~Mein Phir Bhi Tumko Chahunga~SS on MehRya Chapter- 10 PG 141 29th Oct - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
#41
Nayi story orr mujhe pta hi nhi tha n maine abhi tak cmmnt bhi nhi kiya wo bhi shamz di ki new story.separation track😭well nt for much longer tym as i knew hw much u love mehrya n aap unko milwa hi dogi.tb tk ke liye... best wishes aapki new story ke liye.jaldi jaldi update dijiye just make me love this story the way i love all ur other stories.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#42
wow new story...
aur yeh kya Mehrya separated 😲 that too after having kid 😲
kitane twist woh bhi prologue mein 😲 kya hua hoga.😔...

jaldi 1st chapter likhana... aur jaldi se Mehek ko bhi lana story mein Aryan nice name btw 😳 but wish daughter hoti they always made parents get back together ...boy...chalo thik hain 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Misthilove

Nayi story orr mujhe pta hi nhi tha n maine abhi tak cmmnt bhi nhi kiya wo bhi shamz di ki new story.separation track😭well nt for much longer tym as i knew hw much u love mehrya n aap unko milwa hi dogi.tb tk ke liye... best wishes aapki new story ke liye.jaldi jaldi update dijiye just make me love this story the way i love all ur other stories.


Woh Isleaa ke Mainy kisi ko PM nahi Kiya tha..😆
Just wanted to see ... separation story mein sab interested hongy ya nahi 😛

Milwa toh doongi but thoda time lagega... pehly MAA aur bety milngy ...phir MehRya😳😳

I will try my best to make you fall for this story😉

Thank you Mishi🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: blushing

wow new story...

aur yeh kya Mehrya separated 😲 that too after having kid 😲
kitane twist woh bhi prologue mein 😲 kya hua hoga.😔...

jaldi 1st chapter likhana... aur jaldi se Mehek ko bhi lana story mein Aryan nice name btw 😳 but wish daughter hoti they always made parents get back together ...boy...chalo thik hain 😃


Woww Aditi that's a surprise...😳
I'm trying to start a story where Normally story ends ...means we normally read love marriage..kids and end 😆

Yahan thoda Ulta Hai .. hope you will love reading this ..

Thank you for the feedback Aditi 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
#45
As always I am not informed!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dewcute

As always I am not informed!


No one was informed about this 😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sham

this one is different concept since we started to read FF of MehRya.
nice job girl 👏

loved the concept, it's intriguing

Vinu
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Posted: 8 years ago
#48
Character Sketch :

Hello Friends... here with the character sketch..hope you will be able to imagine them as singers and I wanted to have someone on my mind whom I can imagine as Aryaan ...and don't know why but jayesh from sa re ga ma .. little champs looks perfect for this role 😆 ...Drop your feedback after reading so that I can come up with first chapter...and iam adding one scene which will come later story... don't know when ..just to give you a idea of the story😛
Iam just inspired from few movies..plot may look same but the story is gonna be complete different😳




Shaurya Khanna : A famous singer , whose first solo album became an instant hit and over night he became a singing sensation...winner of so many popular awards ...5 years back he use to pick any meaningless song and wouldn't think once before recording it , all he wanted was fame and trophies on his name ...Now, he worship music and hardly records any song unless there is some special request of his close friends as they feel no other singer can give justice to that song

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Mahek Khanna : Classical singer ,whose hidden talent was discovered by Shaurya and soon he married her and brought her to limelight..she has mostly song duets along with her husband...and had a national award on her name for one and only solo song ..but she never came to collect it ..


Aryan Shaurya Khanna : Singing was in his genes ..his mother left her on the day when he was born .. father tried to give him the love of both mother and father...but as they say no one can replace a mother's love ...his dad kept him away from lime light ..even now he gets offer to record songs for them ..he was a winner of a singing competition...

Just adding one scene from in between..

Aryaan was walking alone on the road after meeting his mom , he didn't know what to do and with whom he can discuss, he found one mandir on his way , without thinking much he went inside ...he folded his hands and stood in front of the idol , Bhagwan ji aap hi batao mein kya karoon ?? Dad ko patah that mom went because of him and he deserves this punishment to stay alone...he will never ask for forgiveness because he knows jo unhonny kiya woh maafi ke qaabil nahi hai ...and maama...shayd woh waps aajati agar dad unsy maafi maanglety ..unhy manalety ...she could have forgive him but she thinks they are happy without her aur woh yeh nahi chahti ki sach jaankar mein apny dad se nafrat karoon , that's the reason she is staying away from us ..all she wants us to stay happy...but she doesn't know that ...we need her ..we can never be happy without her .. .ab aap hi bataiye Bhagwan ji mein Kya karoon ?? he suddenly heard a voice of a young girl who was playing with her parents..she was troubling her mother who was running after her to feed her ...her father has caught her and lifted her in his arms and her mother made her eat the food ...and she hugged both of them saying I love you...Aryaan had tears in his eyes...I got my answer Bhagwan ji ...mein apni mamma ko liye bina yahan se waps nahi jaonga...Agar yeh dono ziddi hai toh mein bhi unka beta hoon...Aryaan Shaurya Khanna ...unsy bhi zyada ziddi..I don't deserve this ..I want both in my life ..he said wiping his tears ..

Edited by Shamrouz - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#49
Wow di it's interesting story
Mehrya are singers
Aryan is so cute di
Continue soon🤗
Edited by Nandu0123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
Very nice beginning waiting for next update thank for the pm

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