Crazy in love (ShaNit fanfiction) Part 2 updated

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Prachi

@Shramannimik

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Posted: 8 years ago

ShaNit

summary : Punit Pathak and Shakti Mohan both were mentors on thedance plus season 2... Punit was in love with Shakti since the DID days... but didn't have enough courage to confess his love towards Shakti. Shakti is unaware that Punit has feeling for her... as she thought he looked at shakti as a friend and Shakti had a Crush on him during DID... Punit gets jealous whenever Raghav flirts with her... lets see what Punit will do... will he confess his love to her or will his love be taken by someone else...

PART 1

Punit was in his home relaxing... enjoying his free time with his family when suddenly he gets a call from Remo sir...

Punit (thinking) : are Remo sir ka call... kya baat ho sakti hai...

he answers the calland greets Remo sir asking him about his health and all

Remo sir : so Punit... you know why i called you...

Punit : no sir... what happened...?

Remo sir : Punit if you are free tomorrow please come and meet me at my house... there's some good news for you

Punit was totally confused about what good news sir is talking about

Punit : sir what good news...?

Remo sir : Punit as you know Dance plus season 2 is coming... and i would like you to join me in this as a mentor...

Punitwas shocked at first to hear this from Remo sir... he couldn't believe that he was giving him the chance...

Punit : yes sir.. yes.. i would love to sir... thank you sir...

he was controlling from not to screem in excitement...

Remo sir : okay then... meet me at my place tomorrow by 10 morning okay...

Punit : yes sir.. sure sir...

Remo disconnets the call... as soon as the line goes dead Punit screems happily... everyone in his house asks him worried what was the matter... he tells everyone about the phone call... everyone congratulates him...

few hours later he was he was in his bed room thinking

Punit : Dance plus me as a mentor... bahot amazing hone vala hai... Remo sir... dharmesh... raghav... sab honge... purane dino jaise... aur shakti... jhalak ke baad aab usse milunga... uske sath time spend karne milega... yaar... me kyu ase teenage jaise baat kar raha hu... kya ho raha hai mujhe... ek toh yaha etne saalo se i cant even confess my love to her...

Next morning

Punit couldn't sleep all night just thinking about all those things.. old memories... he gets ready taking extra time to look good...

as he reaches at Remo sir house.. raghav opens the door welcoming him... as usual cracking jokes... he greets remo sir... dharmesh was also there... he hugs him and sits on the sofa... looking around him to find someone...

Raghav and Dharmesh notices his behaviour...

Dharmesh : are kya hua bhai.. kise dhund rha hai??

Punit : kya... me.. khuch nai.. asse hi.. dekh raha tha...

Raghav : ohhh aasa kya... hame laga ki...

he was about to continue when shakti enters the room...

Punit's face light up seeing her...

shakti hugs dharmesh and raghav... she notices Punit was also presentin the room.

Shakti :ayeee hii punit... good to see you yaar... itne dino baad

she goes and hugs him...

Remo sir : okay guys.. so.. sab aa gaye hai toh... discus kare...

they all sits and discuses evting about the show.. the concept and all

Soon the day came... the shooting of season 2 first episode...

everyone was backstage.. waithing for their call to enter the stage...

Shakti was with Dharmesh... laughing about something when Punit came to them...

Punit : hey guys... what are you talking about...

Shakti :are.. hi punit... there's some thing I've to discuss with you.. part of the script...

Punit : ha bolo nah...

Shakti explains him about the small dance they have to perform... where Raghav have to act jealous...

Punit smiles..thinking... after alk these years.. he will be danxing with her... even though its for few seconds...

They got a call from the crew and the shoot starts...

The contestants where been called.. raghav was as usual making silly jokes...

raghav : me aap sab ko yeh batana chahta hu.. ki abhi joh yeah season 1 and season 2 ke bich joh gap hua.. hum done ne shadi kar li...

everyone was laughing... Punit knew that it was a the part of the script but felt uneasy... wired when he heard this... for a few seconds he forgot that the camera was on.. soon he contained his emotions and laughed along with everyone...

okay guys thats it... plese let me know if i should continue or not... hope you guys like it... enjoy...

