Rikara os: Muze pyar hai bs Tumse

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello Guys..

Write one shot after watching today's episode.. Again my Rikaralicious heart wants this scene on rikara & there is least chance to get in onscreen. So write it here. No proof reads. Kindly ignore grammatical mistakes.

Muze Pyar hai bas Tumse

Shivay: "Mai sab thik kar dunga gauri.. His heart was breaking after seeing his beloved sister cried like that. He thought it was his fault. How he didn't imagine scenarios that can happened in exhibition. "I am sorry gauri muze pehale Om se baat krni chahiye thi. Tum uske liye perfect ho. Mai use samjhaunga.

Gauri: "Nahi bade bhaiya .. uski jaroorat nahi hai .. Is baar hum khud unse baat karenge.. Hamari galti bhi to hai.. Aap bus humse ek vaada kijiye.. .

Shivay: "haa gauri.. tum bus kaho kya promise chahiye.. mai tumhara har promise manunga.. He told her emotionally. At least he can do that to reduce her pain.

Gauri: "Aapki aur bhojai ki shadike baad hum yahase jana chahte hai.. Hume galat mat smjiye, hum aap sbse bahut prem krte hai.. Par hum apne aatmsamman par aur vaar nahi seh sakte.. vaada kijiye aap hme nhi rokenge nahi omkarajise kuch kahenge..

Shivay: "Ye tu kya keh rhi ho gauri.. Tumne itni jaldi haar maanli.. mai tumhe hum sbse dur nahi jaane de skta.. tum kuch aur manglo muzse.. ye mai nhi kr paunga.. Shivay was hell shocked after her declaration.

Gauri: "Aap chahte hai na ki hum khus rahe, omkaraji khus rahe.. to bus aapko ye wada krna pdega.. plj.. humare liye.. She asked him crying.

Shivay: "Omse, apne bhai se door jana chahti ho, apne familyse door reh paogi.. he asked her giving final try to not make promise like this. But she was firm on her decision.

Gauri: "Aap sab to humare dilme ho.. Duriya rishtoko aur majboot banati hai.. hai na.. to kijiye vaada.. gauri hold his hands for promise..

Shivay: "vaada.. par jana jaroori hai??.

Gauri: "Haan, humareliye jarrori hai.. Aur hum yha se khusi-khusi jana chahte hai.. to aap ye rotlu chirote ki shakal mat banaiye.. Hum aapki aur bhojaiki shadi bahut enjoy krna chahte hai.. saari khushiya dekhkar, apne sath smetkar le jana chahte hai.. Aap baki sabko humare janeke baad bataiyega.. gharwaloko bura lagega na.. She told him innocently .

Shivay was staring at that beautiful broken doll. He knows she was perfect for his brother. But things in couple should be solved by them. He can't interfere now. He was feeling hell bad for his sister who talked like all Samajhdari in world is lying in her.. In very few days he was become very fond of her.

Shivay: "tumhe pata hai 9-10 saal choti ho muzse par baate daadi maki tarah krti ho.. Mai tumhe bahot miss karunga He told her in verge of crying.

Gauri: "Hum bhi aapko bahut miss krenge.. Ab rona dhona chodiye.. Hume sadike itne saare kaam krne hai.. Bhojai bhi shamko vaps aa rhi hai na.. She hug him tightly once again. It always gave her strength.

Om was so depressed with the happenings in exhibition. He don't know how he was gonna face her. He didn't mean to insult her in any way, but the media was asking her such question. He didn't want to her get embarrass by any clingy questions. But again his words sounds more rude than they should come out. He knows she is going to be mad at him. His heart can realize her pain , but again he was not clear with intensity of his feeling towards her, also his commitment phobia was making all situation worse. He just hoped she would not asked him to let her go from oberoi mansion. He can't imagine her leaving him again. He slowly enters in room. Her back was facing him. He clear his throat that she will turn to look at him & she does.

Gauri: "Are omkaraji aap aagaye.. Wo jaldi se niche aa jaiye, hume dadine niche hall me bulaya hai.. bhojai aa gai hai to shadiki aageki taiyariya krni hai... She told him hurriedly.

Om: "Muze tumse baat krni hai, I m sorry job hi hua exhibition me, I didn't mean that..&... . But she cut him in between..

Gauri: "Are aap kyu maafi mang rahe hai, galti to humari hai ki hum aapko biya bataye waha aagaye.. hume nahi aana chahiye tha.. hume maaf kar dijiye.. aagese hum kabhibhi waha nahi aayenge.. She told him coldly. ..

Om: "Muze pata hai tum naaraj ho I am sorry mera wo...

