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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 47

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Ranjith blocked anika ..and anika sheepish smile to him..

Ranjith : u prank with me..

Anika: just for fun..let be friends.

Sanskar : iam sanskar..we r friends, he is adi, ranjith and this is maan..

Anika: hi guys..i am new in delhi not only college.

Adi: no problem, we help u..u stay with ur family or hostel.

Anika: no iam orphan, I have no one except my friend..now I don't know where he is..with sad face.

Adi: iam sorry..

Anika: no problem, adi..if maan is dumb person with dramatic sad tone.

Maan: I am not..with strict face.

Anika: chill, maan...why show u rude face..with chucking face.

Ranjith: leave him..he like that only..

Maan glare to ranjith..

Anika : but I like him with winked eyes..

********

Anika also joined fanstic four group ( maan, adi, sanskar and Ranjith) she so chubby, sweet person, character like child.

Maan , adi , sanksar treat her like good friend and ranjith crush with her.

College life going smoothly..culture day everyone participated , maan coordinator , one of the junior legs fractured , he cannot participated dance ..so maan dance with junior. That dance really passionate one..everyone praising their Jodi..girls jealous , they cannot get chance dance with maan.. yeah first time anika jealous with girl..her eyes view changed to maan different way..she very possessive with maan..she did not like girl close with maan.

Maan teach junior girl some lesson and anika called maan but maan not hear her voice.anika pushed girl to down ..left the place..

Maan confused her behaviours..

Adi : what happen to her suddenly, why she pushed junior to ground.

Ranjith: I think, she love with maan with calm said..

Sanskar and adi shout : what..

Ranjith: nowdays,she possessive with maan..if u want I prove u guys..

Adi: let prove..

Ranjith: don't say anything to maan.

Adi , sanskar and ranjith come to maan table..

Maan: why she behave weirdly..

Ranjith: leave her..she come back..after some time..let play any games.

Maan:ok..what

Ranjith: our favourite game truth and dare..

Maan: hmm..u evil mind planning something..

Ranjith: nope..dont say Great MSK , md of kc ..in his young age achieving more in business field while doing his MBA time..scaring play truth and dare with his friend.

Maan: MSK, never scare with anyone with smirked face.

Ranjith: then play..

Games started..everyone doing truth or dare..next maan turn..

Maan chose : dare..

Ranjith: u purpose girl, who come first ,enter in canteen .

Maan: but purposal..idont want hurt any girl in sake of prank..

Ranjith: u choose dare, u must do it otherwise accept, u r lose the game..

Maan: ok..after I proposal , next sec..i clearly said that person..its just prank.

Ranjith: ok..

Everyone eagerly look at canteen entrance..opps same junior , maan dance in cultural..she enter in canteen.

Sanskar: ur fate maan..she is same junior , u dance in cultural.

Maan nods his head : yup...

Ranjith: maan, iam waiting..

Maan take long breathe and leg to move to junior table ..

Maan: hi..

Junior : hi sir with dreamy face..

Maan: I want say something with u..with hestitae voice.

Junior: plz sir, tell me..

Maan: I love u...

Junior shocked in place ..

Maan : oh..its just pra..before junior peck his maan lip..

Junior: I love u too sir..with excited voice.

Now maan shocked in his place, his leg jelled.

Maan come out from shock because of hearing slap sound...

Maan: Ani, why u slapped her..

Anika: how dare , she kissed u..with angry face.

Maan : ask sorry to her..

Anika : I am not maan..

Maan: I am sorry for her and also my fake proposal..it just prank ..i am sorry..

Junior : its ok sir..one second , I am in air, but ur girlfriend bring back to my original state...sorry mam..with left the place.

Maan dragged anika to lonely place:why u slapped her.

Anika: because I love u Maan..

Anika smiled face: I love u Maan singh Khurana..

Maan unbelievable look at Anika: its not true..u r my friend..just my friend..

Anika cupped his face: maan, I love u..plz accept my love with begging voice.

Maan: no, I cannot love u even anyone..i have more responsibilities in my life..left the place..leave shattered ani in ground..

Anika tears flowing in her eyes: I love u maan..

**********

Maan avoid her totally, but anika come infront of her as purposed him several times..but maan strong in his decision.

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Ranjith: maan, give one chance to her..she madly love with u..

Maan: truly I am saying, I have no feeling to see her..she is my friend only.

Adi:ranjith,don't force him..we talk with ani not with maan.

