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Posted: 7 years ago
@43
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Geet got angry seeing Sasha bossing around d office.
She teached her a good lesson.
Loved maaneet moments.
Sasha was shocked seeing Geet in his lap but thought she is hallucinating.
Loved d way Geet handled that Sasha.
Geet made Vicky realise his feelings for choti..

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Posted: 7 years ago
Lovely update.
Maan understand Geet n Vicky bond.
He knows how much Vicky craves for mothers love n he is getting that from Geet..
Vicky went to pick choti n she is getting jealous seeing Deepti with him.
Vicky Swara n Deepti came to know about choti past n her relationship with sanskar.
Loved Maaneet moments.
Geet is so jealous seeing short dressed girls not even more angry knowing they came for d post of pa.
Who is this mystery man..why is he behind maaneet happiness.
Very interesting precap.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm dear:)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: SANJANA9167

Kalpi...
Lovely parts...
U r not going to separate maaneet right...
Maan brought halwa for geet...He he he dadi saw that...
Uff I soo hate sasha I want geet to give solid answer to her...
Sasha is very irritating
Who is the man now...
And the girl shouting love u maan...
Ho ho no more suspense and maaneet separation


Thank u so much sanju di 😳
Yeah msk brought halwa for geet 😳
Wait for know about mystery man part 😉
Suspense always in my stories 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

@41

Awesome update.
Loved it.
Deepti was teasing maan but he couldn't understand her words n got himself embarrassed by knowing that from her father.
Maan got angry listening to dadi words regarding his father n left d place.
Vicky was angry with dadi for making maan upset by taking his father topic n dadi slapped him for talking against his father.
Poor Vicky was in so much of pain n sharing with choti.she tried to console him..
He have craved for parents love in his life. He got d genuine love from maan.
Loved choti n Vicky moments..



Thank u so much Dear 😳
Yeah maan and Vicky don't want Rana in their life 😕
He got more love from maan even more than brother love 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

@42

Awesome update.
Loved it.
Loved maaneet cute n romantic moments.
Ohh poor maaneet, dadi put so many restrictions for them after seeing him romancing last night.
Geet is going to stay in out house.
Pammi is such a drama queen..
Vicky n Swara taunted her..


Thank u so much dear 😳
Yeah dadi put condition to maaneet 😳
Pammi devil.. 😡
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

@43

Awesome update.
Loved it.
Geet got angry seeing Sasha bossing around d office.
She teached her a good lesson.
Loved maaneet moments.
Sasha was shocked seeing Geet in his lap but thought she is hallucinating.
Loved d way Geet handled that Sasha.
Geet made Vicky realise his feelings for choti..


Thank u so much dear 😳
She start good lesson 😉
Yes vickky realised his love 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: arshifansiri

Lovely update.

Maan understand Geet n Vicky bond.
He knows how much Vicky craves for mothers love n he is getting that from Geet..
Vicky went to pick choti n she is getting jealous seeing Deepti with him.
Vicky Swara n Deepti came to know about choti past n her relationship with sanskar.
Loved Maaneet moments.
Geet is so jealous seeing short dressed girls not even more angry knowing they came for d post of pa.
Who is this mystery man..why is he behind maaneet happiness.
Very interesting precap.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.
Thanks for d pm dear:)


Thank u so much dear 😳
Yeah choti relationship with sanskar out with other 😃
Mystery man detail know about next part 😳
Update 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago

Thanks for liking and comments dearies, If any grammatical mistakes , in this part..i am sorry.

Part 45

KM

Maan sitting sofa in hall with his hand folded to chest in angry face..

Girls and Vicky enter in mansion with giggling face..

Geet surprised seeing maan in mansion..while lips crept big smile..

Swara: oh , maan bhai come back from Mumbai so my bhabhi cheek s change to red tomato..with teasing tone.

Vicky: bhabhi...with teasing face.

Geet hit Vicky shoulder : move away ..

Geet come and sit next with maan: when u come back, I thought u will come tomorrow from Mumbai..u signed deal with chopra s or meeting postponed.

Vicky: arhhh..bhabhi, bhai never postponed his meeting ..i think he signed deal quickly and come to see his juilet..with teasing tone.

Geet: Vicky ki bachi...

Choti: he is not bachi..with chuckling face

Geet look at maan face: maan,u know today, we did more masti in mall, watched favourite movies..and did more shopping

Maan bang his hand infront of glass table..while shout in standing from sofa: enough..with angry face..glass broken into several pieces and maan hand bleeding..but he did not care about his pain.

Geet jerk up sofa with shocking state..everyone scared seeing maan angry..

Geet lips tremble and tried held his bleeding hand but maan snapped her hand : maan...with moist eyes.