Gauri: "aap chinta kyu kar rhe hai.. hum ab bahut achchese samaj gaye hai ki aap ka sochte hai aur ka nahi. Chinta mat kijiye hum aapse naraj nahi hai.. har kisiki apni pasand napasand hoti hai, aapki pasand alag to humari alag.. Hume bura nahi lagta ki hume englis nahi ati kyuki hume uski jaroorat nahi pdi. Aage jake jb hume sikhneka monka milega to hum sikh lenge.. Humto aapho sary bolna chahte the, Aapko hume waha dekhkar achha nahi laga hume pata hai.. firse nahi aayenge hum aapke kaamme koi dakhalandaji karne.. hume niche jana hai .. aap bhi aa jaiye... saying this hse left his room.

Om: "Gauri meri baat to suno.. He tried to speak to her, but she was gone already. He didn't understand what she was actually trying to say. Her language or physical appearance never matter to him. But she thinks so. He has to told her that he didnt feel ashamed of her, but he was going all protective towards her. How will he make her understand that..

After taking shower he went to hall, which was looking like more board meeting room to him.. All were sincerely talking about the Shivika wedding discussion. But his eyes were finding her. It was no place for her due do his big fat family so she was seating down near anika on sofa having anika's arms around her. She was joking with all making fun of shivay. She looks so cute when annika was kissing her on chick & she was making fun of bade bhaiya that she gets kiss os bhojai before her brother.. It was complete bliss to watch her like that. His family love her a lot. He always wanted a wife who loves his family more than him. & there she is respect all her elders with heart, love his brothers as caring sister. Her bond with his mother was as pure as his own . He always knows she is best choice for him. But his mind was behaving like it is on strike. No words come out of his mouth when he wanted to console her.

Om seat near Rudy, everyone was behaving normal with him, so she didn't told anyone anything. Of course gauri was never like that, he know her that much. But shivay was looking upset. He just watch at om & smile little. Shivay was behaving veered.

Two days have been paased after exhibition , but she was behaving normally with him. She was acting like nothing happened between them but one thing was sure she was distancing herself from him emotionally & physically too. She would just ask for his daily needs, & again busy with her shadi preparation. Whenever he tried to make conversation with her she just end it with one or two sentences . It was getting difficult for him to find out solution. What to ask her when she behaving like his roommate not friend not wife, just like stranger who had no other option but to live with you. He first time think that he should talk to shivay about this matter. Shivay was busy from 2 days & has not talk with him properly after exhibition . He immediately went to meet him

Om: "Shivay muze tumse kuch baat krni thi .. Actually humari thik se baat nahi hui 2 dinse.. Are u free now .

Shivay: "Haa om kaho.. Actually I was busy with some meeting .. So whats it

Om : "Actually muze tuzse gauri ke baareme baat krni hai.. . He told him silently.

Shivay: "what about her?? Is she ok?? Kuch hua hai kya use?? he asked her panicking.

Om: "Are nahi .. wo thik hai.. she is sleeping.. muze kuch alag baat krni hai...

Shivay come to know what must be reason oh om's sudden visit at night..

Shivay: "Haa bol.., I hope tune use firse hurt nahi kiya hai??? He asked him sternly .

Om: "Wo exhibition me thodisi misunderstanding ho gai thi, I tried to apologies but she is behaving strange. Baat kar bhi rahi hai to hamesha ki tarah nahi... She is behaving like there is nothing between us.. It scaring me shivay.. . He had tear in his eyes. Shivay was very well aware of his behavior . he can feel that his brother is not going to digest his wife's aloofness.

Shivay: "mai janta hu ki waha kya hua tha om.. I just want to know kit u iss rishtese chahta kya hai?? Why u r confusing her & yourself. Wo bahot straightforward aur simple ladki hai, her self respect matters to her a lot. I just saying ki sort out your feelings about her.. & ha iss bar agar kuch hua to na mai use janese rok paunga na use vaps bula paunga..

Om: "Ye kya keh rha hai shivay.. me use khi nahi jane dunga.. I know I have hurt her too much.. I going to repent it. I cant let her go...

Shivay: "To problem kya hai.. I know u like her a lot , & she is just perfect for you om.. I know you have commitment issues.. But wo tabhi solve honge jb tu use proper chance dega.. Sabko second chances nahi milte om.. Don't let her go like that..

Om: "mai use kahi jaane nahi de rha shivay.. Ha mai is shadiko nahi manta tha, but biwi to meri wohi banegi... He assured shivay smilingly.. Shivay hugged om. He knows his brother wont let gauri away from him.

