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Posted: 8 years ago

Chap 17

Hii rashmi 😊
Oh my god wht update so shocking 😲
Don't lik it... This Ja... Argh
I knew it he will escape... He is the main villain Hw cn he easily gt arrested 😔
M nt liking him a bit... He is heart less man
Oh god lik all said Hw CUNNING he was... He knew very well Jo is soft hearted person n she cnt tk all torcher on her friends family much Longer... N he took advantage of it... Cha
Oh god he slapped Jo too n he claims he Loves her... Well slap is small things he already torched her so much n it will nt stop here... Hw must hv thought Much more fr her... M really scared fr her... God save her... Now she herself swear she nvr try to escape the means she will nvr... God
Oh my god... He claims himself friend... Lik seriously n he shot him...demon... Hate him...

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Chap 18
Awesome update rashmi 😊
See just reaching house... He strt torching her.. Knew it..
God... Wht happen to him... Y cnt he gt it tht she is a girl... A human who breath she is nt a thing... He cnt force anyone to Love him... N if a person lik him... Well then ther is No question of Love him thn... Even aftr Abdul try to mk him understand but this man... Nothing is going in his head... Argh...
Thank God Ajay n veer operated n now all OK... Thy safe
Poor priya... She too suffering bcz of tht man... Frst due to his brother thy all in this mess n now tht man use her feeling to against them all... N poor she strt cursing herself fr all this... Hw I wish Abdul nvr told this to tht man...
Veer Ajay priya Jo n ther Bond... Ja talk abut Love if he want to know abut Love he should learn Frm them... Thy all r cursing herself fr all this mess n thy all r ready to do to keep safe each other... Thts called Love... Nt tht obsession... Due to which he just hurting the one whom he claim love... Devil
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Chap 19


Awesome update rashmi 😊
But painful fr Jo bcz of Jo...
Thank God Ajay n veer gt conscious...
Feel so bad fr Ajay... Whtever it is Jo is his real sis or nt but fr him she is more than important fr anything... Seeing his Love n care fr him... It's so touching... Ther Bond
Veer is so scared tht now Jo will nt love him bcz she loves priya more than him... N previous chap priya was too scared fr tht reason...
Aww... I seriously love ther Bond Rashmi... This is called Friendship this is called Love... I love the veer Ajay n priya part... True bond
I wish Abdul to understand tht friendship is nt tht u help ur friend in his wrong path but it is tht u help him u let him drag him in on right path n fr tht if u hv to hurt ur friend u should... I wish he understands this... Thn myb Jo was nt in his CAGE
I agree Abdul try to mk him understand but he didn't giv 100% on it...
Woah... Ajay now in full form all set to Face off with Ja again mk Jo free Frm his cluth... N he strt his work frst he send Priya n veer... Now no obstacles in his path... Ja always use veer n priya fr his shield n mk Jo emotionally weak... Now both r far n this Tim he is tking safety majors... Hope this Tim Ja gt no clue abut them...
Now all set fr JA n Ajay Face off... Interesting šŸ˜‰
Hey by the way who is tht person... Keeping eye on Ja??? Who's helping Ajay?? Y I feel is we going to get another shock on nxt chap šŸ˜‰
M waiting 😃
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Please update soon šŸ˜‰
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Jalal has recaptured Jodha and is keeping her with him against her will.

We have two powerful adversaries , who were friends once, in a do or die mission for the sake of one girl - who is a sister to one and the love of his life to another.

Chapters 16-19 : absolutely thrilling all!šŸ‘


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Chapter 20

Jodha said : please for once let me talk to him I promise I will never ask anything from you please just once.

Jalal said : I said no means no now come and have breakfast with us .

Jodha said : you are heartless devil you don't love me you can't even fulfill my one wish and you want me to do as you want i am human I have feeling to I to feel pain I just want to know that they are fine or not and you jerk didn't even letting me talk to them why why I don't want to have anything with you I hate you I hate you get it I don't even want to spend a second with you .