Edited by Shramannimik - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago

pls pls pls... continue ,love u for writing this

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Posted: 8 years ago

Loveee it . Please update. Also involve Punit ke besties and Shakti ke sisters if possible. Your wish but try karlo. Koi vhota mota role bhi chalega.

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Prachi

@Shramannimik

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Posted: 8 years ago

PART 2

Raghav : me aap sab ko yeh batana chahta hu.. ki abhi joh yeah season 1 and season 2 ke bich joh gap hua.. hum done ne shadi kar li..

Raghav came near Shakti and held her hand...

Punit couldn't take his eyes of Shakti's hand in Raghav's... he felt a bit jealous... but couldn't show it because of the shoot... He laughed with others as raghav lead her to Remo sir to take Aasjirwad from him...

after that.. fews auditions were taken... now it was the time where Shakti and Punit has to dance...

Remo Sir called Raghav... and the song started

Punit held shakti's hand and both started to move along the song... Punit grabed Shakti's waist... his other hand holding shakti's left and... their faces practically buried in each others shoulder...

suddenly Punit lifted Shakti shakti was shocked for a bit but continued to dance along... she wrapped her legs around Punit's waist... she was shyly smiling.. looking at the audience... where as Punit was looking at shakti's closely... noticing how shy she got... but unfortunately this moment ended... the sang faded and there came Raghav... Shakti locked their hands together... Punit smiled at this...

Shakti : sir bataiye kaise laga performance...

Remo sir : kya dance kiya hai... kya chemistry thi tum dono ki..

Shakti : hai nah sir... Pyaar dikh raha tha nah...

she said this looking at Raghav...

Punit smiling at her comment...

soon the episode was been completed... Shakti, Raghav, Punit and Dharmesh was in thie green room...

Dharmesh : yeah season talent double ho gaya hai nah... competition tagda hoga...

Punit : ha... actually.. kya ek se ek dancers aaye hai...

Shakti : ha... dekhte hai.. iss bar kya hota hai..

Dharmesh : voh toh hai... but.. yeh bata Raghav ... yeah Shadi ke photos bade acche the.. maza aa gaya aaj toh...

Shakti : kya maza aa gaya.. pareshan kar diya pure episode... aur kya ha... kis baat pe tune kiss kiya mujhe...

shakti said this punchibg raghav playfully on his shoulder...

Dharmesh and Raghav laughed at this...

Punit was silent... he remembered when.. raghav kissed shakti on her cheeks... it was not scriped... even toh if it was in the script.. he wouldn't liked it... seeing Shakti been kissed...

Punit was brought back to reality when Raghav nudged him with his elbow...

Raghav : mera chodo.. me toh hu hi battamez... aap bataiye Punit sir.. kya lift karte hai aap...

Punit cheeks turned red.. hearing this...

Punit : voh toh bas song ke according... bas

Dharmesh and Raghav smile looking at each other... Shakti was clueless...

the day when season 2 Episode 1 was telecasted on tv...

Dharmesh called Punit, Shakti and Raghav to watch at his place together...

all four of them was at Dharmesh's place... in living room waiting eagerly for the episode...

Raghav : hey guys.. lets tweet... me selfie leta hu...

Shakti : yeah yeh sahi idea hai.. raghav.. itna bhi duffer nahi hai tu..

Raghav : apne pati se aase baat karte hai... me aapko itni izzat deta hu aur aap...

Shakti laughed at his comment.. Dharmesh was alsi laughing... Punit was looking at both of them..

Raghav noticed Punits glare on him...

Raghav : kya hua bhai... aaj bada shant hai...

Punit : tu kuch bolne dega tab toh koi aur bol payega nah...

Shakti laughed...

Shakti : sahi bola Punit... tu kisi aur ko bolne kab deta hai... Punit.. im on your side...

Shakti said streaching her hand for Punit for a handshake...

Punit took her hand in his... and smiled...

Raghav : kalmuhi... dhokebaz aaurat... Pati ke hote hue paraye mard ke hato me haat... tum idhar aao...

Raghav grabbed her hand from where he was sat on the sofa... and besides him was Punit.. leaving some space between them... and dragged shakti

she fell on the sofa practically fell on Punit...

Punit got hold on her waist... Shakti shocked of sudden moment...

Dharmesh was smirking looking at this... Raghav lood at Dharmesh and winked...

