Renaissance - ice and fire *Part 3* 20/7 *page 13*

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Nohsin10

@Nohsin10

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Fantastic update

Finally Shivaay got to know the truth

Shivaay is so intelligent

Annika should say yes now😃

Thanks for pm

Plzzz update soon

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rainbowveins

@rainbowveins

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Glad to have you back Smiley!

Chapter was intriguing,waiting for the next :)

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peeehu

@MRS.SSO

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#93

Finally shivaay knows the truth

Loved how anila confessed it all

Beautifully written

Nice job done

Thanks for pm

Continue sooon

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Shikha Singhania

@Nimik

Inactive

Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Beautifully penned ya!!

Excellent!!

Please do continue soon

-Shikha

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#95

love this story keep writing please

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Khidkitod

@Khidkitod

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Hello Smiley dear!!🤗

This was another amazing update!!👏 I have told you already that I love how you have portrayed Mahi as Annika's support..⭐️ Shivaay at last got to know something..But how much??😲 Am so curious u know..😛 Loved Shivaay and Gauri's master plan..😳 Love their bonding so much! The way Shivaay made Annika confess!👏 Ru's outburst was so on point..⭐️ OmRu are cuties!❤️

Am so excited to know Annika's answer!😳 But first you take care of your health!! 🤗 Then update whenever you will feel okay..😊

Thanks for the pm dear!!❤️ Take care of your health!

Loads of love,

Rusha

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Gurveen

@Gurveen

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#97

Mind blowing updates
Shivay won't let anyone come near Anika
Om Rudra and mahi are their permanent shippers
Shivay and Gauri made a fabulous plan to make Anika confess everything
Update next part soon

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1105905

Hibernated

Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Hi smiley!
This took me back to Separation track.
I like how you have portrayed Shivaay.
Now, that's how SSO's brain supposed to work.
Unfortunately, it didn't happen in the show.
Gosh! thinking of those utterly crappy episodes, still gives me sort of michmichis.😕
Nevertheless, its back on the right track now.

All the pent up emotions, frustrations, yearning, you penned it down so well.
Though the track had moved forward with the storyline,
but I'd love to read your take on this one, coz I really enjoyed reading it.
I hope you are writing more.
looking forward to read the next turn.😊

Edited by joy1 - 8 years ago