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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: chandmeinchupi


Thanks! Hehe yes he is. Your wish is my command. I was planning a bundi trip for the girls so in my next few chapters I will definitely have something for you.


thank you ever so much , looking forward to read the next part xx
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Posted: 7 years ago
first of all sorry for my late comment 😊
thanku for beautiful update dear.
coming to the update - Ur writings are so serene that one can read n re read it n everytime u feel peaceful n satisfied after reading abt nairan like this. Their return journey was as beautiful as their honeymoon. The way Naina slept in his arms so peacefully and the way Karan thought about each event was a bliss to read. Karan is so much right when he is thinking that he is lucky to have Naina in his life n he considers her the most precious in his life. Karan is so much husbands goal. Their welcome was equally full of warmth. Now coming to naughty Karan. He is not leaving any single chance to romance his beautiful wife. Khyati disturbed our love birds but the way she teased her bhai was equally enjoyable to read. Karan has become so naughty that he did nt leave to romance n tease Naina on dining table too n Naina was full on shy mode. I did nt expect like Karan she will say his name n now all got chance to tease them. How beautiful it was when both bahus got gifts for all in house.
It was so much happy happy that it gave feeling That they live happily ever after...

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Thanku dear for lovely update. Lots of love
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: dilwali

first of all sorry for my late comment 😊
thanku for beautiful update dear.
coming to the update - Ur writings are so serene that one can read n re read it n everytime u feel peaceful n satisfied after reading abt nairan like this. Their return journey was as beautiful as their honeymoon. The way Naina slept in his arms so peacefully and the way Karan thought about each event was a bliss to read. Karan is so much right when he is thinking that he is lucky to have Naina in his life n he considers her the most precious in his life. Karan is so much husbands goal. Their welcome was equally full of warmth. Now coming to naughty Karan. He is not leaving any single chance to romance his beautiful wife. Khyati disturbed our love birds but the way she teased her bhai was equally enjoyable to read. Karan has become so naughty that he did nt leave to romance n tease Naina on dining table too n Naina was full on shy mode. I did nt expect like Karan she will say his name n now all got chance to tease them. How beautiful it was when both bahus got gifts for all in house.
It was so much happy happy that it gave feeling That they live happily ever after...

...
Thanku dear for lovely update. Lots of love


I was wondering where my all time fan went. No worries, I know everyone is busy now. You don't need to thank me every time. We all love Nairan and I love doing this for you. So glad everything got expressed the way it was supposed to. Haha I would love a hubby like Karan too. Lots of love and hugs.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: chandmeinchupi



I was wondering where my all time fan went. No worries, I know everyone is busy now. You don't need to thank me every time. We all love Nairan and I love doing this for you. So glad everything got expressed the way it was supposed to. Haha I would love a hubby like Karan too. Lots of love and hugs.


hehe thanku. Did nt want to reply in rush n properly. best of luck for karan like hubby 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 15: Can't Bear This Distance...

Karan p.o.v.

It was morning and Karan was supposed to be getting dressed to leave for office. He was in no mood to go for work and wanted to just stay at home with his wife. All his life, he had wished he could go out and be like others and not stay locked up in a room but for once he really did want to be locked away. He could smell Naina's fragrance in the room. She was probably going to give him a earful. But he nicely pretended to sleep nonetheless. He felt a tap at his shoulder. Karan uto, utooo, tum late ho rahe ho, she yelled. He grumbled and turned to sleep on the other side. Mujhe nahi jaana, sone do mujhe, he replied.

Nahi Karan tumhe Jana hi hoga, papa tumhare intezaar kar rahe honge, uto. She pushed him now. He opened his eyes. She looked gorgeous with her wet hair dripping around him. Uto uto she yelled as she kept nudging him. Before she could say much, he twisted her into his arms and she laid her head on his chest and he hugged her closely. Kya kar rahe ho Karan? Chodo mujhe aur uto, she squealed. Nahi jaonga, nahi jaonga, nahi jaonga. He stayed firm.

She squiggled in his arms and came up. She put her hands on his cheeks. Please Karan, mere liye. She gave that sweet look, and his heart was melting. Before he could argue she gave him a small peck on his cheek. Ab to jao. He grunted and nodded as he sat up, released her and went off to the washroom. He would never again sit and blame all those things he saw in films where men had to agree to their wives. After all he could never disagree with his.