Sanskar: yes, Ranjith..adi saying right..let talk with her .with in few days , our college going finish soon..after he forget maan soon..

Ranjith: I hope..

Sanskar : I am going library..i am back..left the place.

After few minutes sanskar phone ringed ..

Adi: sanskar left the mobile here..

Ranjith : attend his call , adi..

Adi: I am not..

Ranjith : then give me.. I do...adi give phone to ranjith.

Ranjith press answer button even he did not say hello..

Other side blasting more question..ranjith put loudspeaker.

Why u take more time pickup my call? I sent book list, u buy it or not? yesterday my devil prinic scold me.

Ranjith , adi shocked girl voice hearing in sanskar phone .maan lips crept smile unknowningly..he don't know why he happy hearing her voice.

my devil prinic scold me, u know what she said ..i talk and less interact with staff..i am very silent girl, I never talk with anyone unwantedly.i banged my class and went movie with friends.maa caught me through my movie ticket in my bang...I got more good lecture by maa..i talk with u..but why u did not speak single word.

Ranjith: if u stop only, he speak na..

Girl: oyie ..who r u..u r not my bhai.

Ranjith : hi, I am ur bhai friend..with flirty voice.

Maan not like ranjith flirty with her..

Girl: u have no any manners, u attend ur friend call, without his permission..with taunting tone.u must say , before I share my personal matter..i am ur bhai friend but u not..with start lecture to ranjith.

Maan smiled hearing her lecture to ranjith..

Ranjith : hey buddy save me from her..

Girl : how dare , u r gang hearing my personal talk without my knowledge ..i think my bhai not good friend circle with him..his friends don't know what is meaning manners also..

Maan eyes open widely: miss, u know what is manners first, attend call , u start ur tuffoon mail. Without allow other side speak..

Girl: what, I am tuffoon mail..how dare...first talk with that person only flirty but u r arrogant..

Maan: Arrogrant..u r chatter box..

Girl: what I am chatter box..u...

Sanskar come to place before phone war start between Maaneet..yeah girl no one other our geet.

Sanskar look at maan : what going on..why he angry..

Ranjith : one minute, sanskar, I have one doubt ask ur sis.then I give u phone..

Sanskar : geetu in line with whispering voice.

Ranjith:ur devil prinic scold u, because u r silent with staff ..Are u really silent person with shocked face.

Geet shout: u...with angry face..sanskar take phone from table and went far away from them.

After few minutes , he come back to gang.

Ranjith shocked face: hey sanskar, who she is..

Sanskar : my sweet sister ever.

Ranjith: sweet, she...with nods his head negatively..

Sanskar : really buddy, if u meet her, u say same ..what I am saying..she is lovely, sweet person ever in ur life..with start praising geet without say her real name.

Maan shout : stop ur sis neela..she such toofan mail, chatter box, admant person with fuming face.

Sanskar : what happen to him..

Adi: u r sis called our maan to Arrogrant then only he fuming more with teasing look at maan.

Sanskar murmuring voic: but she saying truth only na..

Maan; what u murmuring ..

Sanskar: nothing..

Ranjith : but true, she have really guts saying directly to MSK to arrogant person..with laughed loudly..

*************

Last day of college ..

Ani called maan , she want talk with him in lonely place.her voice shivering and she scared with someone..

Maan sensed her scarness : I am coming, where r u..

Ani said : I am here in xyz place , plz come soon..

Maan reached the place and its such dark place, ani running with fear face.

Ani shout : maan..

A car hit ani and next sec she is in pool of blood in ground.

Maan run to her side : Ani...ani.. no she died..no..

**********

Geet : she..

Maan placed his head in geet lap: she is my good friend , Ani..i miss her so much.

Geet : mystery man related her means she is very close to him..she want say something with u, right..

Maan : yes, geet before she got accident.

Geet: u get information about her in college right.

Maan: my guards already tried it but her details everything spoiled by unknown person.

Geet : don't worry, nothing happen to me.until u with me..nothing happen to ur mishty..


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Edited by maaneetfavo - 7 years ago
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Part 48

Other side, dark room..

Some one snapping knife to maan images continuously..

Mystery man: I want kill u, MSK..but u begging infront of me for ur die..after I will kill u..u snatched my life ka two important person.first u snatched my dad ..that time I have nothing in my take revenge with u..after u snatched my life, my love, my anika from me..i hate u..i hate u core.

Man touch MM shoulder and MM hugged that person.

MM: I want kill him..uncle..he snatched my ani from me.

