone knows the whom he belongs n to whom she belongs... Aww thts so confident N romantic possessive 😉
Everyone saw ther proposal Ja n his family n all r happy fr him Bakshi too ... She was Lil sad but gt happy in her happiness n kabir notice all tht... Hmm... Y I feel kabir n Bakshi 😉 😆
So lik Ajay planned everything happend lik tht.. Gud... But y I feel ther is sum Twist coming in our way... 😉
Let see...
Waiting for nxt 😊

yes your thoughts are correct and as you know I love to give twist and turn so there will be one maybe good one or maybe bad but twist is on the way .
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 29
Awesome Update Rashmi...
Love it ...
Ajay is watching the trio's action and he immediately warns them...He has some source...
As usual cute banter between monkey and Hitler...
The most awesome part is Jalal's convo with Abdul...
I hope he really feels for Ajay...
Ajay is happy with Jalal's family...nice man...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 30
Nice update Rashmi...
Finally ja realised his heart is helping him and decided to get with it. So glad Jalal's family forgive him and their Happy dinner...
Ritu love Ajay and he too love but not propose yet...
So nice to see Jalal's changing behaviour...hope it's true..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Chapter 31
Super Update...
So glad to see Ajay's proposal to ritu...
More surprising is their proposal is live telecasted and all r happy for them... indirectly he is telling to bakshi?
Any way bakshi is also happy for him..
3 months passed..
Veer and Jo break up...
All r going good...eagerly waiting for next update...
What next?
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dellaakdha

Chapter 31

Super Update...
So glad to see Ajay's proposal to ritu...
More surprising is their proposal is live telecasted and all r happy for them... indirectly he is telling to bakshi?
Any way bakshi is also happy for him..
3 months passed..
Veer and Jo break up...
All r going good...eagerly waiting for next update...
What next?

I am happy that you all are liking this story and and always wait for next to and I am happy to see you all are commenting to thank you and guys I would like to say that it's dark ff so don't hope that everything will be fine always and be ready to see twist and turn this story can be funny at some times or scary or emotional okay and once again thanks for comment.

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