It was mehandi rasam for shivika.. Gauri was running here & there like running machine.. She wanted everything to be perfect in her bade bhaiya's marriage. One thing she noticed that shivay was not so happy in these days, but today he was smiling whole heartedly .. She was happy for them. God knows why this happiness is not written in her fate, but their happiness was making her happy. She make her way to their room to get ready for function. She was wearing peacock green saari with morpankh design on it. She was so shocked when her bade bhaiya gifted her that in morning. She was feeling essence of omkara in it. Morpankh reminded her their sweet memories.. She was lost in thoughts & didn't notice that he was observing her from door. Actually checking her out shamelessly. After watching her in that saari he has an urge to kiss her immediately. But he make his thoughts away. She is not talking to you

He reminded himself. He was very well aware that his proximity affect her, & there is no other way to make her talk with him. She see him through mirror but doesn't react. She knows he is making efforts to talk with her normally but she didn't want one more heartbreak. She was sure he doesn't want her as his wife maybe attracted towards her, but doesn't consider as his partner. When he stood very closed to her she turn to look at him.

Gauri: "Aapko kuch chahiye.. kapde to dadine de diye the na.. She asked him nervously . But he didn stop. He was actually standing so closed to her, she just take one step back & gets collided with dressing table. She was about to fall when he hold her by waist & pulled towards him. Her hands landed on his chest. He was lost in features, her eyes were shut tightly, her pink lips, cute nose. She opened her eyes & notice he was staring her. She got more conscious .

Gauri: "Hume jana hai niche.. ab hum thik hai, chodiye hume. She literally order him strictly. But om was not in mood of going her so easily.

Om: "ruko na thodi der, bahot dinose humne thikse baat nahi ki.. Om was being stubborn as she was.

Gauri: "Hume koi baat nahi krni aapse.. humari baat ho chuki hai us din.. She was not ready to take any insult from him now. She is not prop to use & throw whenever u want.

Om: "Uss din sirf tumne baat ki thi aur mai sunn rha tha.. aaj muze kuch kehna hai tumse.. He pulled her more closer. She turned her face from him. He was caressing her chicks with his lips. Gauri was getting impatient with his behavior now. What he think of himself. More than him she was frustrated with herself. Why her body reacts to his touches like that.. She come to senses & push him hard getting all her strength.

Gauri: "Aap smjhate ka hai aapne aapko, hum koi khilona nahi hai jo aap humse aise bartav karenge.. Aapki himmat kaise hui hamre paas aaneki.

Om: "Tum muze galat samajh rahi ho gauri.. meri baat to suno.

Gauri: "Hume aapki koi baat nahi sunani hai.. hum aapse door rehna chahte hai.. aap bus hmse door rahiye..

Om: "Par mai tumse door nahi rehna chahta.. muze tumhare paas rehna hai.. Gauri was beyond shocked with his statement.

Gauri: "hume pata hai aap hum eek giri hui ladki smjhate the par hume laga tha ki aapki galatfamy dur ho hai hai.. par nahi aap to waisehi sochte hai hmare baareme..

Om: "Gauri kya bakwaas kar rhi ho. Mai tumhare bare me aise nahi sochta samjhi... He again hold her in his arms, not letting her go in between conversation.

Gauri: "Hume nahi pta aap ka chahte hai.. bus hume jane dijiye yhase, aap hume biwi nahi mante to aapko koi haq nahi hai hume chhuneka She was directly looking at his eyes, not frightened at all.

Om: "Par ab me wo haq pana chahta hu.. tumhe apna banana chahta hu.. he replied calmly. But gauri was not in situation to take his words.

Gauri: "Achankse aap ko hum achche lagne lage , aaj kamreme hai to achche lag rahe hai.. Aur bahr ek chaywale ko aap nahi keh pate ki hum aapki biwi hai...

Om get to know the reason behind her upset face when they were back from trip. She always wanted acceptance from him, nothing else.

Om: "I am sorry .. maine bahot hurt kiya hai na tumhe, tumhe muze jo saja deni hai tum do.. I know I have been always jerk to you..

Gauri: "Aap apni jagah par sahi hai aur hum apni, aap hume apne layk nahi samajhte.. koi baat nahi.. waise bhi 2 din ki baat hai.. sab thik ho jayega uske baad, Aapko aur hume is takleef se chutkara mil jayega..

His grip on her get loose listening her sentence ..

Om: "Kya matlab hai tumhara.. kya krne wali ho 2 dinme..

Gauri: "Hum ja rahe hai yhase omkaraji.. Ab aapko humse ,hmare is unchahe rishtese koi problem nahi hogi.. She was not looking him now.. it was causing her pain too.

How can she leave him. But she has every right to leave him. He was causing her pain all this while. He was just staring at her. Unable to think what to do.. He free her from his hold. She looked at him. He was looking so pale, so lifeless. Even though so much happen in between them she was unable to look at him like this.