MM Uncle : shh...he is more powerful..we do..its over 10 yrs revenge..

MM: yes, uncle..i will destroy him..

Uncle: first he filed fake sexual arresment case to ur dad..in sake of ur dad got heart attack..he died..that time , u joined only in ur first year college.fter u got ur childhood friend Ani..u crazily love with her but u know about she love maan..u ready to forgive him also for ani.but outside he rejected her love and but he lust with her, after he killed her..even u did not get body for last ritual..we try many time to destroy him..everytime he escaped our target.first we indirectly play with his emotion insake of sanskar love..but both cheated us like penentrating enemy . In Chennai, we planned shot him but one liitle girl saved him and next we planned shot once again. U try kill his over than him..he see ur target , he pushed her to ground..he got shot but his lover saved him..and u did stupid descision , send to voice message..he become alert with everyone..he increase security with everyone..our person not reach their place.last few months , we give mental stress to him..yesterday first time MSK missed his business deal..because of one fake phone call..his destroy start..he will kill by ur hand only..u r wish fulfil soon..

MM: iam waiting for that day only, uncle..i am waiting for ur death day, Maan singh Khurana.with snapping knife in maan images.

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KM

Mansion phone ringing but no one attend the call..geet come to mansion.

Geet: where everyone went, no one attend the phone..geet pickup phone said hello.

Otherside..:

Geet shocked face: where ..

Otherside:

Geet: I am coming..with tensed face. Drop phone to table.

Geet shocked face: if maan know about, what he will do.., first I need check..if information right or wrong..

Geet called siva (maan bodyguard) ..and few minutes siva enter in mansion and both left the mansion to destination place

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Maan called geet and geet pickup call with tensed face..

Maan: where r u..how many I told, don't go outside without me..with angry voice.

Geet : maan, siva bhai..with me..in stammering voice.

Maan: geet, u alright...

Geet: yes, I am alright..with in 2 hours, I come back..

Maan: ok..dont go anywhere without siva..

Geet: ok..geet cut the call..

After few hours..everyone chit chat with each other in hall..

Geet enter in mansion with hesitate steps..

Choti: see , geet di come back..geet di, where u went with siva bhai.

Geet : oh.. geet move one side..maan got up from sofa..while seeing siva pushing wheel chairs ..someone sit in wheel chairs.his face not cleary visible because of sunshine rays..

Everyone shocked seeing person face in wheel chairs.

Dadi: Rana beta..tears started flowing in her eyes ..

Dadi walked baby step and come infront of rana ..her shivering hand slowly touched his hairs move to cheeks...rana kiss her palm..dadi collapsed to ground..

Rana & Maan shout : dadi / m aa..(rana voice stammering..) maan run to dadi side , held her carfully..

Dadi breathe heavily and maan worried about her state..

Maan: dadi..with worried voice..

Dadi patted maan cheeks: I am alright..

Rana:..m..a..a...with stammering voice..

Dadi get up from ground with help of maan.

Dadi touched rana cheeks: my beta come back to his mother with tears eyes..

Rana: y.es..my...su per..wom..an...

Dadi: see maan, ur father come back with excited voice.

Rana look at maan with happy face: Ma..n..u...my..ma ..nu., maa with surprised and happy face..tears flowing in his eyes..

Rana try get up from wheel chairs and reach to maan..before maan nod his head and turn inside the room..

In his attempt to reach maan..his legs twisted ..before collapsed to ground, geet held his shoulder and helped him as sit him properly.

Vicky and swara in numb state...

Vicky come from shock : bhabhi, why u bring him with angry voice.

Geet : Vicky, I talk with u later..go inside and swara. u too..

Rana: ge et.. th..ey...my children..

Geet nods her head : yes, babuji..vicky and swara..understand babuji, everyone angry with u..they back to u soon.

Geet: swara, help dadi going to her room., choti said maid to clean babuji room..and pinky ..u take care babuji until I come back..everyone nod their head silenty..

Geet bend down to rana level: babuji , everything normal soon,..with polite voice.

Rana placed his hand in her forhead: go..d...ble..ss...u..beta..

Geet enter maan room ..maan caring anju maa photo in wall..

Maan: maa, he come back in my life..why he come back..why ..i don't want see his face in my life time.maa, whenever I need u..u come right..plz come maa..today I need u most..plz..come maa..i don't want him..plz..with teary face...

Geet : Maan...with painful face..

Maan : why geet, u bring him back in my life..i don't want him anymore..when I need him most, he never with me..why he come back..