(saying this she run to upstairs and goes to one room and started crying and listening her words Jalal get angry he goes to the room and saw her crying he goes towards her and hugged her).

Jalal said : you don't want to spend a second with me baby girl but now you have to spend your rest of life with me and what you called me heartless devil jerk then you should know that devil always give punishment not is it and yesterday I told you some rules right and you forget them so soon baby girl and now I will punish you for disrespecting me.

(he said all this in very dangerously and yet sternly voice that can make any person scared and Jodha is no less she already very scared of him and listening this she started shivering with fear and tried to come out from his huge but he is more powerful than her she Didn't get success when suddenly he pushed her towards door and she was about to fall when two arms caught her carefully and hugged her and seeing the men Jalal get shocked to the core and somehow seeing his angry bloodshot red eyes Jalal get scared first time in his life then he in calm voice).

Jalal said : what are you doing here and how did you come here what you want Mr Singhnia.

Ajay Said : Angel go to my car which is outside now I will handle him.

Jalal said : dare you put your foot out of this room baby girl or else the consequence will be bad.

Ajay Said : you go I said and don't worry today he can't do anything .

Jalal said : I always can do anything I want and you are not going anywhere .

(both were glaring at each other and there angry voice is making Jodha more scared sh don't know whom she should listen her Brother or Jalal she looked at both but none were looking at her but both were dominating her with there words when she again heard Ajay voice ).

Ajay Said : Kabir take her out right now.

Jalal said : Dare you touch her .

(but Kabir didn't heard his warning and take Jodha out from there and before Jalal could do anything Ajay give him a powerful Punch on his face and because of that Jalal lips and nose started breeding Jalal to give him Punch but Ajay block it by his one hand and give him a solid punch on his stomach and because of that Jalal spit some blood out of his mouth but Ajay didn't stop there he signal his one men and getting that his men shot Jalal on his both leg and hands and because of that Jalal cried in pain).

Ajay Said : how are you feeling now let me guess it is like hell to you right you know just like that I felt yesterday when you front of my eyes slap my angel and shot Veer and manipulate her to agree with your condition you know I felt most helpless men in the word I was feeling like die that time and now you are feeling that not is it well leave it I don't want to waste my precious time on useless people like you let's go boys our work is done .

(saying this Ajay left from there with his men and goes to his car where Jodha was waiting for him he sit besides her and hugged her and looked at her then in loving voice).

Ajay Said : you are fine angel I was so much scared for you did he forced himself on you Angel tell me everything what he Did and what not.

Jodha said : no no he Didn't he just slapped me and poured cold water on me then clean my wound and give medicine to me then slept hugging me tight but today when I ask him to let me talk to you he denied it so in anger I called him heartless devil jerk and run to the room and he get angry on me and going to punish me when you came.

(listening this he get teary and again hugged her tight when she winch in pain he broke the hug and looked at her and saw he knees are bleeding he looked at her in curious way).

Jodha said : actually yesterday when we reach here he was angry so he pushed me on hard floor very roughly so I get injured a little .

Ajay Said you are saying it's little you even know what you are saying .

Jodha said : please leave it tell me how is Veer he is fine or not and how are you .

Ajay Said : they are fine and about me you tell me how I am looking fine or not leave it tell me do you want to talk to Veer and Priya.

Jodha said : no I don't want to talk to anyone now I just want to be with you .

(and other side Abdul take Jalal to hospital where Doctor started treating him and he is praying to God for him and crushing himself for his condition and thought I wish I didn't do that then he will be not in this condition).

(other side Jodha and Ajay reach there another farmhouse and the Ajay turned to Jodha and in loving voice).

Ajay Said : take rest I will be back in sometime okay .

(and saying this he goes from there and in half an hour reach the hospital and goes towards Abdul and when he saw him).

Abdul said : now what you want whatever you did it's not enough that you again come here .

Ajay Said : stop your melodrama and give me information about his illegal business.

