i feel stupid..but i’ll post it

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Veer- we have to do this, there is nothing wrong with it.
Dharam- No, I can understand what your trying to say. But stealing from Jai mama?? I don't feel its right.

Veer- there is no crime stealing from thieves. The money belongs to the Shrami Which Jai mama stole from them!
Dharam – Nahe Veer…ye humse nai hoga.

Veer – par Dharam -
Dharam – I won't repeat myself.

Dharam walks out the room, leaving an angered Veer behind…

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Dharam enters the village where the Shrami live. He is saddened watching the condition they live in.
"veer's right…we have to take the step"

After walking a few miles away from the village as he returns back to his Palace. Dharam see's a boy being chased by 3 men. The boy's face covered in a black cloth not being able to his face
men – stop, stop that thief.
As the boy runs pass Dharam, Dharam grips hold of his arm
boy – what are doing… Leave me!
Dharam – how dare you steal from my province..."
the men look at each other in worry
Dharam clutches hold of the money bag and give's it to the men…the men smile at each other and leave soon as possible.
Boy – ye kya kia tumnai?? What did you do!! Where are you taking me?
Dharam – we only have one place for people like you and that's jail.
Boy- KYA! What is my crime?

Veer – after stealing you are asking me what your crime is.

Boy – there is no Crime stealing from thief's
Dharam – don't tell me what is right or wrong. I have seen you with my very own eyes.
Boy – what you saw was only half the truth. Let me go!!!
Dharam – No

The boy kicks Dharams legs, Dharam lets go of his hands. The boy starts running but Dharam proves to be too fasts for him. He gets grasp of the boy. In the struggle to get free the cloth coving his face falls to the ground.

Dharam is astonished to see the person standing in front of him. He finds it hard to believe what his eyes fall on…
the cool breeze hits her smooth face, her shining light brown eyes, the wind blows hers long black wavy hair. A few of her hair fall down on her face; Dharam lifts his hands towards her. He than gradually pushes her hair behind her ear. She starts struggling even more to get free. Dharam can't help but keep grazing at her. He had never seen anyone as beautiful as her, nor has he ever met anyone who had made his heart beat faster than a racing horse.

The girl gets lose of his hand. And as she runs a brown horse arrives she gets hold of him and claims upon him disappearing in the middle of the night like the wind.

Leaving Dharam standing like a rock… "Is this a Sapna?"
He pinches his hand …Ah… " nahe ..This is for real."

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Dharam returns back to his room.

Veer – Where were you? Do you know how worried I was? How can you be so carless. You've never done anything like this before..Dharam, Dharam, DHARAM!

Dharam – ah, what were you saying?

Veer – Dharam where is your mind.

Dharam – Veer, woh, Oh you should have seen her. I've never seen a beautiful boy like her before.
Veer- WHAT?

Dharam – No, woh phale ladka tha than woh ek ladki thi

Veer – Dharam, I can't understand a word your saying.

Dharam – woh, Hum….
Veer- Sit down and tell me everything from the being.

Dharam tells veer everything right from the being to the middle than to the ending…

A smiling Veer can no loner control his laugher and lets it fill the room up…

Dharam – why are you laughing?

Veer- tum mein…tum mein pyar hoga hai

Dharam – PYAR…pyar Nahin

Veer – yes pyar

Dharam – shayad your right

Veer – whats her name

Dharam – Name? this I didn't ask her…but ya she was pretty as a angel …Pari…ma i've found my Sapnon ki Pari.....

the end ...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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okay ya i feel stupid but...this is how i've been day dreaming about Dharam's lovestory...
not what the sagars r showing Rite now..

oh sorry for the spelling mistakes...n do leave comments
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice one 😉

CHing 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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do post more, now i am crazy to know what happen next 😆

pls post 😊

CHing 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: ching

do post more, now i am crazy to know what happen next 😆

pls post 😊

CHing 😃

you actually liked it...❓

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ron16

you actually liked it...❓ (yes i did pls post more😳)

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Posted: 17 years ago
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yeah, i liked it, too!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: prcrules

yeah, i liked it, too!!

thank you...i'll try posting more if people like it

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Posted: 17 years ago
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ya i loved it....plz write more......it was so nice.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Its cute!!!! 😉
Dharam meeting his lady love like dis wud be different n fun!!

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