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Fa13

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Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Wow.lovely OS.

Beautifully written..👏

Loved it!

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ghissapitta

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Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Absolutely beautiful OS, my friend! You captured their emotions so wonderfully...'What dark spell does this woman cast?' was my favorite line.

And then that last paragraph, the contrast between their state of minds - perfecto.

Cannot wait to read more from you!

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Auroraborealis

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Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: ghissapitta
Absolutely beautiful OS, my friend! You captured their emotions so wonderfully...'What dark spell does this woman cast?' was my favorite line.

And then that last paragraph, the contrast between their state of minds - perfecto.

Cannot wait to read more from you!

Thank you so much dear. The line actually sums up Chandni's character for me in the show she is so innocent that she hardly realises the effects she has on this man. She is driving him towards insanity without ever realising it. Here it must be added that Shivani Tomar is undoubtedly the best among the younger brigade of female leads. ❤️