MG- Tujhey Dhoondon Kahan Part 12 pg 54 - Page 18

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Posted: 7 years ago

Part 8

Geet come out from hospital and take a long breath and make herself calm

Relax geet relax

Kuch nhi hoa hy maan bilkul theek hoon gy

Yeh to marey maan ho hi nhi saktey thy na wo bilkul theek hoon gy

Aur wo kya keh raha tha ma morgue check kr loon kyun kr loon jab mjh pata hy marey maan ko kuch nhi hoa hy mana kay wo mjh sy kuch door hain pr iss ka yeh mtlb thori hy k unko kuch ho gaya hy ma janti hoon k jab tak meri yeh saansein chal rhi hain marey maan bhi bilkul theek hain

Hai na baby papa bilkul theek hain na?

She caressed her bump

Papa ko kuch nhi ho skta unko hamrey pass ana hi hoga ap fikar mat karo mamma hy na wo papa ko dhond lay gi ok baby just relax

And take a deep breath after few moments she searched from her eyes for raju and said

Ab yeh kahan chala gaya hy??

Arey abhi agey bhi jana hy

She turned around and saw him standing behind her and waits for her and said

Koi naa geet ji sab kuch theek ho jaye ga yeh lyjye pani pee lyjye

And forward a water bottle geet takes the bottel

Thank you!

Acha behan ji ab sirf ek banda reh gaya hy jo dosrey village chala gaya tha woh bhi koi ziada door nhi hy bus do ghantey ma phonch jayen gy uski malomaat ma ne subha hi kr li thi bus apka wait kr raha tha ap ready ho to chalein

Ji chalye dair kis baat ki hy

And now geet again going for new destination towards her maan

They reached in few hours after taking break in mid geet got down from her car and washed her face with water bottle, raju said

Ap yahan rukye ma maloom krta hoon wo garage kahan hy jis kay near wo rehta hy

He asked something from few people and came

Aiye wo yahan near hi hy bus ek stop ka fasla hy

Hmmm

She nodes her head

They reached the street where that man is living right now but when they reached his house they saw a big lock there

Lo yahan to tala laga hy ab kya?

Arey abhi kisi sy poch letey hain ho skta hy kisi ko maloom ho then they knock on next door a old man came out

Ji kis sy milna hy?

Uncle ji hum ek bandey ko dhond rhy hain yeh jo apkey sath waley ghar ma rehta hy kya apko pata ho ga kay yeh kahan hy

Oh yeh pr ap usko kyun dhoond rhy hain bechara bht hi acha bacha hy apni family ko dhoond raha hy

Apni family ko mtlb??

Geet interrupts

Arey beta uska shyd koi accident ho gaya tha to us kay baad useey kuch yaad nhi hy wo to apna naam bhi nhi jaanta hum ne hi uska naam arjun rakh dia hy bus isi lye wo apni family ko dhoond raha hy

Acha!! To uncle ji ap bata skty hain wo iss waqt kahan ho ga

Kyun beta kya ap uski family ko jaantey hain

Shyad!!!

Please uncle bataye wo kahan hy humein us sy abhi milna hy

Wo beta iss waqt ziada tar wo agey k signal py chai ka hotel hy wahin hota hy ap wahan dekh lo kisi sy bhi poch lena kay Sharma ji kay sath waley ghar ma arjun rehta hy us kay barey ma koi bhi bata dey ga

Thank you uncle ji

And turned towards raju

Jldi chalye humein wahan jld sy jld phonchna hy

Ji...

When she reached that hotel she hurriedly entered and scanned whole place but she didn't see her maan and said to raju

yahan to woh nhi hain

ji mjh bhi nhi dekha rukye yahan k waiter sy pochtey hain

and asked to waiter

o bhai yahan py abhi koi arjun naam ka admi betha tha

kon arjun bhai shaab yahan to bht log atey hain

arey wo jo Sharma ji kay sath waley ghar ma rehta hy jis ko kuch bhi yaad nhi

acha arjun bhayyia!

haan wo abhi kuch dair phele ho to gye hain

kahan gye hain tum ne kuch suna

shi sy to maloom nhi pr haan wo kisi sy phone py baat kr rhy thy k wo kuch dair ma shambu halwai kay samney milen gy

iss ka mtlb wo wahan ho skta hy

pata nhi jinab ap dekh lo ja kr

acha yeh shambu halwai kahan hy??

Bus yahan sy seedha ja kr dosri gaali ma

Chalye geet ji kahin aisa na ho ka wo wahan sy bhi chala jaye

Geet takes fast steps she wants to run but she also knows her condition she wants to reached there as fast as possible they almost near the shop when she saw a man standing there his back is visible his hands in pockets just like maan and his hair cut is similar to maan geet frozed for a moment and thought

Is he really my maan???

Kya ma un sy itney qareeb hoon

pr mjh mehsoos kyun nhi ho raha ya shyd ma kuch ziada hi soch rhi hoon

She whispered

Maan!!

Arey ap ruk kyun gyin chalye?

Wo wo admi!!

She points towards that man raju saw in that direction

Kya ap unko janti hain?

Shyd wo maan hain

Acha abhi dekh latey hain

But suddenly that maan moves from there

Woh to ja raha hy usko pakdna hoga

But that man moves fast

Geet shouts

Maan!!

Maan ruk jaye!!!

And followed him fastly but he is nowhere to stop as he didn't hear she shouts again

Maan plz ruk jaye!!

And he stops and looks here and there geet also stopped in her track

Kya maan ne meri awaaz sunn li?

But that man bends and tie his shoe laces geet got confused and then she run towards him forget that she is pregnant her only aim is now to caught her maan in haste she bang with a lady and that lady shouts at her

Arey sambhal kay aisi halat ma kahan bhaagey jar hi ho??

But she doesn't care she left raju behind her eyes only focused on that man who may be her maan but that man takes a step to go and she reached there and hurriedly put her hand on his shoulder her breath is heavy and he stopped...



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
nice update
geet finally got big clue
hope the man is maan
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Posted: 7 years ago
Nice update dear
Loved it!!
Geet was in peace that the person in hospital was not Maan
Geet continued her search and reached next village in to find out abt maan's whereabouts.
The person forgot his memory and addressed himself Arjun.
Finally Geet and Arjun came face to face !! It's it Maan .
Thanks for the pm !
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Posted: 7 years ago
Heart stuck
Galat jaga par stop Kiya
Ahhh
Hope yeh maan ho
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Posted: 7 years ago
interesting update! well written! Geet gets a clue! she meets Arjun! is it Maan? update soon. thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awesome buddy
Finally Geet is a step closer
Now this man who is by the name of Arjun is he Maan or someone else
hope she finds him soon
cont soon
thnx fr d pm
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: suni_104

nice update
geet finally got big clue
hope the man is maan

thank you
Edited by nehaa9 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
res ji..i am going to sleep..
tomorrow morning i unres 😉

Good night dear

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: maaneetfavo

res ji..i am going to sleep..

tomorrow morning i unres 😉

Good night dear

ok ji
have a good night sleep😊

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