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'I should have never left you there, all alone, you have no idea how sorry I am', tears flooded from her eyes as his soft hands clung to her chest and she kissed him for the umpteenth time. She hugged his little frame tighter when memories of her abandoning him at the orphanage gushed back to haunt her. How could she leave him behind, she should have been more courageous, brave enough to hold on to him. It hardly mattered whether Meghna wanted the child or not, whether lying to Meghu about the baby was a sensible decision or not. What mattered was that she needed him perhaps more than he would ever need her. Motherhood was not biological she realised it the moment Advay handed her the baby in front of her entire family, his clear intention was to traumatise her by giving her the subtle hint of using the unwed mother card that would ruin the reputation of her family. Strangely the man who repeatedly claimed that he would destroy her had handed her the most precious gift. She cuddled him in her arms and whispered 'my sun' the giver of warmth in the coldest and darkest days ahead. She felt at peace for atleast this moment when her baby was with her.
The dark figure of Advay Singh Raizada was witnessing the scene from a distance all along, he clenched his fist and tightened his jaws in sheer fury and what he would never acknowledge a deep buried agony.
'What dark spell does this woman cast?' He wondered. The way the baby was clinging to her he had this primal urge to snatch him away from her, she had abandoned her own baby and now she had the heart to pretend that the same baby was her life? He hated her at this moment and he knew his hatred for her would never subside just then a peel of laughter escaped from her that cut through his thoughts. It was almost like a sound that awakens a soul from a deep slumber. This laugh was unexpected and infectious and the source of the laughter was playfully carrying the bundle of joy she was completely unaware of the outside world. When was the last time he heard her laugh? Or even smile. In this moonlit night with the baby in her arms oblivious of him and the world she was at peace. Her petite body washed in the moonlight was as desirable than ever and how ravishing the vermillion in her forehead made her look. Advay closed his eyes whereas Chandni for the moment soaked herself in the warmth of her sun in this moonlit night.



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey!!
This is nice!
I really liked it!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow awesome OS
I know its a one shot but still could you please continue this?


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful
Advay unknowingly gave her the best gift
She is so happy with the baby
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you so much for your kind words of encouragement and yes i will be continuing this post marriage baby track in a string of one shots. ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful post dear...
You brought the feelings of both advay and chandini very beautifully...
Utterly loved it😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: cloudcaverns

Thank you so much for your kind words of encouragement and yes i will be continuing this post marriage baby track in a string of one shots. ❤️


So this will be a series ? Great ❤️
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayukatta

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#339900">Beautiful post dear...</font>

<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#339900">You brought the feelings of both advay and chandini very beautifully...</font>
<font size="3" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" color="#339900">Utterly loved it😊</font>


Thank you so much I am glad you liked it. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2filmy


So this will be a series ? Great ❤️


With your support and encouraging words. 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: cloudcaverns


With your support and encouraging words. 😊


Good to hear that 😳

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