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shakhu

@shakhu

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Maithu this is amazing...i dont know what shd i say bechari chakor ya bechara suraj😆

Chakor is so naive lets see how her own personal teacher teaches her😉

Waiting to see their beautiful journey..

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arena99

@arena99

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Posted: 8 years ago

#102

Hi maithu

sry for late comments

it was fabulous part with two soulful person

just loved it cute ,innocent chakor and suraj was a perfect understanding husband 😊

thankyou for such wonderful story maithu

thanks every sukor ff writers for writting such spectacular story because nowdays udaan watching was just waste of time ,baseless storyline and imli drama

thanks maithu once again 😊

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: sumsukor
Take your time maithu as wait is always worth the while 😉
Hmmm and going to have air conditioning and fans on... Hahaha 😉

I hope the wait is worth LOL

And I will try my best to get it better!

Hahaha! I don't think it will be necessary as it will be just simple things which might affect more 14+ than 18+ LOL

Thanks buddy!

See you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: shakhu
Maithu this is amazing...i dont know what shd i say bechari chakor ya bechara suraj😆
Chakor is so naive lets see how her own personal teacher teaches her😉
Waiting to see their beautiful journey..

Hahaha

I think you can say both for both of them LOL

Her personal teacher may go over board sometimes LOL

Thanks a lot!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: arena99
Hi maithu
sry for late comments
it was fabulous part with two soulful person
just loved it cute ,innocent chakor and suraj was a perfect understanding husband 😊
thankyou for such wonderful story maithu
thanks every sukor ff writers for writting such spectacular story because nowdays udaan watching was just waste of time ,baseless storyline and imli drama
thanks maithu once again 😊

Hey buddy!

No need for sorry yaar!

Read whenever possible but no sorry!

Thanks a lot buddy!

Glad you loved this part and the 2 ppl in here!

It's my pleasure that you are all enjoying my stories!

Especially watching that Tamarind has became a big task!

Thank you so much dear!

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Chapter was Fascinating

Indeed the rain , the thunder helped in bringing Chakor and Suraj closer

both felt good in close proxmity and thats great

I liked that Chakor ask Suraj if he likes someone else , at least they both finally got

to speak some important issues which made both relax as now both can understand

that they want to be in this marriage and they just need to start understanding each other

Suraj explaining about kisses and that whole entire scene was so beautiful Chakor's innocence on

all the various aspects and Suraj just falling more for his wifey

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: taahir004
Chapter was Fascinating

Indeed the rain , the thunder helped in bringing Chakor and Suraj closer
both felt good in close proxmity and thats great
I liked that Chakor ask Suraj if he likes someone else , at least they both finally got
to speak some important issues which made both relax as now both can understand
that they want to be in this marriage and they just need to start understanding each other
Suraj explaining about kisses and that whole entire scene was so beautiful Chakor's innocence on
all the various aspects and Suraj just falling more for his wifey

Thanks a lot!

Glad you are enjoyed reading it.

It's my pleasure that you are reading my stories!

Thank you!

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Maithili

@maithu_

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Hello buddies,

Finally finished this part and this story!
It's a superb journey with you all!
I will do my bukbuk in last!

Link to previous part: Part 3

Happy reading!

*******

Part 4

Giving him back the kiss he gave her, she says
"I like it too!" ans smiled shyly.

She couldn't stay there with the feelings she got, so ran away from there to bathroom and closed the door!
After all the excitement running in her heart and mind to experience these things for the 1st time!
She composes herself and does her morning chores!

*** I feel like I stole 10Kg gold from a shop while it was a kiss that was going to give me heart-attack.
Maa! I don't know why you told that kissing is not good.
I love it! It was sweet and something happened in my whole body! ***

She smiled shyly to herself seeing the mirror.

Feeling shy she hesitates to come out from there and face him..
She kissed him in the running of time but now facing him is another task as she is seeing him in a new different light with each step of their closeness and proximity.

