Pt 21 Updated Pg 146: Predator Turns Prey Advni FF - Page 15

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OMG what a scintillating update
Her wait and anticipation for him
The small post it notes
Her seeing the clock and impatience
Her eagerness to make something for him
I loved all of these

Then her heart break at Leela words
The crashing of her dreams
That was too painful

Advay came and saw all that
And was very displeased
He was almost angry with Leela
His own words came back to bite him

How sweetly he apologised and broke the ice
I loved how he saved her head from getting hurt

I knew he will make her eat with him
Slowly his heart is melting
The noodle eating scene was so sensual
There was nothing steamy but raw passion

That scene created butterflies in my tummy
The tension between them was so thick
It could be cut with a knife

Advni were flowing with their emotions
And eating from the same plate

Advay must have been surprised to hear her
Talk about Dev with such a fondness
I loved how easy the conversation was flowing between them

And then came the jealousy part
When Advay talked about her
And she was jealous of herself
Where as talking of Dev only made him happy
Such a contrast to their childhood talks

Advay understood he affected her
The same way she affected him
I love how possessively he filled her maang with sindoor

Adi became the kabab me gaddi this time ?
That is so unnatural

Smashing update Chitra
So many under currents here
continue soon

I love this title
And the one u suggested too
So u can keep any one
I love them both

nice chitra!! good conflict of emotions in advay!!! and leela maasi ko slap milega advay se tumhare ff mein aisa lag raha hai!!! 😊

but but as juhi said yeh tho pg 13 hai but i forgive you kaahe ki action too soon is also not romantic... it has to build up to a crescendo and then of course we can get sexy pay off!!! 😳

Man I read this ff of ur chitz

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Nice
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Guys, thanks

waiting for your take chitra!! will watch the episode only based on ur take!!! 😊

Mindblowing update Chits