Abdul said : and you really think I will give that to you who is his enemy you are forgetting Mr Singhnia that he is my best friend and you hurt him.

Ajay Said : oh really please don't called yourself his best friend okay you don't even know the meaning of friendship or love.

Abdul said : how dare you .

Ajay Said : why are you getting angry I didn't said anything wrong you are not friend what type of friend you are who didn't stop him taking wrong path who himself support him in every illegal work you very well knew that he loves his family but you ever thought about them that what will happen if they come to know that there honest sharp minded son is now most wanted gangster did you ever thought what will Salima do if she comes to know about your real profession wow what a human you both are one is making fool and an is forcing that to the one whom they love like seriously and you are talking about friendship .

Abdul said : now I am is only at fault .

Ajay Said : yes if you are his friend then why didn't you stop him doing all this.

Abdul said : and why Did you shot him .
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ek dam unexpected Twist šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
Jalal toh Ajay se bhi smart nikla 🤣

Poor jodha 😭😭
has to suffer so much 😭😭
I thought now Jalal will make her fell like he love her but here he is giving her more and more pain 😭😭
First he is torturing her and in future he will be tortured in hands of God 😭😭

Abdul is right...He should help Jalal to see the situations in right way
I just hope Ajay find jodha and help in her rescue and Jalal could never find Jodha till he get completely changed 😔😔
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Update please 😊
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Chapter 21
Ajay said : I already told you I was angry at that time I didn't had any Intention to shot him and you can trust me on this now tell me the secrets of his illegal business.

(and then Abdul told him everything about his secret business then Ajay in concern voice).

Ajay said : how is he now .

Abdul said : don't know Doctors are still treating him .

Ajay said : don't worry he will be fine they are the best doctors who were treating him and don't forget he is fighter he will fight for his life now sit here I will be back in few Minutes okay.

(Abdul nodded And Ajay left from there goes out of the hospital then called his trusted officers and told them everything and according to there plan they start there task to finish all that after finishing the call Ajay goes to Abdul And Brought some food for him to after he reach there he saw him sitting on chair with closed eyes silent tears are flowing from his eyes he goes to him and in calm voice).

Ajay said : don't cry Abdul he will be fine stay strong.

Abdul Said : operation is done and it is successful to but.

Ajay said : but but what tell me but what .

Abdul said : We have four hours till then he will be under observation and in that time he have to get his sense back or he can go to coma .

Ajay said : we have four hours Abdul and don't you trust on god it will be fine hope for best now leave all that and eat something you are not fine have something then we will go to see him okay now eat for me please.

(Abdul nodded and started eating the food then both goes to the room where Jalal was then both sit on left and right near his bed and take his hands in there then Abdul in crying voice).

Abdul said : wake up Buddy you can't leave me you promised me that you will always be with me right then how could you do that wake up now then we will meet your Parents and Mirza , Bakshi to and have lot's of fun to we will be happy like before wake up buddy open your eyes and tease me for Crying Wake up.

(seeing all this Ajay to Started crying and felt guilty for his act but composing himself he in calm voice).