Shakti got up and sat on the other sofa besides them... she was about to say something when Dharmesh interrupted

Dharmesh : chao guys idhar dekho...

they turned around and say Dharmesh ready with his phone to click a selfie...

he clicked a selfie where Punit Raghav and shakti was on sofa turned and looning in the camera and besides them was big tv where Dance plus Advertisement was shown..

Dharmesh :okay guys... me yeah pic Upload kar raha hu...

Dharmesh uploaded the pic.. soon later Shakti, Punit and Raghav reposted it...

thier fans soon started to comment and like on the picture...

Raghav : are guys dekho show start hone vala hai... Raghav said Holding his camera... recording for intagram live..

Shakti : the show starts in... 5

Punit : 4

Dharmesh : 3

Raghav : 2

all four of them together shouted : 1!!!!!!!

raghav unloaded the video and all of them were watching the show without any disturbance... laughing.. chatting.. about the show...

The show ended... and all of them were chatting when thier phones we blasting with notifications...

everyone looked... they were having retweets from friends.. families.. congratulating them for an awsome start of the show...

Dharmesh : are.. guys.. dekho.. insta pe.. Twitter pe... trend chalu hai... RaSha...

Punit :RaSha...?? yeah kya hai...

Shakti : are our fans... Season 1 ke time bhi yeah trend hua tha...

Punit still confused

Dharmesh : are.. yeah Raghav aur Shakti ka pair name hai... aajkal fans apne favourite couple ko name dete hai...

Raghav : (laughing) are dekho yeah... kisine toh voh pics upload kiye hai.. shadi vale...

Raghav showed his phone to everyone... all of them were laughing...

Punit (thinking) : RaSha!!! matlab Raghav aur Shakti... couple...

Shakti : oh my god.. dekho comments ko...

Raghav : Shakti and Rghav looks so cute together.. i wish they will come together as a couple in real life also...

Raghav reading one fans comment...

Dharmesh and Shakti laughing at this...

Punit : hey guys soory but i have to leave.. i have some work... im getting late will see you guys later...

Dharmesh : are aab kya kaam hai tujhe... baith nah khana khake jaa...

Punit : nai.. already itna late ho gaya hai...

Shakti : ya guys me bhi nikalti hu... its late..

Raghav : kya tumlog bhi... mood ka satyanash kar diya.. itne aache se baze kar rahe the... vaise shakti tu jayegi kaise... tujhe toh mukti ne drop kiya tha nah... mukti ko message kiya.. aa rahi hai voh pickup karne tujhe...

Shakti : nai voh mukti kisi friend ki party me gayi hai.. but dont worry.. me cab se chali jaungi...

Punit : are why.. its too late.. i will drop you at your place.. chall aaja...

Raghav and Dharmesh looking at each other

Shakti : are no need.. me chali jaungi.. and tumhe kuch kaam tha nah.. tum late ho jaoge..

Ragav : ohhho.. itna pyaar karti hai mujhse... ki mere alava kisi aur ke sath nahi jayegi... pagli.. rulayegi kya...

Raghav said grabbing Shakti hand in his...

Shakti : tu pagal hai... aab chod jane de...

Dharmesh : ha jane de usse.. Punit drop kardega usse...

Shakti said her goodbyes to Raghav and Dharmesh... and both Punit and Shakti left...

Punit opened the car door of passenger seat... Shakti impressed with his gesture...

Shakti smiled.. and enterd in car...

Punit also got in the car and started rhe the engine...

Shakti : thanks... vese tum ithe gentlemen kabse ho gaye...

Punit : meh toh pehele se hi Gentlemen hu.. tune hi kabhi notice nahi kiya...

Shakti a bit confused... life what he is exactly talking about...

few minutes of the ride was silent.. when Punit switxhed the Radio on...

Shakti was dancing along the slong blasting in the car... Punit was finding it difficult not to stare at shakti as he has to concentrate on the road...

Shakti started to sing the song... soon punit also joined her...

both laughing in between at each others horrible way of singing...

the song ended...

Shakti : Purane din yaad aa gaye... kina maza karte the nah.. college me... dance class me...

Punit : ha.. par aab sab badal gaya...

okay guys thats it... please let me know if i should continue or not... hope you guys like it... enjoy...