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orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#731

Originally posted by: Nik03
Unresed @ pg 84
🤗

Karti reply in a bit...

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orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#732

This part is now on Wattpad and the link for it can be found on the main page of this thread.

Cheers!

Edited by orion23 - 6 years ago

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orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#733

This part is now on Wattpad and the link for it can be found on the main page of this thread.

Cheers!

Edited by orion23 - 6 years ago

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CarpeDiem_365

@CarpeDiem_365

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Posted: 8 years ago

#734

Class of 2011, the future of Law... this looks familiar 😃

This is called intriguing,,right from the very first sentence !! 😆

to Eric's Dad. #relief

Seated to his right was Nirmala Malhotra, his Mom... I was waiting for the comeback... #fingersCrossed

she chose a saree, much to Shravan's delight. 😃 #DilHaiHindustani #MammazBoy #Feels

he had learned to live with it... we all do...🤗

girlfriend...😲

Am 😊 #ShaadiMubarak

engulfing her in a bear hug, throwing his hand around her from the back.

He kissed the top of her head breaking the hug.

⭐️

Shravan had made a casual comment about how she was worried sick for Eric and that had changed something in him... #ELH

Mr. Shravan Ramnath Nirmala Malhotra... !!! Naam hi kaafi hai 😆

He turned to steal a glance, seeing his family so happy, his Mom and Dad moved to tears, he knew he got where he set out to be, well almost. He misjudged a step and tripped lightly managing to get a grip on himself. ❤️

top honours !! Hmm. .. toppers are soo un-avoidable 😉

and got rusticated...😛

I think I know which part of the update belongs to...😳

Speech! !👏❤️⭐️

Nirmala cried of joy telling Ramnath, "Humara Beta Ram. Humara Beta." Ramnath smiled gleefully seeing his son achieve that which was his own dream.

Kjo makes a back door entry! ! Kabhi khushi Kabhi gham na juda hongey hum !!😆

I am the King of the world! #Vibes

The trio is graduating the same year...how is that!?

Anyways,,

Mr. Jairaj is here in flesh and blood... #interesting!

Cliffs in the middle of updates as well... #Mercy!

She wiped the mist off her face as she folded the letter and carefully placed it in her clutch... Na Sumo Na,,Shravan aa jayega!🤗

She didn't even want the medal anymore...aww!

Heck she would flirt with Jairaj if that would make Shravan get his ass here... jealousy card on the to do list! 😲

"Internship tujhse zyada important hai?" Tanvi shrugged... I could actually imagine a taraazu there...😆

As she made her way down the stairs her eyes caught something and she slightly tripped... careful my love! 😉

He was way more handsome in person, his luscious hair, his deep orbs, she couldn't get herself to look away. 😳

Hair messed up, eyes twinkling, smiling his widest one.😳

Kahan se aaya,, ye hai kaun! Kaun! Kaun!

Winking at her he clapped till all other accolades had died down. #endearing!

Witty much! 😊

Shravan looked at her and teasingly asked, "Kaun hai phir tumhara?" ... oh my my !! #flirtatious!

But didn't he already? What was she thinking! Where was all this coming from?... Good Morning Dear! 😉

#friendzoned

Their hearts as though revelled in the suddenly acquired peace. "Sumo wali feeling.. Best hai.." Shravan whispered.

"Shravan wali feeling better hai!" Suman nudged.

❤️❤️

"Ruk!" Saying she pulled him by the collar taking him by a surprise... tough time ahead Mr. Malhotra 😎

Shravan straightened his shirt and himself. Not again Sumo, never again.

For under the bravado and confidence, his heart still beat only for her... and we can't be happier! 🤗

Rang -e-nashaat-e-dil-o-jaan se parhaiz kahan hai mumkin,,

Kuch zakhm purana hai,,kuch meyaar-e-Ulfat aazmana hai !!

On that note... The last res !phew! 😳

Edited by CarpeDiem_ - 8 years ago

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reshmanair356

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Posted: 8 years ago

#735

Typing this while waiting at a signal. ..I had predicted Eric and Amanda wayyy earlier😆..detailed comment in a while!

Shravan is a gem😃

RES

...

Unress

I can't believe that I am this late in commenting here considering that I read it the minute it was posted..in a moving car..and luckily for me and for the others on the road , I wasn't driving for a change😃

Nonetheless, Meyaar was a beauty Zoya, and for reasons more than one. This update was full of moments that made feel so goid.

I loved the way Shravan made peace with his mother's presence in his life, as fleeting as it was, he seemed at peace about it. The way he liked that she was wearing a saree to his ceremony. .there was something so grounding about it..the familiarity we feel around our moms when we they are near in a way that we are accustomed to see them in..I don't know why, but that moment made me smile.

Then there was this moment after Shravan gives his speech and Nirmala exclaims 'Hamara beta Ram' to a guy she no longer is associated with. .her estranged husband. .but that's the beauty of parenthood..it's a joint venture, the joy of seeing your child grow can be equally felt and gloated upon only with his other parent.

Followed by a moment where Suman's excitement at her own success gets deflated just because Shravan wouldn't be around to see her get her medal, that moment when someone's absence is felt way more than everyone else's presence is the moment your brain actually starts giving signal that you have fallen hard in this game called love...usually the first realistically etched feeling of love.

Sumo wali feeling coupled with Shravan wali feeling was the ultimate desert after that beautiful spread ..what lines..and the smile just grew wider.

Not again Sumo. .never again. .ouch. .brace yourself Shravan, she might just knock off all your defences. 😊

The speech was love..beautiful words and even more the emotions contained and conveyed.