Maan grabbed geet arms : u r not kid,geet..just behave like matured woman..who the hell..give u permission going outside without guards protection..

Geet tears flow in her eyes with teary eyes starring angry maan without blinking eyes.

Vicky: bhai...with slow voice..

Maan glare to Vicky:u just ur mouth..dont interfere between us. With angry voice.

Maan look at geet : plz stop ur child behavior..

Swara and choti eyes moist seeing geet crying face and maan angry face.

Maan heart blast several times seeing his mishty teary face but he cannot control his anger..he left the place..with angry face..

Geet sit in sofa with teary face..swara and choti sit next with geet ..and Vicky kneel down infront of sitting geet..

Swara: bhabhi, sorry..because of us..u got scolded by maan bhai.

Vicky: sorry bhabhi..with held her palm..with guility face.

Choti: maan jiju in angry otherwise he never scold u..with defending maan side.

Vicky: jiju ki chamchi..dont support ur jiju..

Geet wiped her tears and little smile: nothing, in his work tension, he showed me..with tried hide her sad face.

Geet: Vicky, go call to siva bhai..( maan bodyguard)..vicky called siva ...after few seconds, he enter in mansion.

Siva: mam, u called me..

Geet: Bhai, what happened, why maan tension, when he come back to mansion soon, why he got angry..

Siva: mam, afer we reached Mumbai hotel, sir got call..u have accident..u r in critical state.

Vicky, swara and choti : what..with shocking face.

Geet : shhh.. then..bhai

Siva: sir, called u many times..but ur phone unreached and called vicky , swara and choti ..but everyone phone unreached...maan sir called ur bodyguards..but they don't know where r u..sir very tensed for u..me and maan sir come back to delhi..after we reached , we know about u all went for mall and sir send bodyguards to mall for ur protection.in our travel time , maan sir very restless and worried about ur safety even he missed sign deal and without say anyone come to delhi.

Geet take long breathe : thanks bhai..u can go with sad face.

Vicky : who tricked with bhai..with angry face.

Geet : swara , bring first aid box , come to ur bhai room.

Swara nods her head ...geet went to maan room..

Geet enter maan room with pain heart..geet switch on the light..he already messed whole room. Every things break into two pieces..maan sit in corner of bed while angry face.

Swara , choti and Vicky enter in maan room..geet stopped them while move to maan side.. geet gestured give first aid box her..and leave the place..

Vicky : but, bhabhi..bhai angry with u..with worried face

Geet : I know, u got out..geet take first aid box from swara hand. Swara, Vicky and choti left the maan room..

Geet come and sit next with maan in cot and take his bleeding as cleaned his blood hand and applied ointment and wrapped bandage in his wound place.

Geet got from bed while tried move from the place..maan held her wrist..with guility face.

Maan whisper : sorry..geet hugged maan in his sitting position.

Maan sobbing voice: I scared ...after hearing u got accident, my heart bleeding, ur phone not reachable.my whole body shivering..my brain stopped working..i thought, I lose u like my maa went away from me. With sobbing and hide his face in stomach..his tearing drenched her dress..geet cupped his teary face. His eyes reflect his pain, fear lose her in his life..

Geet kissed his forhead and maan close his eyes as gestured kiss eyes too..

Geet smiled ,kiss his eyes one by one..maan open his eyes..

Geet: I am sorry..once again, its not happen..i understand after u knew about fake my accident call. I understand ur pain more than anyone.

Maan: each sec I am dieing , my every nerves wish only ,u become safe. After I got , u r in mall with family then only my heart beat become normal state.u r my oxygen, without my oxygen ,I cannot breathe..with painful voice.

Geet layed maan to bed and sit near of his head and caring his hairs..

Maan placed his head in her lap and encircled his arms to her waist..geet caring his hair smoothly while sing lubby song for maan.

Maan slept in that position and geet placed maan head in pillow ..

Geet: last five months, u fearing more about my safety, if I am not infront of u, ur eyes seeking me..its not for love ..i saw fear in ur eyes..why maan..why u not share ur fear with me..i thought I give time , u willingly come with say me..but no , u did not..what matters, making u fear .next month our marriage..but u have no excited for marriage..tomorrow, I talk with u sure.

( guys, next months maaneet marriage, this five month leap ..u know after maaneet marriage, I think , everyone don't want after maaneet marriage , epilogue part..so this five months I using my upcoming track ..so u don't miss office romance before their marriage )

Geet kissed maan forehead and get up from bed but maan held her wrist tightly in sleeping state..geet sit back in same position and rest head to bed .as her body layed next with maan.both slept held their palm with each other..

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Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 46

Next morning..


