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karthika

@kattylovestammy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Wow wow wow... The most beautiful OS of urs... This has become my favourite now... So beautiful written... Just wow... Loved it lot and lot... I can imagine shelly jumping then and there on her bed now.. Beautiful gift for our birthday girl... Thank u lord... In the name of shelly we got a beautiful OS for us... It was awesome...splendid and amazing... U r superb... Thank u for this amazing OS neetu...

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divya joshi

@divyaJA

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

This isss tooo gud os...
really very well written...
last part was too amazing...
enjoyed while reading...
tnxx fr pm...

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Sony.S

@Sony.S

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Awesome 👏 awesome 👏
Thanks for pm dear.

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@old_charm

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Posted: 8 years ago

#14

wonderful concept neetu darling...👏👏👏

i really like the characters here - a pretty girl...its not her face but her psyche which will charm u...⭐️

& the boy...who is confident , overly handsome , desirable . since he knows all of it , therefore comes an irrefutable attitude in him...🥱

the plot had so much realism , the way u showed the feelings they go through , i soo loved the way jodha handled things & the way she dealt with him like completely ignoring him thus invoking his curiosity first then wrath , since the boy is not used to such snubbing so couldn't keep check on his nerves & started intentionally pushing himself more & more on her...😛

& then finally confrontation happened...😳

neetu am wating for next part i think u should really write the next part .