Ajay said : I know you can't respond to my words But you can heard me right please Jalal please forgive me for doing that to you I am sorry Jalal I was mad in rage that time I didn't knew what is right or wrong I just wanted give you Pain like you did to Jodha Priya Veer And me I know you love her but what were you doing it didn't called love buddy you were scaring her torturing her manipulate her giving pain to her and the people we love can't give them pain Can't see the fear in there eyes we can't get there love by force and you were not understanding this simple thing I know it was painful for you to see her with someone else but she ware happy with him and you snatch her happiness don't you want her happiness don't you want that she love you on her own and by doing that you can just get her but not her love Jalal and i can't see her suffering in pain you know one scratch on her and my whole body burn in fire and you front of my eyes slapped her grabbed her hair tightly just seeing her tears I died thousands times in one minutes and you, did you ever felt guilty giving pain to her no in fact you were enjoying all that you were giving punishment to her and you want her to listen to your every words and do all the things according to you it was not right and you know that Jalal but you didn't give shit to her thought pain tears pleading wishes did you Just think seeing your family wounded you want to take revenge and for that you become gangster and seeing her in pain what i was going through did you thought no no no you didn't thought yesterday what you called her selfish right but in my opinion you are selfish not she because she never knew that Priya loves Veer if she knew then she never loved him you know why because she loved them just like Priya she didn't confess to Veer about her love Because she loved them to that called love Jalal for our loved ones happiness sacrifice your happiness bu you don't understand that you did what you think is right but now if you change yourself like my best friend Akbar then I will let you meet her but not to you Because I hate you get it I destroyed your whole illegal Business you can start your new life like before and i will help you with that and one more thing you still have your business which you start by those money okay and pleas try to understand your family want there son back not Gangster okay wake up we need you wake up your family need you wake up your friend need you Jalal wake up Please don't let me die in guilt for killing you Please forgive me Please wake up.

(Ajay and Abdul both were crying grabbing his hand and didn't saw that Jalal was woke up And listening there talks and he is crying to seeing his both best friend crying and His heart shouted at him look what you did in your revenge and so called love you destroyed yourself and somewhat Jodha to and your friends to suffering because of you Just because of you now do something right . But then his Mind shouted no no no don't feel guilty what ever you did was right this world don't deserve good don't you saw what had happen when you tried to punish those criminal those officer punish you and if it was not your plan the they should killed you before not is it and whatever you did to Jodha is right to don't you know everything is fair in love and war you do tried to make her understand but she didn't listen to did she so she deserve to punish it's not wrong . again his heart Shouted at Him don't listen to him can't you see how much Ajay did for you when you were busy in your so called revenge he treat your parents and look he is feeling guilty for hurting you when you were the one who hurt him the most you hurt his sister your men shot him to and still he is here and asking forgiveness to you please don't do anything stupid which later you regret . again his mind shouted no Jalal don't listen to him he always make you week didn't you saw whenever you tried to be gentle with Jodha she always make you fool and run from you and you ask Ajay to in many times by love but he to enjoy your Pleading and look he destroyed your business to so that you don't become more powerful then him he is not your friend and after lot of argument between his heart and mind his Mind won the fight and his bloody ego get satisfied and he planed something and in low voice).

Jalal said : will you really help me with all this Ajay I need your help.

(listening his voice Abdul and Ajay Both looked at him and get happy to see him awake but after few minutes Ajay get shocked to understand his words and looked at him like tried to understand is he really wanna change or playing game with him but looking at his teary eyes he thought that he really want to change so e in happy Voice).

Ajay said : yes I will help you and that's my promise but first Please forgive me for hurting you I never want to hurt you It was just.

(but before he could complete what he have to say Jalal again in low voice).

Jalal said : no need to ask sorry I deserve that whatever I did to you and her I really need Punishment so don't feel guilty for what you did okay .

Abdul said : okay leave all that you take some rest and let me called the doctor to check you okay.

Ajay said : no you stay her I should called the Doctor and yes you take rest Jalal.

(saying this he left from there and Abdul looked at Jalal then in calm Voice).

Abdul said : I am so happy to see you fine you know I was so much scared I thought that I will lost you but you are fine now but I have one question do you really want to change or it is your another plan If you are really want to change then I am so happy for you but if it is your another plan then I am not going to help you this time get it .

Jalal said : no I really want to change actually now I am tired from all this I want my life back .

Abdul said : Welcome back my friend you don't know how happy I am to know this now Love you Buddy.

(after few minutes Ajay come with Doctor then Doctor Check him and in happy voice).

Doctor said : great now you are fine but you have to take rest here and after few days you can get discharge from here for sure okay .

Ajay said : thank you so much doctor .

Doctor said : no need for that Mr Singhania it was my responsiblity to do that now excuse me.

Ajay said : wait doctor I have to discuss something with you and Jalal now you take rest I will be back tomorrow to meet you okay bye .

