FF : These Three Words (Part 35 - 19/11 Updated - P: 79)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#281

Originally posted by: meshmesh
Nice!
It's weird seeing KN so kind and friendly.
KN used the old trick of using his health to make the four of them do what he wants 😆.
I wonder what Suraj thought when KN invited the sisters to stay at his house?
Can't wait for KN's POV.

Thanks buddy!

I know how you all felt seeing KN this side LOL!

I'm too shocked how I can portray him like this!

Hahaha you got the point dear! His health is a big issue! LOL

What Suraj thought will be in the part after KN's POV!

Next one is fully for KN dear! He deserves at least this in one of my story LOL!

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Sania_suraj

@Sania_suraj

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Posted: 8 years ago

#282

Awesome part sis..

Loved the kn and sisters bonding..

Is kn related to them?

Loved tis part a lot..

Eagerly waiting for the next update..sis

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 8 years ago

#283

Certainly the dinner turned out lovely but the entire situation was just so unpredictable

I had never not once thought that KN wanted his family near him as he feels he is coming to the end of his journey actually when a parent talks such its creates such a deep hole in oneself and I'm not sure how would both Chakor and Imli take this as both have been without parents

Vivaan and Suraj reacting just like any child would wanting to be by their dad's side from now

but KN as proposed the idea of Chakor too been his daughter as Imli would be

the fact that he offers Chakor to stay with them and be part of his family is certainly not an easy decision for Chakor

so the marriage will take place at Vivaan's place with all rituals

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#284

Originally posted by: sumsukor
nice one Maithu ... sorry for being late bit busy at work...
For once KN seems to be nice(but still due to the current show i still not able to compliment him. sorry!)

Nice talk btween them.

especially with the sisters.

Missing Sukor moments though(as only the stories are compensating what we are missing in the show)

love to see some knok-joks (sure since they are going to be under one roof) hope to turn some passionate ones too!! (thats a bit of too much asking?? haha)

waiting for your next update.

Thanks a lot dear!

I can understand your feel dear!

It needs a lot more to get to feel for KN LOL

I knew that Sukor moments will be missing by you all but as said, it's a FF where I will focus on Sukor mainly but also over other characters too!

So bare with me, I will try to get few Sukor moments in future!

I don't know if it's too much of asking but I will try to be in the story and try to give need space for Sukor!

Thanks once again dear!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#285

Originally posted by: Sania_suraj
Awesome part sis..
Loved the kn and sisters bonding..
Is kn related to them?
Loved tis part a lot..
Eagerly waiting for the next update..sis

Thank you dear!

Happy that you loved their bonding and enjoyed reading!

I don't know the answer for your question dear!

Finally going to write the next part!

Going on for KN Mode! LOL

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#286

Originally posted by: taahir004
Certainly the dinner turned out lovely but the entire situation was just so unpredictable
I had never not once thought that KN wanted his family near him as he feels he is coming to the end of his journey actually when a parent talks such its creates such a deep hole in oneself and I'm not sure how would both Chakor and Imli take this as both have been without parents
Vivaan and Suraj reacting just like any child would wanting to be by their dad's side from now
but KN as proposed the idea of Chakor too been his daughter as Imli would be
the fact that he offers Chakor to stay with them and be part of his family is certainly not an easy decision for Chakor
so the marriage will take place at Vivaan's place with all rituals

Agree with you!

It's just unbearable when parents talks like that and it's really the toughest situation one can be according to me.

Yep dear! Marriage at Rajvanshi Mansion and a lot of events to happen LOL

It's going to be a difficult task to convince Chakor and I'm thinking a lot about it!

Thanks a lot for liking and reading! ;-)

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#287

Hello!

How are you all?
Here is the next part of TTW!
Finally got time and wrote it today itself! Yahooo!
Hope you all like it!

Link to previous part: Part 15 : Family Dinner

Happy reading!

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Part 16: KN's POV

As the car moved, KN's thoughts too moved.

KN's POV

"Bhaiya! How is it?" my sister.
Taking a sip from my cup "Very good!" Maa never let her enter the kitchen and I too don't want her to get hurt.
"I learnt it from Bhabi!"
"How many times should I say to not call your friend like that? She is your friend and that's it Choti! What will happen if Maa or Papa heard you?"
"I want them to hear!" she said with a mischievous smile taking my empty cup and ran away.

She is my father's step-brother's daughter but in reality she is my sister, my parent's second child and my family.
That's what she is and she will always be.
Chacha and Chachi died in a fire accident when there were attending a function in a small village.
And Choti was just few months while I was 8 at that time.
She entered my solo life and brought colours with her beautiful giggles and dreamy eyes.
As she started to grow, she became a whole part of my life.
And her friend from kindergarten, Tejaswini, who is our neighbour has also become a part of the house as time passed.

Time passed so fast that I feel like I will miss my life the moment she leaves this house and goes back to her in-laws.
That's why I asked our parents to search for a live-in-son-in-law so that she can be with us and they too accepted it.
Since the day she got to know that she will be married, she is trying to pull her friend to me as it will make both them un-seperatable.
She very well knows that I will obey to Maa's order and she is trying to get her wish realised with Maa's consent.
She is really childlike.

