#2 ArHi Collaboration SS: Jalebis and Chillies [ Completed ]

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_StarryNights

@_StarryNights

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#431

This is one of the cutest ff😳

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SirenMitra

@SirenMitra

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#432

WOW!! and I did cry.. This was the best ending..

I am sure I am gonna read it one more time..

Thank you for sharing it.. would love to see you after your break( I just hope it won't too long)..

Take care.

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sk2405

@sk2405

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#433

Alright Girls! I am giving you 2 a standing ovation for finishing JC and quite wonderfully at that. Maafi for reading them now and not earlier but then I was busy looking after Avni and now ASR in Pune. 😳 I couldn't possibly not take care of them now, right!

I loved the idea of a formal proposal between jalebi and chilli. That is the least they deserved after the roller coaster of a journey they have been together. and the way they let out Avni's secret was hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing. Sirf khushi aisa kar sakti hai.

The letters were a highlight as well! They took me back to the old 'kabootar ja ja' days. 😃 And since we had such a unique couple involved here, it was only natural to expect such unique letters.

I am glad you 2 ended JC on such a beautiful note (without the ahem ahem you girls promised 😡 Traitors!)

Fir bhi jao maaf kiya! 😊

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Coffee

@coffee_beans

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 8 years ago

#434

That's a cute story. Jalebi and Chilli - wow!

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coco17

@BSRaizada19

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#435

its just superb guys!!!

reread again till the end,..

its just WOW!!

keep it up and I'm definitely awaiting more stories from u..

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A_wanderer

@A_wanderer

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#436

Amazing story! Loved it girls.. Read it in one go.. Both of them were so cute.. And arnav i loved this side of him.. He was adorable.. Ahh i wish to read more.. Looking forward for your future works!