Love Turn Into A Nightmar-Part 3 - Page 24, 6/9/2017 - Page 16

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Posted: 7 years ago
Part 3


They are coming closer, she is looking here and there trying to escaped from here,hurriedly ran in one room what first came on her eyes and locked it ...

Man : Open the door
tapping like a hungry animal just want to grab her in his clutch

Lady : Darwaja khol de ladki,tu yeha se kahi nahi bhag sakti,,,isiliye tere bhale k liye he bol rahi hu sidhe sidhe darwaja khol warna agar humne khudse pakad liye toh tera hashro bohot bura hoga


But she didn't open the door nor reply to them ...they broke the door and entered but saw that view they are shocked as that girl is nowhere

Lady : Bhag gayi kamini but kaise ?

Man : Won dekho
they saw ventilator with disappointed, with the help of table she ran from the ventilator

On highway She ran ran ran suddenly from nowhere one Ven came and forcefully drag her inside and rushed from there where she only screaming as she knew now none will save her,with this thought make her shiver ,tried hard released from their grip that turn more firm


At unknown place

Geet : Koun ho tum log
with rope they tied her hands and legs with chair aur mujhe yeha zabardasti bandne ka kya matlab hai still they aren't replying dekho yeh thik nahi kar rahe ho tum Sab ,pata hai iske liye tum sabko jail bhi ho sakti hai still there silent as none is here sunai nahi deta you moron's

Dhrummm
handle of chair broken with the pressure of one kidnaper where they all are sitting

2nd kidnaper : Iski toh mai
he marched at Geet just wanted to teach her some lesson that can make her understood that she is the one who is captivate not they are but 1st kidnaper stopped him before he could harm her


1st kidnaper : Have you lost your mind ...haan ? Agar ishe kuch ho gaya toh hum Sab bhi maarey jayenge...malum hai tumhe ?
His voice is filled too much anger so as fear of someone, heard that Geet turn more confused as "if they won't harm her then why the hell they kidnapped her? Is possible they would mistook her with some other girl" just thinking this she dare to asked question them.

They all Starr at her sometime and again turn busy with their works

After sometime

1st kidnaper : Ja ishe khana de de


2nd kidnaper brought one plate and gave her but saw her starring at plate then at him

2ndkidnaper : Kya dekh rahi hai aise? Tere liye kya five-star se khana mangbayu
taunting after saw her starring like that already he was enough pissed off with her constant bakbak...

Geet : Hath nahi khologe toh khayungi Kaise? She told but sounds came like Murmur but that kidnaper mistook her again abusing them with her words so without warning he Fitch's his gun and aiming at her

2nd kidnaper : Ab tujhe mujhse koi nahi bacha sakta he shooted but in air next moment his hand touched his cheek after getting slap by 1st kidnaper

1st kidnaper : Tumhara dimag sach mein kharab ho gaya hai
said with gritted teeth then in frustration he is roaming around holding his forehead between his 2fingers in 2hours ishe shift karna hai yeha se...then slaps that 2nd kidnaper forehead samjhe...then turn at everyone now all of you pack your bag's,,, we are shifting...




Next Part : Ek din hum sab ek dusre ko yeh soch kar kho denge ki woh mujhe yaad nahi karte toh mai kyu karu...




Nahi yeh nahi ho sakta...


Edited by MGMahika - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
The concept is really nice
Looking forward r u wrk

Plzz canu update on regular basis


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Posted: 7 years ago
Hoo geet is finding difficult to get job and food
Hoo geet is kidnapped
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice Story... Maan got betrayal by Sameera then why he is avenging geet... She is living a life like a dead body then too he is not satisfied... What has transpired between them that lead them here... Cont soon...
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Posted: 7 years ago
thanks 4 updating! intense update, well written! Geet kidnapped! but who got her kidnapped?? update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update..
Waiting for next update..
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
Geet is suffering already and it seems like Maan does not want her working
but what connection she has with him
she went looking for a maid's job but those people seemed to cheap in their thoughts and ways and she escapes but while running on the road she was abducted now been kept captive but it also seems like the kidnappers cannot harm her as their boss will get angry
waiting to see what connection Geet has with Maan and Sameera's betrayal
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Posted: 7 years ago
oh my suspense ki queen... 😛. . how much suspense in every stories..ufff..u make my heart to dhak dhak...great geet escaped from chi chi..dirty man and lady through ventitor..opps some person kidnapped geet..she confused they kidnapped wrongly to her..first person kidnapper very angry person..🤢..he tried shoot her but second person controlled him..and fears about someone if anything happened to her..that person not leave him..omg ..kidnapper boss is maan..he only make her run to death end right..

update soon and i am waiting for update..

i want meri jaan update also..
first meri jaan os and then meri jaan ss.😉..
its not like that..ur other stories..i dont need to update...last few days, madam active in forum more..
one by one , u update..u need take care ur health right...😳


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