*** It was easy to do but now, I don't know how am I going to see him!
He is good, no great.
He is the person my parents sent for me.
He is my Prince Charming! ***

- What did she do?
She is really difficult to understand.
Should I see her soaps to understand her?
No! It would take years!

She kissed me back!
In the same way I did!
She is so cute!
I love her a lot! -

30 minutes passed since she went inside and 15 minutes since no sound came from there.

- What is she doing inside?
Is she scared? Is she hatting the kiss?
No! It can't be, she said she liked it!
So what can be her problem! -

"Chakor!" knocking the bathroom door.
He called her 2 more times and no reply.

*** He is outside!
What am I going to do?
Maa & Papa! Help me please! ***

- How to get her out?
Threaten her!
No! She will get scared!
Do you have any other plan?
No! I don't!
So follow what I say! -

A small boosting talk happened inside him before he addressed her:
"Chakor! I will count upto 3.
If the door is still closed or if there is no reply, I will come in! I can open the door by breaking or calling Brigade."

*** Why will he call them?
How to tell him that I feel things when I see him or just think about him? ***

"One"

*** How will I go out with this face? ***

"Two"

*** Devi Maa help me! ***

"Thre" he couldn't finish that small word as the sound of unlocking the door interrupted him.

With baby steps, she came out and into full view for him.
"Are you okay?" he asked seeing her face which is coloured in red.

She nods her head and goes to kitchen.

*** What did I do wrong that I'm running away from him?
You kissed him!
It's not a fault! He said that!
You are feeling shy!
That I know! And I don't know the reason!
Stop overthinking and go with the flow!
Hmmm! Yeah! Not a bad idea!
My ideas are always better than your mind!
Yo! Keep in mind that you need me as much as I need you!
Yeh! Yeah! ***

After a small peep talk between her mind and heart, she starts to work saying:
"You keep quiet! No doing things like you did before!" she asks her tummy to be as quiet as possible.

*** Hope it listens like Nithi said in 'yahaan ya vahaan(Here or There)'! ***

Once freshened up, he enters the kitchen to find her doing poori as oil is heating.
"Let me help you!" he says startling her "Sorry!" he added seeing her jumping in her position.
"No! It's just I was thinking!"
"Do you need anything?" standing by her side.
"Huh No!" still giving full concentration to the floating poori in the oil.
He smiles "I will help you!" he says as he reaches to get the rolling elements to his side.

While doing so, Chakor's long last dream of him being behind her, which is 50% of her whole wish realised without both their knowledge.
And the reason for this shifting dishes from her side to his is the size of the kitchen.

"Chakor!" rolling a poori.
"Hmm!" cutting veggies.
"Why did you ran?"
Just with this question, a shiver passed through her spine.

*** Just the mention of the moment is making me feel things!
Neither Ganga from 'Ladli(Dearest)' didn't feel like that, nor Zaira from 'Salam(Salut)'. ***

"Did I scare you? You didn't like what we"
"I feel things!" she blabbers, interrupting him.
"What things?" he asks with a questioning look.
"Things that I have never felt." she said her voice sad as she is asking questions to herself in mind!

- Could it be same thing as me?
Is she referring to her heart beating and all? -

"Is it good or bad?"
"I... I don't know."
"Can I know when?" he asked hesitantly.
"When we are hmmm close like close." with her eyes going in back and forth thinking.
He switches off the stove and puts everything down and turns to her side, giving her the full attention as he removes the knife from her hand.
She lifts her head for the first time since they both started to talk.
He held her left hand and turned her to make her face him.
And both their hearts started to sign chorus.

"Does it now?" he ask her calmly with a fast beating heart.
"Hmmm" she hummed with her eyes locked with his.
He holds her left cheek and asks "Now?"
"Hmmm!" she responded after closing her eyes.
With both his hand on her cheeks and after a small peek on her forehead, he asks "Now?"