Geet : maan ..

Maan grabbed her arms tigtly : why ...

Geet: he need us..plz allow him stay like he just relative not like ur father. Just for me..u allow him..plz atleast think about dadi..he is only son of her..long years she carving for son love..she waiting for him..she is old person,she cannot tolerate any more..understand ..

Maan leave her arms : why everything happen in my life..why god play with my emotions..maan kneel down ..and his head bow down to ground..

Maan : I am so tired, each day running ..i am so tired..i cannot anymore running in my life..

Geet kneel down his level and cupped his cheeks: u r not alone..i am with u , our family with u..we will face everything unison..u trust me na..

Maan starring geet eyes ..: I trust u..

Geet: then plz allow stay him..plz..maan..with begging voice.

Maan : hmm..with half heartly accept rana stay in mansion.

***********

Geet helped layed rana in bed and cover blanket properly : babuji, u sleep peacefully..after sunrise , dark night move away like our family also get sunrise soon..

Rana smiled: th..an..ks..beta..

Geet left the place..vicky ,swara both stand with angry face in rana door .choti and pinky silently stand next with them.

Vicky : bhabhi, why u bring him to our mansion.

Geet: shhh..everyone come to my room.

Geet room

Geet: now ask any question..

Swara: bhabhi, u forgot, he killed anju maa..why u bring him to mansion.

Geet : he not killed anju maa.yes, I accept he did not trust his wife words ..he throw out anju bua..but he separated from u all more than 12 yrs..it enough for his mistakes. Even he forgot most of years in his life..

Vicky: bhabhi, don't trust his word..how can he forgot most of years..

Geet: Vicky, I am saying truth..i got call from ashram , babuji in ashram .he got conscious long 10 yrs back from coma.i shocked hearing rana babuji name..without inform anyone I went to ashram with siva bhai..ashram doctor said he come back coma from long 10 years..everytime his lip murmurming anju name only.

Vicky : anju maa name, in his guilty..he murmuring her name with taunting tone.

Geet: human being have right to second chance in their life , why u not give chance to ur father..u already guilt. And he coma in 1o yrs..he did not remember after he went to mansion..part..when, he went to coma..he don't know..my sake u give single chance for him..everyone do mistakes , we have humanbeings..noone perfect, Vicky..u did mistakes, I did mistakes..we need give chance to correct their mistake..give single chance to his father..now he need his children love more than his medicines.

Vicky : bhabhi, but think about bhai state..how to he face him..everytime he look at his face, we remembered anju maa ..death..

Geet : if anju bua alive, she surely forgive babuji..u r all anju maa children ..dont forgot it.

Swara & Vicky unison: u saying, we have no objection, he stay in mansion..we don't need him in our life..we cannot accept he is our father..

Geet : hmm..

**********

Geet (mind): I confused, first babuji run out mansion before 12 yrs..ashram staff said they found babuji in dead bed state..he in serious condition even some one gave drugs to him.after he went to coma state..then between 2 yrs, babuji where he is.if someone house arrest with him..then who that person..

Part end..

Next PART 49 - pg 84

Precap:

Shopping for maaneet marriage.(lets ready guys)

Maaneet romance in mall..if they caught by masti gang.

Gents irriate because of girls shopping..

Everyone packed their bags and going to pollachi..

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Pammi shocked seeing rana in mansion (mind): if he said everything to maan..with fear face.

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Geet slipped , someone held her before she fallen to ground..maan got angry..

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Sorry for back to back update..and sorry for late comment

What I do guys before maaneet marriage , I need start mystery man track and rana come back on track..

Even 50th part our maaneet marriage..now..how many part left..yeah one part only left..

After we straightly enter in maaneet marriage place.

So be more active in MFS land.

How many days left for maaneet marriage..only 4 days.

guys choose ur in bride side or groom side šŸ˜‰

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up coming parts






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so much fun update... 🤣
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the boys defeat ... when dadi join the girls...
nice punishment for the boys
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little romance...
marriage is fix...

thanks for the long update
and for the pm..

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Aleee m to 2nd aayi šŸ˜› šŸ˜‰
Swaagat ni krogee hmaara 🤣
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Originally posted by: Angel.Pooja

Aleee m to 2nd aayi šŸ˜› šŸ˜‰
Swaagat ni krogee hmaara 🤣

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Seee 😃 Aaj PM k liye bori tokreee sab bhar bhar k sukriya bnta h 🤣
Le lo le looo sb šŸ˜† 🤣
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