The sun rise hit their face. Maan wake up first..his eyes got morning treat as his angel sleeping next with him..his hand caring her cheeks and remove her hairs and tucked behind to her ear..

Maan: my mishty, my jaan..with little smile face.

Geet eyes balls rolled and maan sensed she wake up with in few sec..maan closed his eyes like penentrating till sleeping.

Geet wake up from sleep and lips got smile seeing her soul sleeping peacefully next with her.

Geet kissed his forhead : good morning, motu..geet pinched his nose..u got angry more, control ur anger..its not good for u..my angry bird with chuckling face

Geet placed head in his chest and maan wrapped her waist as pulled more to him..geet head raised look at his face..his eyes closed but his hand searching her bare waist..geet pinched his hand hardly..

Maan shout : ahhhaaa..geet..

Geet: theft caught..with naughty tone..maan rolled above come to her ..placed his hand both side of her..

Maan: iam angry bird..with smirked face

Geet : yes, u r my angry bird..with pinch his both cheeks..


Maan lip moving to geet lip ..just single inch cap between their lips..masti gang banged in maan room.

Masti gang closed their eyes : early morning they start their romance.

Geet pushed maan to bed and got up from bed and went to washroom before devils start their teasing counter..

Maan sit up in bed and irritating face: every time they interpet my romance. Devils ..with murmuring voice.

Choti : jiju and di..i open her eyes or not..lightly remove her palm from face.

Maan sit in bed and choti eyes scanning whole room ..geet not here.

Choti : guys , open ur eyes..they stopped their romance..swara and Vicky open their eyes.

Maan: what r u all doing here.

Choti , swara and Vicky look at each other and held their ears through their own arms..start sit and up punishment doing infront of maan.

Maan stand in bed : why u all doing sit up..with doubting face.

Choti : because of us, u got angr y with geet di..while doing situp said.

swara: we only planned for shopping without bodyguards protection.

Vicky: i helped , this both girls plan.i diverted bodyguards as we escaped from guards..we went to mall..enjoy our day life without guards protection..but we don't know how our phone become switched off.

Choti.vicky and swara unison: sorry...bhai/jiju...plz forgive us.dont angry with geet bhabhi /di. She tried to stop us , but we did not hear her advice ,because of us..she come with us..

Maan fold his hand in chest : so..u three of them real culprit for mall picinic.

Three nods their head with pout face ..yeah doing sit up continuously.

Geet come from washroom..and smiled hearing their statement infront of maan like student doing situp caught by teacher.

Geet : stop ur punishment.

Maan: don't stop them, they deserve it..

Geet: they r kids..

Three nod their head with puppy face:yes.

Maan: what kids, don't forgot their ages. They r adult not kids but their matured not grown up..it strucked in their childhood. With angr voice.

Geet: for us, they always kids only..stop ur punishment..oti

Vicky , swara and choti stopped sit up and come to side hug to geet.

Vicky: thanks bhabhi..i love u..

Geet: I love u too..vicky..

Maan clear throat and swara & choti giggled maan flight with vicky..

Geet twisted her lips and maan raised his eyes brow as gestured what I did it.

Vicky & swara (mind): in future , u sit up infront of bhabhi..i will enjoy ur punishment ...I am waiting for that day..with smirked face.

Swara mumurming voice: bhai, what I am thinking..u also same thinking right..vicky nods his head..

Choti: good morning didu n jiju.., maan jiju, ur special person want special wish for u today..with naughty face.

Maan: who informed janumaa..with grinned teeth

Choti, swara and Vicky: I am not..

Dadi : its me..with proud tone and enter in maan room.

Choti phoned ringed and show id to maan with teasing face.

Maan snatched phone from choti hand with grumby face.

Maan: janumaa..with slow voice.

Janu: how many times, I told that don't angry its not good for u..why u not heared my words..why u hear my words..i am not mother..i just mother in law for u..

Maan pout face: don't say, u r not my mother..u r my sweet mom...plz next time , I try to control my anger..with sad voice.

Janu: hmm, how is ur hand..u have pain in ur hand with motherly concern voice.

Maan: its small cut only..

Geet snatched phone from maan: no, its not small cut..glass piece deeply cut in his hand..with complaining but pain in her voice.

Janu:because of u, he got angry, my crazy son, crazily love with u, but u bothering him more..why u went out without guards protection..next months , officially u become Mrs MSK..u have more responsibilities but ur behviours not like that..u r big daughter in law of khurana..dont forgot u have responsibility. U only create lovely bonding to family. Don't break every one heart..with angry voice but mother concern about her children life .

Geet eyes moist with pout face: I am sorry with guilty face.

