Shivika OS: Soothing The Blemish

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yaay... I am first to reply.
I am happy that you are back with this shot. I didn't expect you to write so soon as your university has started. I was literally jumping like a small kid when I saw this post of yours.

I really really loved this shot. As you have already mentioned we have always seen Shivaay taking care of everyone but he being taken care like a child by Annika is something so sweet and it did potray Annika's strong personality and also the depth of love she has for this person.
We know Shivaay as a person of extremities. His guilt ridden side would be exactly similar to what you have explained. He would never show it before his family or Annika. But Annika being Annika will always realise that. I also loved that the talk happened in the pool. Water has so much connection coming to Shivika that it almost symbolises their relationship and journey.

Thank you for this wonderful shot.
Edited by ithihaas - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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amazing you have given us what the show cvs had missed
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Posted: 8 years ago
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absolutely beautiful piece of work my love. ❤️

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Mushfika, this is gorgeous!!! Gave me hearty eyes you did...thank you!! Love your writing style.. looking forward to more.. no pressure..😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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There are times when I have lots to say and then there are times when I say nothing but at this moment I want to say so much but I dont have words. You are awesome at expressing heart felt emotions. If Shivay was a fiction he became real in this piece.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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another amazing update...
this is emotionak, t guilt shivaay go through. and how anika soothen him..
ofcource n as usual i love last part. first a teasing shivaay then t billuji version.
thanks a alot of a beautiful os.
plz PM me na... when u write nxt .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I have becone a big fan of yours
. I had known you are busy but still i had hoped you would cone up with another OS

thank you for this one

Its wonderful

Keep writing

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Posted: 8 years ago
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OMG I WIHS GULNEET WOULD ADD THIS TO THE CURRENT TRACK!! but can't really ecpect anything from them. Nevertheless, this was gorgeous!!! :33
Love.Love.Love.

please do more like these:)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Amazing OS ❤️
Loved the way you described the emotions so well, the vulnerable Shivaay then Anika soothing him & at the end the Shivaay becoming protective again!
This is such a beautiful piece of work, I'm in awe of your writing!
Do write more 😊

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