AVNEIL FF LIFE'S BEAUTY IS LOVE chap 1 in Pg 2

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Hello friends... This is Aishu with a new story.. This is my first story on AVNEIL.. I love them a lot.. So its totally different plot with same characters...
Ananya Verma :- A beautiful , cute and lovable girl...anyone can fall for her.. good by heat and she loves to help others but emotionaaly weak...
Neil Khanna :- A handsome , smart and intelligent cop... everyone falls for his charms...

Prologue
Ananya Verma is the daughter of Ashish and Ayesha... Ayesha left the world when Ananya was five years old... She remember that her name was Avni but after her mom's death her dad took her away and changed her name as Ananya.. She doesnt know the reason behind and she promised to her dad that she would never say to anyone about being Avni.. Little she knows that her mom was pregnant and she was happy to get a sister or brother.. But her daad said to her that both mom and baby died.. She had a baby brother but the god snatched from her... Her dad took care of her.. he was her family.. Avni is Ashish's superstar.. But one day her dad also left her alone in this world... Avni/Ananya lost everything ... Ali is her best friend whom she trust a lot.. Ali is staying with Neelama but Avni stays alone...

Neil Khanna is the son of Prakash and Swetha... Neil Khanna is an honest IPS officer.. He is ver smart in solving the case but he took this job only becuase of his past.. He doesnt want any innocent people to get injustice... So he started his job with full respect but his past made him more responsible and he forets to laugh sometimes because of it.. His favorite person is his Bebe... He loves her a lot... He always shares everything with his Bebe...

So this story revolves around how Avneil meet eachother fall for eahother ??? Avni's past adn Neil's past??

STAY TUNED... :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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interesting
love to read more
cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice story
What is Neil and Avni's past???
Please make them meet soon???
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: shikhsk

Nice one...do continue


Thanks... Will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi Sami... Thanks... Will update soon..
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Originally posted by: srividhya68

interesting
love to read more
cont soon


Thanks... Will update soon
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Originally posted by: Gurveen

Nice story
What is Neil and Avni's past???
Please make them meet soon???
Update soon please


Thanks... Will update soon..
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Hi my dear friends... Thanks for your likes and comments... So here is the first chapter.. I will try to update this story asao... Sorry for making you all to wait... Happy Reading..
CHAPTER 1

Morning... Sunlight falls on a cute girl who is sleeping holding her teddy like a small kid... She wakes up as sunlight falls on her... She gets up with a small smile in her face.. she turns to her side and wishes good morning to parents who are shown smiling at her in photo... She goes to freshen up and she needs to go to cafe.. Cafe... Her only soul ... Chamko Cafe which is running by her and her best friend Ali.. Neelama- she is the one taking care of her.. her papa left her in the hands of this women whom he trusted a lot.. She got her motherly love from her Neelama. Neelama is running an orphanage.. She requested to stay with her but I don't want to lose her also...Avni smiles at her fate.. Her Ayesha ma has kept her name as Avni but her papa Ashish Mehta changed her name as Ananya Verma.. Only Neelama and Ali knows her as Avni and she doesn't want any others to know her as Avni.. So to the world she is Ananya Verma who is energetic and enthusiastic girl with full of fun but she only knows that she is Avni who is a shattered soul who lost her lovable lives... Avni thinks about her fate and smiles... She leaves to her cafe...

On the other side... A man with magnificent eyes and a fit body is doing his exercise... His body is covered with sweat but still he is looking damn hot... That's Neil Khanna ... A super cop who can go to any extreme level for bringing the truth out and saving innocent people... Neil Khanna the cop is known as soft spoken , honesty,hot and handsome... But the smile in his face is fake because he lost his smile a very long tym ago.. He loves his bebe a lot...

Chamko Cafe
Avni enters the cafe and finds her best friend Ali running over the cafe and serving the people... Ali.. her best friend.. her saviour...whom she believes..whom she feels happy with but never shown her weakness her emotions to him because she doesn't want him to carry her burden...
Ali notices Avni standing in a corner and smiling. ...
Ali:- AV... Ananya y are you standing here!! Come inside we have more works...
Avni smiles and leaves inside...
After sometime Avni notices Ali who is blushing and then she notices the reason because Ali's lover Rhea is entering... Avni smiles at her love sick friend but she finds Rhea to be tensed so she rushed to her...
Rhea comes and hugs Avni...
Avni:- Rhea!! What happened???
Ali also reaches and Rhea hugs him & cries .. they are worried now..
Ali:- baby... What happened?? Y r u crying??
Rhea:- Ali... Ananya... They planned for my engagement. .
Avni and Ali are shocked...
Avni:- what?? How?? Who??
Rhea:- Ananya.. you know about my dadi na... She won't listen to me.. she fixed it.. what should I do?? Please help me I can't live without Ali ..
Ali hugs her and consoles her...
Avni:- engagement with whom?
Rhea:- Neil Khanna

Neil gets ready for his job and comes down for his breakfast...he finds his Papa and mom sitting .. his eyes are searching for his bebe..
Neil:- Bebe... Bebe
Bebe:- arrey Tillu.. I'm coming y are you shouting!!
Neil:- Bebe... I was thinking where you went??
Bebe:- I went to get Ur favourite Sandwich prepared by your Bebe...
Neil's eyes glows looking at the sandwich the most tastiest sandwich from his lovable Bebe... So he starts to eat...
Shwetha:- Tillu... We wanted to say a thing to you..
Neil:- yes mom...
Shwetha:- actually we are planning to do marriage for you Tillu..
Neil gets angry hearing marriage and gets up .
Neil:- mom.. I already said not to talk about this topic... I'm not going to marry and that's final...
Shwetha:- But Tillu... Please come out from the past and try to move on... How many days your going to be like this... We all wanted to see your happiness Tillu..
Neil gets angry and leaves to his room...
Shwetha cries and Prakash consoles her... Prakash:- Bebe ..
Bebe:- I will talk with him but he will marry Oly if he likes that girl
Bebe enters his room and finds him sitting in the bed with hurt and anger in his eyes.. Bebe knows how much hurt he his... It pained her to see her Tillu like this.. she always prayed to God for bringing back her old Tillu...
Bebe:- Tillu beta ..
Neil sees his bebe coming to him and sitting near him... Immediately he lied on her lap .. Bebe gently strokes his hair
Neil:- Bebe I don't want any of this... Please Bebe
Bebe:- Tillu... Do you believe your Bebe
Neil:- ofcourse Bebe
Bebe:- then jus come and meet that girl... If you didn't like her I won't pressure you..
Neil :- but Bebe
Bebe:- Tillu tumhare Bebe kilter
Neil nods his head...
Neil:- kon?
Bebe:- Dayavanthi Mehta aka pothi
Precap :- first meeting of Avneil...

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