Rikara TS: I am feeling Complete with You

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello guys.. I am back with Rikara TS.. It can contains 2 or 3 shots.. Again just randomly one thought came across my mind & I tried to write. Please show your love to this story too.. No proof reads & sorry for grammatical mistakes..

This story starts after Rikara steps into Oberoi mansion & face Peter & kavery drama.. I am posting first part today.. This part deals with mostly omkara's feelings..

I am feeling Complete with You

Om was checking Gauri in between while driving.. It has been 3 hours he has continuously driving. They were successful to ditch Balram & his goons & make their way to Mumbai. But when he thinks about their whole trip he came to conclusion that he can't loose Gauri at any cost. His heartbeats were nearly stopped when she became unconscious due to fire & smoke. His mad girl didn't care anything other than his family & most importantly him.. He has been always aware that even she said she is returned as just bahu of this family, but she cares for him like he is her only lifeline. Sometimes he just got awestruck with the amount of trust she always shows on him. On the other hand he had been always misunderstood her, treated her in very bad manner.. He was thinking how to ease the things between them? How he will make understand his insecurities about husband- wife relation. How he will show her the damage caused by his father's affair on his family & him. He was aware that she needs her answers to stay with him , but he was not able to speak his feelings with her. I will try to make things work between us Gauri, he promised himself caressing her forehead. She smiled slightly at his touch. He wondered how can she recognize him so easily. Thought of having someone like her in his life brought happiness on his face.

They reached oberoi mansion . Everyone was there to welcome them at door. All of them were so happy after seeing them safe after Dangal incident. Dadi did their aarti with Shiv-Parvati murti & blessed them with her aashirvad. Om somewhat sense there is some problem but he was distracted by Shivay.

Shivay: "Tum dono thik to ho na.. Jyada chot to nhi ayi na.. He asked Om & Gauri hugging them one after another.. "Aur gauri tum salman ki kitni badi fan ho ye har bar dikhane ki jaroorat nahi hai samjhi.. Kya jaroorat thi tumhe uss pehelwan se ladneki.. he asked her taking into soothing hug.

"Are bade bhaiya .. Hum dabang sirf namke nahi hai.. Omkaraji ko chot lagi thi isliye hum gaye the ladne.. Aap humari jagah hote aap bhi yhi krte na?? She asked him innocently.

Shivay: "Haa wo bhi sahi hai.. par meri behen ko kuch ho jata to.. tum phir aisa koi stunt nhi karogi smjhi.. he warned her strictly. & both smiled sweetly at each other.

Om: "Ye sahi hai.. bhai bhi ladke aaya hai lekin kisiko sirf apne behenki pdi hai.. ghor kalyug aa gaya hai om complained ..

Rudy: "Are o mai hu na.. aap thik to ho??.mai aapse pyarse puch raha hu na. He asked him & jump to kiss him on chicks forcibly.

Om: "Shut up rudy.. aur ye kiss mat kiya kar yaar.. Om said annoyingly .

Rudy: "Ha sab smajh me aa rha hai muze.. ab meri kiss thodi na achhi lagegi.. ye department to ab chulbul bhabhi sambhalengy. Hai na..

Om stood shocked at his statement. Gauri was blushing furiously .. All others were laughing at Rudy's antics. "Teri chulbul bhabhi bas pepper spray used krna janti hai muzpar, kiss viss krna nahi om muttered under his teeth.

Om: "Rudy tu bahot pitega aaj. Om started to beat him but he ran away..

Dadi: "Ab bs kro tum sab.. Om gauri tum dono kamreme jao aur aaram kro. Iski bakwas to aise hi chalni hai.. Aur tum dono ye murti itni mushkilonse laye ho to tum dono hi shamko is murti ki pehali pooja karoge.

Gauri: "Par dadi ye to hum Bade bhaiya aur bhojai keliye laye the to wo dono pooja karenge to hume jyada achha lagega.. She told dadi sincerely . Om was proudly looking at his tiny wife. She is such gem of person. He knows that he don't have any reason to not love her. He was falling for her, her every gesture towards him & his family was making him fall for hard.

Dadi : "Haa bache.. Par pehli pooja tum krlo.. Shivay aur Anika unki shadi ke baad pehli pooja iss murti ki karenge .. thik hai.. tu pareshan mat ho.

Gauri nods silently. Again she thought something and look at Omkara.. Omkaraji ko sayad ye pooja hamre sath krna pasand nahi aayega.. hum unse baat kr lete hai.. All people retarded to their rooms. Om & gauri also headed towards their room. In room she asked him:

Gauri: "Omkaraji hum jante hai aap humare sath wo pooja nahi krna chahte.. humne dadiko mana kiya jb hme badme yad aya pr dadi nahi mani..

Om's POV : koi itna innocent kaise ho sakta hai Gauri.. Tumhe aisa lag rha hai ki muze tumhare sath pooja krne me koi problem hai. Har baar mere baareme khudse pehle sochti ho tum. Mai ye pooja karunga tumhare sath. Jaroor karunga..

Om: "Nahi muze karni hai pooja.. hum shamko saathme pooja karenge.. tum abhi aaram krlo..

Gauri: "Aapko jabardasti humare sath pooja me bethaneki jaroorat nahi hai omkaraji..