Months passed and she finally succeeded in fixing my marriage and now Tejaswininiji is my wife and her lovely babhi!
They spend most of the time together and Choti started to really well and sometimes I feel like she is my wife's sister than mine.
They get similar dresses, they cook similarly. Taste differs mostly but their coffee is exactly same.

It's been almost 4 months I'm married and I can't say who made my coffee even now.
We are still searching for a prince for our Choti and I think in few months we will get to know the final result.

Time moved and an epidemic hit our place and Choti got unwell too.
Specialist from other cities came and planted their camp in our territory to deal the patients.
I couldn't be fully with Choti as Tejaswiniji is pregnant by 6 months and Choti's marriage was luckily fixed with the person my parents chose as his lifeline wasn't long.

The time Choti got cured completely, our son, Suraj came to this world.
Choti was so happy to see him.
She was always smiling and fully happy as time has given her a new life.

Days started to pass and the day our father brought a proposal he got for Choti, she blast a bomb saying she is in love.
Our father got angry as love is a forbidden word.
For me, my parents' words are my choice, so I went with their opinion of getting Choti married in few day with the groom my father chose.

Arrangements started to take off, Choti was locked and we all went to see her time to time.
But a big blunder happened.
The day before her wedding.
The morning when I got to see her, her room was void and there was a note saying she will miss all of us for sure, she is going away with her lover, the person who separated my sister from me.
She added that she is leaving her half life here and asked our pardon!

Seeing the note, Maa got heart-attack and left all of us.
Our happy life went away with my sister.
In angry father put fire to all of her photos and things!
I couldn't save anything as I wasn't there at that moment.
In no time our father got sick with all the tension and pressure.
When I enquired about how she got out of her room, I got to know that Tejaswiniji was the one who let her go.
I stopped talking to her even after several pleading from her side.

I started to search for Choti in case she can bring back the breath in our father's life as he was calling their name in his unconscious state.
I got the information that the man she went with is one of the doctor who came to treat people in our place.
As there were 3 doctors who treated Choti, I couldn't easily get my hand on the correct person.

Time flew and Suraj started to grow up.
Our father passed away when Suraj was 3 and I started to talk to Tejaswiniji one year back, for the sake of our son whom need to be in a peaceful environment.
Years started to pass and one more person came to our little family.
With time I got to know that Choti has a daughter and they went to London for his professional developments.
I tried to contact her but nothing happened.

Finally, I got to meet her and her husband one day when I was on a business trip to the city where they were living for years.
I talked to her and she she cried her heart out to me.
I couldn't see her like that when she got to know about our parents.
She wanted to come but she couldn't as her daughter was sick and hospitalised.
I wanted to go and see her children but I got a call from home saying Vivaan fell from stairs and is in emergency.

When I got back home, I was informed that he is out of critical situation.
4 days passed before we could get him to home with a nurse to take care of.
As to finish the work in my other branch which is on hold since the time I left from there, I have to finish the deal by phone.
"Finish them! I will get back to you with needed amount." I heard glass shatter and when I saw who it was, it was Tejaswiniji who was in her shocked position.
When I asked her about her well being, she got back to her normal attitude and went from there.
That night, I saw her tensed.
When I asked her, she was walking back and forth with our wireless phone in hand trying some number again and again.
I got worried and asked her what is the matter and at that moment she received a call which made her collapse to the ground.

She started to cry vigorously and started to blame me for the reasons I didn't know.
But in the end I got to know that Choti and her family got into an accident and the car took fire in the place itself.
And the rain which came after leaved only few pieces of car and that helped the police to trace the persons and to inform Tejaswiniji whose number was most used from there since months.
I cried silently with her but then I got shocked with her accusation of me being the murderer of my sister, of my Choti.

Yeah! I forgot to tell her about meeting her but she should trust me.
She too hide the fact that she was in contact with Choti all these years but I'm not angry over that fact.
Even Vivaan once said he saw a photo of a lady with his Maa and I thought it to be our wedding pic or something.
I tried to say what happened in my view to her but she wasn't ready to listen.
I thought that it's better to leave her alone in her space for the night before letting her know the full truth.

But my life is cursed!
I lost my wife too!
On the night, one month after the event.
She stopped talking to me from that day.
In front of our children, all goes as always but in our room, we stayed as 2 strangers.
She didn't even say she is going!
She didn't even take me with her!
She went to see her friend thinking I'm the one who killed them!
She went leaving our kids!

Not only I lost my parents.
Not only I lost my Choti and her family.
I lost an important part of my life too.
But I needed strength and that is my sons.

For them I lived and I'm still living.

Precap: Back to a cafe with Sukor...

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Thanks a lot buddies for reading!

I know that this part was like more of telling a story than a real POV.
What to do! KN wanted it to be short LOL!
Just imagine all the dialogues, you will have to wait 2 weeks for his POV to finish LOL

May be a lot questions are there!
May be not!

If you liked this part, hit the LIKE & COMMENT what you liked.

Next part: Part 17 : Yes or No?

- Maithili

Edited by maithu_ - 7 years ago

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