- I think she is going through what I'm going through or even more! -

*** Maa! What should I say? Give me courage! I need it! ***

"WhatshouldIdo...whenyouarenearme?" she spelled in one word.

- Did I understand anything? No! -

Putting his hands on either side of her shoulders and letting space between them, he addressed her:
"Can you repeat?"
She opened her eyes to be only captured by him "Hmmm" she took a deep breath and asked "What should I do for my heart to not beat like a thunder when you are near me?"

- She is so so cute! I want to hug her and lift her in air. -

*** Did I say something wrong? Why is he thinking deep? ***

"You mean to say, I shouldn't come near you?" he wanted to play with her.
"No no no! I was just I hmmm don't know why but it beats fast and I feel like I'm going to fall down or fall sick, like heart attack." biting her lower lip.
He smiled at her and held her face in his hands and freed her lip from her shining teeth "You are so adorable!" caressing her cheek "No you will not fall sick and I will not let something happen to you!"

- If she has to go through something, I will be the one to go through it first. -

*** Why Maa and Papa aren't here to see him? They would have liked him as much as I like him. ***

"Do you really like me?"
Putting his arms around her waist and pulling her towards himself, bringing his face near hers "what do you think?" he whispered in her ears.
She smiled her shy smile and hugged him even before he could see her reactions.

"Princess!" he calls her after few minutes.
"Princess!"
No reply.
He separates himself from her and holds her face in his hand "Princess!" she opened her eyes with a questioning look as she lifted her head to face him.
"I have football match today!"
"Hmmm" she nodded.

*** He already told about it! So why repeating? ***

"I need to leave in 1 hour!"
"Hmmm!"
"Can we cook now?"
She frowned and saw him with a questioning look.
He kissed her forehead as she closed her eyes seeing him leaning.
"I too want to be like this for forever but we can't my Queen!"

*** Be like what? Husband and wife? Oh my god! He is talking like Deepak from 'Geetha meri Seetha (Geetha! My Seetha!)' who asked Geetha to go away when they were hugging. ***

She immediately broke the hug and looked at him with an accusing look.

- What did I do now that she is looking at me like this? Was it wrong to ask her to broke our hug? I too wanted to stay like that, if possible for eternity but we can't. -

"I was just telling that we need to cook and have breakfast! It's already 10:15!" eyeing the clock behind her "And match starts at 11 AM!"
"Hmmm" she nodded understanding what he is telling but she didn't get the thing she was expecting to hear from him.
"Do you want to come and see me play? My friends are also waiting to see my wife. I mean you!" with a small smile.

*** He wants to present me to his friends! He is the best! He is better than Kiran! Even better than Aarav from 'Meri Rajkumar (My Prince)' who brought Harni to the party because he wanted to enjoy. ***

"I want to comeee"
"But?"
"I have ... have classes and and need"
"To prepare for them?"
"Hmmm" nodding her head.
"I will help you!"
"Hmmm" fidgeting with her fingers.
"Are you stressed?"
She bent her head.
He lifted her head by her chin and said "You can do it! I will be there for you! Always!" nodding his head "Now smile!"
She smiles her shy smile and hugs him.
"Prepare yourself for the 1st day. If you need anything, ask me! We can do a small trial if you want."
"Okay!" still in each other's embrace.

*** I'm really lucky that I got him in life!
Now I have a Maa, Papa and my Rajkumar! ***

- I feel lucky to have her in my life.
I need to show you the outer world and at the same time protect you. -

"Chakor!" playing with her hair.
"Hmmm" playing with his shirt button.
"I need to go!"
"Where?"
"Football match!" with a smile.
"Oh! I forgot!" separating herself from him "I will prepare while you will be getting ready." and went back to switch on the stove and started her work.

"Thank you my wife!" he whispered near her ear and leaned to kiss her cheek but the kiss landed on her lips as she has turned her face to face him.