The hug was phenomenal. .and him straightening his shirt while watching her run away. .a perfect end to the flow. Resolutions versus emotions. .with Shraman, there can never be a predicted outcome of the duel.

Beautiful as always Zoya!!

Edited by reshmanair356 - 8 years ago

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kanash

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Posted: 8 years ago

#736

Beautifully written Zoya !!! Loved it & the speech was 👍🏼 !!!

Waiting for more !!

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#737

Originally posted by: reshmanair356
Typing this while waiting at a signal. ..I had predicted Eric and Amanda wayyy earlier😆..detailed comment in a while!
And Shravan IS handsome 😳

RES

Reshma!

At a signal! I hope you ain't driving...

Yeah you had...

I didn't want to spoil the fun😆

Shravan is drop dead gorgeous indeed

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#738

Originally posted by: kanash
Beautifully written Zoya !!! Loved it & the speech was 👍🏼 !!!
Waiting for more !!

Thank you so much!

Glad you liked it!

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orion23

@orion23

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Posted: 8 years ago

#739

Originally posted by: Nik03
Ressi ress🥳
****
Unres

Zealous si Zoya🤗
Am late again but its you ok!
Nikster🤗
Yeah yeah, everything is indeed my doing😆
Qatra...This is one of your best bro!
Not only of Alfaaz but of Orion's Ode...This is one of a kind!
Aww man! Thank you!
I dont know what to say n how to say honestly.
But aayi hu to bina bole to nahi jaaungi 😆
Obviously!!!!

The starting...A moment of Impact for me! ❤️
Sigh
It happened..more than once n I know how it feels.
A moment that lasts forever.That leaves a feeling so strong..hollow but filled with a heavy realization..N you cant help the shivers!
Haina! See you get me!
What a description Zoya...what a description👏
Bows graciously 😳
You described love n you described life... in such a subtle way...Just like that!
Haye...
I cant help but live that moment again while just reading it!
I felt something so familiar!
Beyond beauty!
Killed it!
Thank you!!!
Sumo called Shravan to share.❤️
The very first person..the only one!
Always and forever...
Shravan n his realization is another beauty!
What to say now...
That looking at the drops merging into one another n disappearing...#Moment #Familiarity #Love #Life
I find meaning in stuff like this, so my characters do too...
The tree leaves..the fight for life..the survival ❤️
This is another moment of Impact!
Yeyy
One that provide you peace..that shakes you out of your bubble..that make you realize..the importance..the realization!
Your words, your feels makes it more impactful!
Am touched!
Me too!
The call...
Shravan's reaction...The description, the emotions, the contemplation...n the relief!
Something Happened Shravan....Something happened Oreo...Something really happened!
Kuch Kuch hota hai Nik, and Tum samjh gayi😉
What a thing to be so alive Zoya..What a thing to be so alive this moment!❤️
What a thing!
But he was wiser...Wow!
Ehsaas-e-muhabbat ke liye
bas itna hi kaafi hai,
Tere baghair bhi hum
tere hi rehte hain...
Wah!!! Kya baat bol di!
You saved me Sumo...These words held much more love n admiration than I love you!
That couplet...Beautiful ❤️
Its not always that I love you is needed, many a times there are more powerful words!
I dont want to lose you...The biggest fear of Sumo. She said it to him...Now she is somewhat liberated, he is content and I am happy!
And you won't...Sumo needed the assurance from more than anything.You cant help but feel the way she is. This is human nature!
Absolutely agreed!
Ek baat puchoon?...I cant help but smile over there.You know why?
Yeah I do!😆
And just like that their world was fine again...Yes!!
Shravan needed to know his place in her life n Sumo needed his assurance that he'll be there forever.
A much needed convo...a heart to heart n just like that their world was fine again.
Yo!
Raat ko keh do ki zara dheere se guzre;
Kaafi mannaton ke baad aaj dard so raha hai...
Oh shit! You slayed it!
This is intense
The letter...The story❤️
First of all I so damn loved Shravan's thoughts in between.It enhanced the beauty!
The whole letter was so touching bro!
Sumo in her true self...her true inner self.
I'm glad you liked it!
Stories...#Moments

The thought of losing your parents at this tender age is too much to bear and Sumo lived that bitter reality. The insecurity of losing your close one, the need to be noticed n loved came from the lack of parental love.Sumo wasn't wrong. It was life n its cruelty that made her the way she was.She needed love, attention...she craved to belong!
She did, she ain't wrong, she's just different...
Sumo needed it...to accept her mistakes..to tell her side of story..n to let it all out!
N Shravan was the only one to listen...the only one she wanted to share with!
Hamesha ke liye!
The ending...the question n the answer ❤️
Sumo will have her knight back!!
They are bound to be together n no matter what they will be together...someday...One day!!
One day Nik You know what else will be one day...
One Night..One realization..One Call..A heart to heart..One Letter..One promise.
N ShraMan bade ho gaye...Sach mein bade ho gaye!
Sach mai!!
You know Zoya..
Why do I call you special always?
Coz you do what not many can...Coz you write life, coz you write love and you write emotions in the most beautiful way possible. It touches every time, with every line, with every word.
I have been blushing for 5 minutes legit... Thank you ya!!!!
Whenever I read Your work...I see life in a more clear and beautiful way...I see love in its purest form...I live a life here.
Most importantly...I see myself.
I can understand myself...In a better way.
Thank you for that🤗
Uff! Bas kar de ab.. I have run out of ways to say thanks...
Qatra...Is ek qatre mein ek Zamaana hai..ek Zindagi hai Zoya.
Read last line again!

What a thing to be so alive!!
What a thing!
Keep writing...always!!
N I'll keep reading!
Okii!
Thanks for everything!
Love you so much🤗

Thanks to you buddy!
Love you more!