Gauri: "Aap chinta mat kijiye aapko koi aapke jaise padhi-likhi samajdaar ladki mil jayegi.. She smiled at him gently.

Om: "Aur agar muze kisi barellyki chiraiyake sath rehna ho to..?? Agar muze meri biwike sath rehna ho to.. He asked her innocently.

Gauri: "Aap humse pyar nahi krte, aapko hume jabardasti aapnaneki jaroorat nahi.. She freed herself from him & stared to go out. She stopped at door when she heard big sound.

She look back at him. He has been collapsed on floor. "Omkaraji... ka hua aapko She asked him going towards him. She checked him if anything hurted him, she cupped his face.. "Kaa hua.. aap thik hai na..

he buried his face in her lap.. Om: "Mat jao gauri.. mai nahi jee paunga tumhare bina.. tum meri takat ho.. muze nahi pata tumhare bina kaise jina hai.. Tum wo purane om ko vaps jina sikhaya hai.. tum muze kuch bhi sja dedo par ye choke janewali baat mat kro.. mai nahi she paunga..

She was crying seeing him like that. "Par aapne kaha tha aapke dilme hamre liye loi jagah nahi omkaraji, fir achank se kaise... She didn't get words to ask him.

Om look at her: "Muze nahi pata ki muze tumse kab pyar ho gaya.. Tumhare English se ya phir dressing se muze kbhi koi problem nahi hui. Muze pata hai kit um alag ho baki sabse.. Dil ki itni achchi ki har kisiko apne dilme jagah dede.. mere liye dumhara sachcha dil matter krta hai.. Exhibition me bhi maine tumhe isliye wok ha tha ki muze bahot gussa aagaya tha jis terh wo tumhe insult karneki koshish kar rahe the.. Mai tumhe waha dekhakr upset isliye hua tha ki tumne pehle kbhi media handle nahi kiya., I don't like there fake concerns, fake questions.. mai bus tumhe unse door rakhna chahta tha.. I didn't wanted u to get humiliate because of him.. m so sorry.. He was telling her so sincerely . She was lost in her eyes.. She was so happy that he started to love her.. She was already on seventh heaven.

Gauri: "Aap ye sab kisi majboorime to nahi keh rhe na.. she asked him innocently to confirm again.. " kyoki hume apna dil firse nahi tudwana..

Om just bent little and gently started kissing on her lips. She didn't move back. It was pure bliss for both of them. " mai tumhara dil phir kbhi nahi dukhaunga.. kabhi nahi He told her & she knows he really mean it. She take him in tight hug "Aur hum aapko kabhi tutne nahi denge... She assured him... & he felt like he was the happiest man on earth.. " to chale niche mrs. Oberoi.. mehandi me mera naam bhi to likhwana hai.. He told her making her all blush..


How is it.. Do like & comments guys..😊

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was such an Amazing os..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was so amazing,I really wanted to read something after today's scene.You bring out emotions so beautifully.This was a fantastic read though it was a one shot.Maybe you can continue with an alternate scenario where she actually questions him or gives him a cold shoulder and leave so Omkara can understand what he wants from gauri.Waiting for the update of your other TS.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: asrkasr

This was so amazing,I really wanted to read something after today's scene.You bring out emotions so beautifully.This was a fantastic read though it was a one shot.Maybe you can continue with an alternate scenario where she actually questions him or gives him a cold shoulder and leave so Omkara can understand what he wants from gauri.Waiting for the update of your other TS.


thanku so much..😊 i am writing part 2 for TS. will update it soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tinuu555


thanku so much..😊 i am writing part 2 for TS. will update it soon..



Looking forward to the update and do consider writing a SS on these lines bcoz getting a monologue of Omkara and seeing his possessive side seems a far fetched dream in show.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I love how you have Om actually making an effort here, which we haven't really seen on screen, because his thoughts are still partial mystery to us. Thank you for the lovely OS, you're very talented 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: kashishsr

I love how you have Om actually making an effort here, which we haven't really seen on screen, because his thoughts are still partial mystery to us. Thank you for the lovely OS, you're very talented 😊


Thanku so much.. 😊 It means a lot.. I always wanted to om share her feelings in most subtle way, no melodrama just his pure feelings for her.. I just tried some bits of it.. Love Rikara so much..They make me write such things😆😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing os!!
Loved it.
Very beautifully written.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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loved it so much n even bookmarked it. simlpy awesome.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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beautiful OS! you stayed true to their characters and gave us all that the fandom wants to see! thankyou! omkara pining for his love and begging gauri to stay back is a real treat!
alo ShivRi!!❤️ they are just adorable together in every way!

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