He immediately left her alone as her mouth hung open while her cheeks turned crimson.

- She is so cute! I want to eat her cheeks! -

*** So we can kiss whenever we want!
Then why they never showed on TV?
Even in the modern serial that Chachi watched 'Paris se Rajkumari (Princess from Paris)', they never showed this. ***

Blabbering to herself about her soaps and life, she finished preparing the breakfast and had it with him.

"See you! Take care!" he said as he approached the main door.
"Next match I will be there!" she said from behind him.
He smiled and said "I will play even better than ever that day!" turning to her side.
She smiled her signature shy smile.
"Wait!" she called him as he was about to turn.
"Best of luck!" she tip toed and kissed him on his cheek.
"You know that I wouldn't mind if you say good bye to this place." showing his lips.
"Chi!" she turned other side with her flushed face.
He hugged her from back "I love you a lot!" and kissed her cheek before exiting their apartment, closing the door behind him.

Hugging herself, she shivered remembering all the kisses and couple moments they spent together "I still feel him near me!" and chilled herself "Go and do your work instead of day dreaming!" and smiled to herself as she locked the door and got to her cores.

Time passed by and she started to prepare for her first lesson with whatever she knew.
By the time of dinner he came back and helped her to prepare once they settled in the familiar space of their bedroom.
Next day started with few simple cheek kisses and everyday routines.
He helped her again that evening with a small training session which turned out into a hugging session later by night.

"Got everything?" he asked as he got his bag.
"Hmmm yeah! Just one thing missing!" she said as she came out of room all dressed up.
"What?" he turned to her side.
She put her hands on his shoulders and tip toed while his eyes were scanning her actions.
She laid her lips on his and separated it immediately as she turned and went to get the bag she prepared last night.
All this while he was standing like statue thanks to her actions.

- Why this provocative kiss? -

"What was that hmmm kiss for?"
"I think I'm stressed for the first day and I wanted to calm it by doing something which disturbs my heartbeat more. You said you like to kiss and I wanted to get ride of all these disturbing heartbeats. So my solution is to do it regularly and get ride of them."

*** Finally got my own idea. I still remember Gowri and Reshmi avoided Rahul and Nakul when they felt like this but that didn't work.
So I'm sure this plan will work. ***

- She is so adorable! -

"What if it doesn't go?"

*** I didn't think about that! ***

"I didn't think about it!"
He pulled her towards him by her hand, making her collide with his frame as he held her in place while his right hand travelled to her cheek.
"Is it still disturbing now?"

*** I didn't expect this! ***

She just nodded her head!
He kissed her tenderly on her lips and said "We need to get out now else I will be on leave today and you will never start your work!" and peeked her forehead as he held her hand in his right while taking both their bags in left.

*** Why will be at home all day when work is waiting?
May be he is tired but going to work! ***

The day passed well for both.

"So, do you like this place?"
She beamed and hugged him from back as they were travelling on bike "Thank you so much! Children are so cute! I love them all! I even got a friend! She also got married recently. Everyone are so lovely! Kids liked my class and"
"Chakor! Take a deep breath!" he interrupted her.
"Huhh?"
"You were talking holding your breath!"
She smiled and hugged him tightly "I was excited to tell you everything."
He smiled inside his helmet and said "I would love to hear all your stories too but not in one breath. I want my wife to be healthy, so take time and say one by one."
"Okay!"

- I'm so happy that she enjoyed her work. -

*** He is so cute! I like him a lot! ***

As they entered their apartment, she was at half the story of the day and they both settled on couches with her on his lap as they went with the flow.
Once all finished, they freshened up and made dinner together.

The night went uneventfully but the next morning he got his dose of biding kiss when he left for work.
That day evening he was back before the normal hours and helped her getting prepared for next day classes as they were in their room after dinner.
He held her by her waist and made her sit on his lap with her both legs on his right over the bed.