Naina p.o.v.

How am I going to tell him? He is probably going to be really angry but I have to tell him. She was playing with her saree when she saw Karan come out of the bathroom grumbling. Kya hua Karan? She asked concerned. Dekho yeah shirt bhi nahi chaata ki mein aaj office jaon. She looked at his half open shirt where the button was clearly missing. She smiled. Bas, yahi problem hain, don't worry mein aayi. She went to the cupboard and brought her sewing kit. She slowly took a needle and thread in hand and came before him.

She could feel his intent gaze on her as she worked on fixing his button. His hands were slipping round her waist pulling her closer. Karan... she chided. Agar mein ghar par rahoonga toh bohot kuch kar sakthe hain, he smirked. She blushed and pinned him. Ouch, he winced. Dekho tum aaj office jaa rahe ho and that's final. Itni din papa ne akele he sab kuch dekha tha taaki hum sab honeymoon jaa payein. Waise bhi tum ghar rahoge tab bhi koi faidha nahi hain. At that a small crease appeared on Karan's forehead, she said as she continued sewing. Kyun? He questioned, holding her arms tightly as she snapped the string off his shirt finishing her button. Woh mein, actually.. she blundered.

Naina beta, called Nirmala maa as she walked into the room. Karan quickly let go of Naina. Beta tum ready ho, gaadi bhi neeche thayaar hai, she asked looking from Karan to Naina. Karan gave a quizzing look to Naina. Nirmala noticed this. Naina tumne Karan ko bataya nahi ke tum Boondi jaa rahi ho apni di ke saath. Naina watched as Karan's face fell. Woh maa, mein.. mein bathaane he waali thi, Naina mumbled. Haan Karan woh bas do din ke liye jaa rahe hain, tum pareshan mat ho. Unke liye bhi tum logon ne gifts kareedhe the, mein usse waise bhi bejne waali thi par phir sochi kyun na dono bahuon unke maa ko na mil ayein. She grinned. She patted Karan on the shoulder as she turned around and left.

Karan silently cursed himself. Why had he been so nice and bought gifts for the others. He should have just kept to himself. Isi liye mujhe office bejhna chaati ho? He asked. She nodded. She came close and put her arms around his neck and started doing his tie. Dekho mein jaldi jaa kar maa se milke aur sabse milke aajaongi, she pleaded as pulled up the tie. She put her hands on his cheeks, I love you, aur mein bhi tumhe bohot miss karne waali hoon. Please tum udhas mat hoo. Agar mein tumhe aise dekh kar gayi toh mujhe accha nahi lagega, she begged.

She felt Karan forcing a smile. I love you too. Jaldi wapas ajana aur mujhe call karna, he asked. She nodded and gave a small peck on his cheek. Agar tum kahin aur jaa rahi hoti toh mein tumhe Jaane hi nahi deta. Par wahan Shardha maa tumhare liye wait karengi aur isiliye tumhe jaane ke liye haan key raha hoon. She smiled. She loved him for being this understanding. Always her hero. Chalo, he said as he helped her stuff down the stairs. She left the room behind him carrying his office files and bag.

Karan p.o.v.

Once breakfast was over. The ladies had said their goodbyes to the family and Karan was giving her a one final squeeze as she got into the car. As she waved out of the window, he gave her a flying kiss and she caught it, waving back. He had gone to office after that. There were so many pending files on his desk but his heart wasn't in it. He stared at the framed photo of him and Naina on his table. He traced her and whispered I'll miss you.

He had barely been able to work. Every file he seemed to open had Naina floating on it. He kept looking at the time wondering if she reached yet. Finally his phone buzzed and his heart jumped as he saw her name appear on the screen. As he picked up, she quickly told him how they were very close to home and she would call back in the night. He felt at relief that he spoke to her. She always brought a smile to his face.

Time went fast and he reached home, but home didn't feel the same. There was no one waiting for him at the dinner table, neither was there anyone putting out his clothes on the bed while he showered after a long days work. He closed his eyes and he could see his smiling, blushing Naina. He so wished she were here. As he lay down on the empty bed sleep didn't come to him, just dampness in his eyes and the yearning in his heart. He had called her just minutes before and she had picked up wasting no time at all. She must be missing him just the same. They had talked for a while until he heard her mum through the phone. He signed off with a small kiss.