(with that he left with doctor from there and after asking some question He left for farmhouse where Jodha was waiting for him he reach there in half an hour and saw her siting on sofa he goes to her and sit besides her).

Ajay said : why didn't you slept and did you eat something or not .

Jodha said : I don't want to eat something and I didn't getting sleep Bhai I am scared .

Ajay said : don't worry Nothing will happen okay and I am with you now let's eat something because rats are doing racing in My tummy and I am sure you re hungry to so let's eat something come.

(and saying this he take her to dinning room where servant were arranging food then both sit on the chair and Ajay make her eat food by his hands then she to make him eat food after finishing that he take her to his room and make her laid down on bed and covered her with Blanket and in loving Voice).

Ajay said : now close your eyes and tried to sleep.

Jodha said : But I am not getting sleep Bhai.

Ajay said : then leave let's talk something okay.

Jodha said : okay .

Ajay said : you don't want to meet Veer and Priya neither you want to talk can i know the reason Angel.

Jodha said : more then Veer I love Priya and After knowing that she love Veer I don't want to come between them and now you will say she love them before did she ever come between me and him no but if I will be with them then Veer will never love her And I don't want that.

Ajay said : I understand your feelings but don't you think you are doing wrong with Veer I mean Priya loves him but he don't love her like Jalal Love you but you Don't Love him It is one sided Love And with you and Veer love feelings are mutual don't you think the decision have to be mutual to okay tell me can you ever love someone else like you do Veer will you ever move on in your life Angel no right then how can you think Veer who loves you more then his life will love anyone accept you Angel.

Jodha said I don't know But I think In future they can be with each other Bhai ad pleas don't say that devil loves me he don't if he loves me then he never forced me Bhai he is dangerous and I am scared of him I never want to see him Bhai never ever I hate him by bottom of my heart I hate him.

Ajay said : okay leave that but please talk to veer and then take your decision about this okay and now sleep good night Angel.

Jadha said : Good night Bhai.

(saying this he get up and of the light of his room and goes out of his room and saw Kabir waiting for him then he goes to him).

Ajay said : Did you send them safely and why you didn't slept .

Kabir Said : yes I send them safely and I was waiting for you Because they want to talk to you .

(saying this he handover him his cell and Ajay take that).

Veer said : Hello did you Find her how is she .

Priya said : can we talk to her .

Veer said : and when can we meet her .

Priya said : why are you Not saying anything.

Ajay said : oh my romeo And Hitler when you both will stop then I will talk right.

Priya said : don't tease us answer what we ask Idiot.

Ajay said : yes I find her and she is fine to and now she is sleeping and very soon you all will meet her now tell me you both are fine or not.

Veer Said : yes we are fine we just reach here in evening .

Priya said : Is she Angry on me What she Said about all this.

Ajay Said : I am glad to know that you both are fine and no she is not angry with you both and she just want sometime to think about all this now enough go both of you And take rest we will talk later okay Good night.

(with that both cut the call then he give the cell back to Kabir).

Ajay said : now you to take rest it's really late .

Kabir said : Sir now everything is fine then why are you looking worried is there something wrong.

(listening Kabir he told them about his conversation which he had with Jalal in hospital and listening this Kabir get shocked then he in calm voice).

Kabir said : so it is good thing sir that now he want to change then why are you worried.

Ajay said : the fact is I don't trust on his words I know him from College time he always take decision by mind and to tell you Kabir his mind is very cunning what if it was his plan or something.

Kabir said : you are right Sir then what are you going to do now.

Ajay Said : I don't know but one thing is I will not let him meet her for sure so tomorrow I will send her there to meet them for sure and about him I will observe him and then take my action according to situation now go and take rest it's really late good night.

(saying this Ajay goes to another room to sleep and Kabir to left to take rest).
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 8 years ago
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when ajay got shot he is fine and punching next day
but jalal can slip into coma.He is a gangster but their is not any sort of men for his protection.
Do Write some reality in this story please

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