Dadi snatched phone from geet: Janu beta, u scolded my daughter in law not only ur daughter.. who u said, she have no any responsibilities.every time, how maturedly handle everyone problem and u r stupid son angry..my badi bahu most worth person for ur angry son.

Maan: dadi, why u scolding my maa.

Vicky: everyone stop..first janu maa scold bhai and bhabhi and then dadi scold to janu maa ..now bhai scold to dadi..when u stopped scolding session.

Janu : hello..

Dadi: yes, janu beta..am in line.

Janu: when everyone come to Chennai, first send geet and girls to Chennai. Everyone asking her ..next months marriage till now bride not come to home..plz send her soon.

Dadi: yes,next weeks, we will come to Chennai..but maan come later..

Janu: ok maa..take care everyone..i call u later...cut the call.

*********

Maan sit in balcony and starring moon..geet placed her hand in his shoulder..

Maan turned tried give his smiling face but failed infront of his mishty.

Geet: why u hide everything from me.

Maan : I am not hide anything from u , jaan...

Geet show one photos: what is this maan..

Maan : silent..his head bow down to floor..

Geet:atleast open ur mouth now.who she is.

Maan pull geet and sit her next with him and cupped her cheesks: u trust me na..

Geet: more than anyone, I trust u..

Maan take long breathe : she is my college mate.she crazily love with me..trust me, I did not love with her..she only love me.

Geet: if she disturbing u, maan.

Maan: no, that mystery man related to her..last 5 months, he disturbing me..he trying to everyway break me..last fake call also he only did it..with close his palm in fist..

Geet : how he related to her..

Maan: I don't know. She is orphan..she have no one..but iam confused , how he related to her..

Geet: how u know about her..

Maan: she is my classmate..me, adi, sanskar and Ranjith close friend in college days..i know sanskar in my boarding school itself and Ranjith come close after our first year of our B.E .after we joined MBA in same college ..that time ,she joined our first year MBA. We r all in same class.

Flashback start.

Saraswathi college one of the best reputation college in delhi..

Adi: maan, first day our MBA ..with excited face.

Sanskar: we r not join new college..we joined same college as we did it our B. E last five yrs.

Ranjith : sanskar, I am also excited new girls come to our college with excited voice.

Adi: u never changed Ranjith ,flirty person with chuckling face.

Maan hit back ranjith: flirty person, in our gang, he only flirty person.

Ranjith: oyies, I am harmless flirty not like u.

Maan: what do u mean not like u..with raised eye brow.

Ranjith: u break every young girls hearts showing ur bichep..they drooling u .everyone wait for ur single glimpse but ur eyes not single glance to them..

Maan rolled his eyes: uff..u never changed..

Ranjith eyes strucked one side and adi , sanskar and maan confused seeing statue state.

Maan: why he stand like statue..

Ranjith raise his hand and pointed out one side and everyone eyes shifted to ranjith eyes freezed place..one young lady enter in college.she wored saree and specs in her eyes.

Ranjith: she so beautiful..with dreamy face.

Maan nods his head: he started..

Ranjith run and stand in front of young lady..

Ranjith: hey, I am ranjith..u r new in college..

Girl: yes..

Ranjith: I help u, if u don't mind..with flirty tone.

Girl: sure, where is staff room..

Ranijth: why staff room, I show ur class room.


Girl: yeah, but lecture going to staff room only na with smirked face.

Ranjith: u r lecture ...with flirty face change to pale face.

Girl: yes..i am guest lecture ..i am new in college..where is staff room young boy with teasing tone.

Ranjith: go to right and then left ..u got ur staff room with grinned teeth.

Girl : thank u , young boy with patted his cheeks .. and left the place with winning smile.

Maan , adi and sanskar come to ranjith place and placed his hand to his shoulder.

Sanskar : what happen young boy..with teasing tone..

Adi patted his cheeks: thank u young boy with same imitate voice like girl.

Maan: u flirt with lecture..great improvement with teasing tone.

Ranjith fuming: just shut up...ranjith left the place.

************

Maan sit in first bench with sanskar and second bench adi with ranjith..

Lecture start intro himself,first day of college , new comers intro about them ..ranjith upset totally, he did not concentrate anything.suddenly he heared same voice ..his head turned to class entrance..same lecture standing in door..she asked permission enter in class but now she wore t-shirt and skirts and scarf in neck.she look beautiful in this dress also.

Lecture allow her inside..she said , she newly joined MBA..

Lecture :intro ur self..


Girl: hi guys, I am anika..nowonwards, I am also ur classmate..with winked eyes to ranjith.

Ranjith mouth open widely : she teased me..how dare she..with fuming face.

Maan , adi and sanskar: she prank with u..with gigging and slow voice.

Ranjith: I know..with fuming voice.

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Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago

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