As the clocked ticked twelve Karan still couldn't sleep. He rolled around and gave up. Pulling away his blanket, he walked down to the garden and saw the full moon shining brightly in the sky. Tumhare bina kuch ho hi nahi paatha hai Naina. I miss you so much. He gave a flying kiss to the moon and humped down into the chair. It was then he heard the silent footsteps approaching him. He was worried to turn around, it might be a robber. He felt a slight hand on his shoulder and to his surprise it was Kunal.

Bhai, tumhe bhi neendh nahi a rahi, asked Karan. Kunal nodded, haan Karan mein Meghna ko bohot miss kar raha hoon. Kunal now turned to look at the moon too. Bhai, Kya hum Bundi jaa sakthe hain? asked Karan. Kunal eyes brightened at this idea. Chahtha toh mein bhi hoon Karan par papa. Aur tum dono apni papa ke bare mein fikar mat karo. Usko mein dekh loonga, replied another voice. Karan and Kunal turned to see dadaji walk up to them. Dadaji aap... gasped Kunal. Haan mein, aaj bata nahi kyun mujhe tumhari dadi ki yaad aa rahi thi. Aur neche aakar dekha toh mere dono pothon ki haalat karrab hai. Dekho tum dono abhi Boondi ke liye nikal jao, mein yahan sab kuch sambhal loonga. Karan and Kunal gave each other a smile and wrapped dadaji in a hug. We love you dadaji.
Edited by chandmeinchupi - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Hey Everyone!
Hope you all are well. Thank you for such amazing responses to my story. So sorry if I kept you all waiting. I promise to try and do quicker updates from now on. Hope you like this chapter. Not as hot as older ones but some sweet scenes.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Awww.. Both men missing their ladies.. And Dadaji too..
Chauhan brothers have coolest Grandpa..
Loved it.. Amazing...
Such a beautiful update as always..
Waiting to see our Naina's reaction on her Hubby's this stunt.. Hehe..

Wanted to see.. Now that Karan had Naina all for himself for whole 15 days.. How he would share her with home and family members..!! :P :D.. And ofcourse as always u gave that.. Karan don't wanna go office and want to stay locked up with her.. Haha.. Such a cutie..!

Amazing update
Waiting for the next update already.. :)
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Posted: 7 years ago
awww wat a sweet update it is. You always surprise me with such beautiful n serene updates. How i wish such scenes shown in show too. If its posdible for me i would have made you writer of show much before.
Naina knew that Karan will feel sad if she tells her about her visit to Boondi so she kept putting it and it was really beautiful n heart warming to see Karan sad without her. How he is missing his beautiful wife and that scene in morning how can i not say abt that it was so beautiful scene. How he pulled her acting sleeping. Oh i wish this scene at lease in show plzzz. Karan is such a romantic hubby. He cud nt sleep n missed his wife. Daadu is the cutest member of family and the most supportive. He is sending them to Boondi n i can just imagine how everyone will tease both brothers that they cud nt spend two days without their wives. How cute it will be.
Thanku for writing such a sweet update. Loads of luv n keep putting smiles on our faces.
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: JennyD

Awww.. Both men missing their ladies.. And Dadaji too..

Chauhan brothers have coolest Grandpa..
Loved it.. Amazing...
Such a beautiful update as always..
Waiting to see our Naina's reaction on her Hubby's this stunt.. Hehe..

Wanted to see.. Now that Karan had Naina all for himself for whole 15 days.. How he would share her with home and family members..!! :P :D.. And ofcourse as always u gave that.. Karan don't wanna go office and want to stay locked up with her.. Haha.. Such a cutie..!

Amazing update
Waiting for the next update already.. :)


Wow such a quick reply. Yes they do have the coolest grandpa. Thanks so much. Yes yes I have a nice scene planned next. Hope it turns out well when written, yes our Karan is such a cutie. I wish we get to see this in the show. But they r obsessed with more drama. U won't have to wait long, I'll update as soon as possible.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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