Om: "Mai kisi jabardasti me nahi keh rha gauri.. Muze tumhare sath pooja karni hai isliye maine tumse kaha.. Ab soo jao thodi der.. Mai shivayse imp baat krne ja rha hu.. Aake baat krte hai..

Asking her for sleep he went to meet shivay.

Sivay: "Are om. Aa na .. mai tuzse hi baat krne aane wala tha..

Om: "Shivay muze aisa kyu lag raha tha kit um sab muzse kuch chupa rhe the.. Jobhi baat hai tu muzse kr skta hai.. koi problem hui he kya??

Shivay was thinking how to tell Om about Peter-Kavery drama.. Finally he decides to tell om.

Shivay: "thik hai.. par muze usase pehle tuzse kuch puchna hai.. Gauri aur tere bich ki job hi problems hai.. Did u try to sort that out..??

Om: "I tried shivay.. par use thikse smjha nahi paa rha.. on time kuch ulta sidha bol deta hu & she gets hurt with my words..

Shivay: "wo dikhati nahi hai om , but mai use aise sad nahi dekh pata hu.. u know I consider her as my sister. Uski aankhose pta chal jata hai ki wo tuzse kuch confirmation chahti hai teri tarafse.. Aisa na ho ki wo forse chodke chali jaye shadi ke baad..

Om: "Nahi shivay.. kya bol rha hai.. I can't afford to loose her.. mai kaise rahoonga uske bina.. om blurt out panicking..

Shivay just smiled at his brother.. "mere bhai yhi baat to usko jake batani hai..

Om: "Pata hai yar.. but muze darr lag rha hai.. I don't know hum iss rishteko kaise nibha payenge.. But yes I will try my best to convey my feeling to her.. Wo sab chod .. ye bata ghar me sb thik nahi lag rha.. Dadi bhi tension me lag rhi thi what happened??

Shivay: "Actually om.. dekh pehme promise me kit u hyper nahi hoga aur gussa nahi karega.. bus bhot dhyan se meri baat sun..

Om: "Aisi kya baat hai jo khud SSO muze shant reheneko keh rha hai .

Shivay: "Wo swetlana bade papake sath firse ghar me ghus gai hai & she is black mailing him ..

Om: "How dare they.. Tumne use ghar me ghusane kaise diya.. I will throw her out immediately Om was angry beyond level.. He didn't want see face of that women who destroyed his family his happiness.. "Aur mr. oberoi ye unka koi naya natak hoga.. I have warned him already..

Shivay cut him in between.. & told him all the saga of Peter-Kavery drama.. He also told him that Tej is doing this to save Jahnavi.. This make om little bit calm.

Om: "But shivay mai us aurat ko apni aankhoke samne bardasht nahi kr paunga.. usne life destroy krdi momki, & she tried to kill Gauri.. I am not going to live her in Oberoi mansion.. Agar usne firse Gauriko nuksaan pohochaneki koshish ki to.. I cant risk her life shivay.. Pichli baar wo dhamki deke gayi thi Gauriko.. use kuch ho gya to..

Shivay: "Don't panic Om.. Tumhare hote hue, hum sabke hote hue Gauriko kuch nahi hoga.. hum use kuch nahi hone denge.. Hume bas ye sab bahot dhyanse handle krna hai.. Try to understand om, badi ma aur papa dono ka sawal hai..

Om: "Thik hai, tu agar keh rha hai to mai abhi kuch nahi kahoonga.. but I swear agar usne Mom , Gauri , ya kisiko kuch krneki ki koshish ki to mai use nahi chodunga..

Shivay: "Aur Gauri ko bhi abhi pata nahi hai.. tu use smjha dena.. thik hai.. dekhna wo dare nahi.. Last time swetlana ne use hi sbse jyada pareshan kiya tha..

Om: "She will not scared but wo kahi dekhake khud hi swetlana ko 2-4 zap na laga de..

Shivay: "Wo bhi sahi hai.. Dabang Gauri & her crazy plans.. Shivay tried to lightened the moment.. "Bhavya aur rudy uske khilaf proofs dhoond rahe hai.. Hum sb milke sort out kar lenge.. He assured om.

This is part one.. I will post part 2 soon.. enjoy

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Posted: 8 years ago
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wow nice one on current track its awsome
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg..finally they reached OM..
Family part was lovely..
Great omkara wants to do puja with..waiting for the puja
He sensed something was wrong and talked to shivaye.. kitna panic ho rahaa tha gauri ke liyehayee show mein bhi kash aisa mil jaye
Loved rudy's part also..that kiss walaa part😆
Waiting for the moment when gauri get to know about peter swami and kaveri darling..waiting for her dabangg plans and styles
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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m loving it. would eagerly wait for next update.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update yar
it was superb...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This was an amazing start.You should really turn this into an SS.This plot has so nuch potential,one can have protective Omkara and then I would also like to see gauri's insecurities playing about since shvetlana can be nasty and hit the mark when she wants too.Maybe not love but the realisation of what all she went trgh. update Soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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So finally they returned to oberoi mansion..I just loved the CaringKara..he isn't expressive at all...but his every gesture proves how much he love her...excited for the pooja..and hope we'll see the ProtectiveKara...I desperately want Lana to hurt Gauri..phir Omkie Shomkie will do tottey tottey of that botox ki devi..continue soon...

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