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Posted: 8 years ago
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chapter 11

(Jalal Abdul & Salima goes to there home after some shopping then they goes to airport and half &hour there flight take of for London but Jalal had strange feeling in his heart for this trip continuasly he is thinking of Jodha his heart is shouting that he will meet her soon but his thought broken by Abdul who come to him and sit besides him).

Abdul said : thinking about her don't worry Bro we will find her soon I can feel that .

Jalal said : strange I had same feeling to that I will meet my baby girl soon.

(and on the other side Ajay is trying to call Veer but because of some weather prombleme he can't talk to them and he get frustrated when suddenly Kabir come to his cabin ).

Kabir said : sir our Arabian clients are arrived they are waiting for you .

Ajay Said : cancel the meeting or you handle it I am going to London i have to go before Jalal .

Kabir said : but sir this meeting is very important for our company we can't cancelled them neither I can handle it you have to attend this meeting sir .

Ajay Said : I don't care dammit please Kabir I have to save my sister from him if he reach there then you don't no I can loose her for lifetime try to understand Kabir .

Kabir said : okay sir I get your private jet ready and I will try to handle this meeting .

Ajay Said : thanks Kabir thank you very much .

(after half an hour Ajay to take of for London with his private jet and Started praying to God to keep them safe ).

(and on the other side Jodha is sleeping peacefully in her room when someone enter her room by Window and saw her sleeping and goes to her and very softly touch her face then touch her lips when she open her eyes and going to shout when the men closed her mouth and in husky voice).

men said : I get you baby girl and now I will not let you go .

(she tried to struggle she kick him scratch his face but nothing make her to leave and suddenly she with her hand she broke the alarm clock which was near her bed and she got up and shout no no no leave me and hearing her shout Veer and Priya come to her room running).

Veer said : what happen love why you shout .

Priya said : yes Jodha what happen .

Jodha said : he he he is here he will take me away from you Veer he will not leave me he is here Veer I saw him he touch me and said he get me and he will not let me go I don't want to be with him Veer he is very dangerous he can kill me within a second please save me .

Veer hugged her and Priya has tears in her eyes and after continuasly talking and crying Jodha gets tired and drifted to sleep both of them make her lay down on bed and cover her with blanket and both of them sit there not knowing what to do about Jodha 's nightmare she daily get this they both started crying there heart out ).

(Jalal Abdul and Salima reach London and at he same time Ajay to reach there Abdul Salima and Jalal goes to hotel where they have to and Ajay rush to his home to alert them about him Ajay was really tired of his continuasly meeting and now this journey and still he is just worried about only Jodha he thought Jalal it is really good that you are trying to be good but I can't let you have her because I understand that she don't love you and never will be and you will try every way to get her because you will not understand her love for Veer).

(and other side Jalal is getting confused about his thought because he is feeling that Jodha is here in London he is feeling very happy for no reason and smiling like fool and this all didn't went unnoticed by his both friend).

Abdul said : are you fool why are you smiling for no reason .

Jalal said : I don't know bro but I am feeling very well here I think I am loving this place .

Salima said : you know guys this hotel belong to Ajay Singhnia and everything here is perfect I like this place so much.

Abdul said : and what about me don't you like me .

Salima said : you are right I don't like you uff you are such idiot how will I say I like you when the truth is that I love you.

(with that both hugged each other and looking at them Jalal started imagining himself at Abdul place and Jodha on Salima place and started blushing when suddenly they both looked at him and shook there head in disbelief and goes to there respective room and left him alone).

Ajay reach the house and looked around but didn't find them anywhere then he goes to Jodha room and entered there and saw all of them sleeping in uncomfortable position accept Jodha she is laying on her bed peacefully like an angel then he very slowly goes to them and touch Veer shoulder and Shaked a Little Veer get up with jerk and about to say something when he saw Ajay and both the boys left the room).




Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

I am not getting comments so I am thinking to quit this ff

No dear don't do that...I read 8th chapter..But within 2 days u updated this much...Will comment after finishing that...
LESS response is due to some even say know that U r writing a story...Some will read the update only when they get pm..So don't worry...soon u I'll get good response..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

less commet is due to the reason that u dont send pm
and many people like me don't search for chapter till they get PM
so insure to send PM when you update next chapter..
you see many are reading ur story but are not updated when you update

Exactly Rashmi...I got to know ur story from Vrinda only...she mentioned that in her update...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

I am not getting comments so I am thinking to quit this ff


Hey please Don't quit this story..
i read all chptrs...like and comment also
i really like this story..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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hey guys don't worry I am not quitting this ff I will complete that and I will update daily to so and I get comment on my second ff his only really fast so I thought that you people are not liking this ff because of Jalal negative character that's it .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 12 will update soon
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 8 & 9
Finally priya knows that her brother is the one planned to kill jodha.. They are really best friends who are meant to be..
Jodha and Ajay's bond is cute...newly find bro...
Jodha's past is so painful like Jalal's...
She got her family via priya and Veer and now Ajay...
And I really love this monkey and Hitler combo...
Their 1st meet is very funny...And more to that priya faints when she comes to know that he is the owner...ha ha..🤣
Trio share a good friendship bond..
Jalal is smart to kidnap father and sent to Kabir..
But Ajay is smarter not to let Jalal hear their convo...👏
Getting interesting..
Jalal and Abdul are cops?Abdul is a very good friend of jalal..
Really caring for him and want his old friend back... True friend...He left his job for jalal..👍🏼
Jo's nd Veer love each other selflessly and other side Jalal is crazy about her...
I like this hide and seek game...One is not less than the other...
Getting Interesting day by day..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 10&11
Wonderful Updates...
Jalal is ready to leave this business for his baby Girl...Wah..seems like god heard Abdul prayer
Now a major path is cleared for his love..
So the bad people got punished...Smuggling is destroyed...
Jalal escapes from this fiasco and start a new life..
Ajay also knows about but didn't let her sister to be caught by jalal.. lovely bro..Ready to leave his business meet..
Oh ho..Both Jo and jalal knows in their heart that they r going to meet soon but one is happy and the other is scared..❤️
Salima is the one who gave a connect to jalal to London..
Abdul and salima part is nice...They know Jalal love is so deep...
NOW time for jalal to get his baby girl but this?Waiting..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rashmisingh9151

hey guys don't worry I am not quitting this ff I will complete that and I will update daily to so and I get comment on my second ff his only really fast so I thought that you people are not liking this ff because of Jalal negative character that's it .

Actually this story is Interesting and Intriguing..Like a suspense story..It is going like what next?👏
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Posted: 8 years ago
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chapter 12

Ajay Said : what is this what are you both doing in her room is she is unwell .

Veer said : she is not fine she gets nightmare about him that he come and tried to take her away from us and you because of these nightmare she is doing overtime job in hospital without Caring for herself thanks to Priya because of her at least she take her food and with us she behaves like everything is fine nothing to worry about I don't know what to do now I can't see her like this.

(Ajay hugged him and thought if she got to know about this then it can make her more depressed and this can be dangerous so he decided that he will not tell anyone about Jalal arrival in London).

Ajay Said : don't worry everything will be fine believe on god and we are here for her then we will not let anything to her okay now we should freshen up and today I will make breakfast for all okay now go .

(other side Jalal call one doctor and in calm voice).

Jalal said : how are they is there any improvement with them or not .

Doctor said : they are now able to do lot of things like us .

Jalal said : how I mean few weeks before you said they can't able to move finger and now yo are saying they can do anything like us .

Doctor said : yes as you know they are not paralyse patient they are just in shock and they can hear us understand us but they can't do anything but because of two doctors who come here just three weeks before we get success in this case .

Jalal said : thanks you so much I can't say in words that how happy I am right now thank you very much but what are the name of the doctor .

Doctor said : there name are Jasmine and rose and if you want you can see them .

Jalal said : no some other day I will meet them but when I can take them .

Doctor said : well after fifteen days you can take them.

Jalal said : okay and thank you once again.

(after that Jalal sit on chair and thought very soon you all will be absolutely fine and then I will have you all with me I am dying to see you all but not to worry very soon I will meet you all god whoever these doctors are please fulfill all there wishes they give my life back my family).
Edited by Rashmisingh9151 - 8 years ago

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