*** I'm getting used to sit like this! Even Doctor. Romance Raja said that it's normal to be close like this when he was interacting with married women on the show. ***

For the first time, she watched a TV show instead of a soap as she got bored this afternoon.

- I'm getting used to her more than what I have thought! She is so addictive! -

"Tell me if you don't like what I do or if you want me to stop!" he said as he kissed her cheek.
With his other free hand he held her face and and trailed kisses from cheek to nose, nose to eyes, eyes to other cheek, other cheek to her lips where she moved her lips in sync with his as he did to her this morning, during good bye kiss.
He slowly slide to her jawline and reached the place between shoulder and neck.
Taking his time he removed the safety pin which gripped the pallu(sari front and the rest) in it's place.
He made her lay and kissed all the exposed parts in her front before coming face to face with the young lady whose eyes was closed.
Feeling no other reactions from him apart from his breath fanning her face and his one hand under her head, she slowly opened her eyes and saw him:
"I didn't say anything!"

*** I didn't say anything! I liked what he was doing! I don't know if I should do the same to him but I feel heart beat rising but it's good now! I'm not scared. ***

- I'm just admiring the innocent woman in front of me!
She takes every ounce of me! -

He looked at her questioningly.
"You didn't like it, that's why you stopped?" she came to a conclusion.
He smiled "I love you!" and kissed her tenderly on her lips.
"Hmmmloboutoo" she muffled in the kiss.

He broke the kiss and asked her to repeat and she repeated the 3 magical words that he thought it would take decencies to hear.
And she reciprocated his action saying those words, stopping his mind from thinking.

As they broke their first long kiss, she caught her breath and asked "Are we now ready to make babies?" hugging him as he changed their position while she was kissing him.

"You are a baby yourself and you want a baby now? I sometimes feel like a baby kidnapper hahaha"
She punched him a little on his chest saying "I'm not a baby!"
"Ouch It's paining!" he acted as he massaged the place he got the small punch.

Her angry expression changed immediately to guilt "I'm sorry" putting her hand there and massaging it slowly "I didn't do it wontedly!"
He smiled and said "It's not paining! I was playing with you!"
Her angry child like look returned as she hit him softly on his broad chest.
He hugs her tightly, stopping her action.

"We just now started our life, we will go slowly as a lot of events are to happen." he kissed her head as he pulled the quilt over them.
"Good night!"
"Good night!" she said as he switched off the light from her was.

They entered the world of sleep with him, just in a sports' vest and she half clothed.

The morning rays entered the room and she was sleeping alone on their bed with quilt over her.

*** When will be awake before him? Never! ***

She smiled to herself and removed the quilt to get the priceless shocked expression!

"Why am I like this?"

Slowly last night events came back to her and she smiled shyly as she got down from the bed.

*** What we did is so strange but I feel good when he is with me!
I like our closeness!
I think he too likes it! ***

Deciding to get freshened up directly, she excited their room.

*** Why to wear the sari again to get it changed immediately.
And moreover he has saw me like this, so no problem!
Nothing different now! ***

But she was wrong and is wrong.

- What is she doing walking like this in front of me? -

As she made her way to bathroom with her new dress for the day, he got up from his push-up position and within 2 strikes was there and was pinning her on the wall near bathroom.

"What are you trying to do?"
"Morning routine!"
"Do you know what you are doing to me?"

*** Why is he asking this? Did I do something wrong? ***

She shook her head after a lot of calculations.
"Do you want me to show you?" he asked locking his eyes with hers.

*** It shouldn't be a big problem as all problems and happiness should be shared between couples. ***

- Why is it this difficult to control my feeling of being near her, seeing her like this?
Last night it was a moment of flow but now? -

She nodded with her eyes scanning his.
He leaned in and kissed her without breaking the eye-lock while his hands roamed all over her body sending her to the hell of pleasure.
His one hand encircled her waist while other started to work on her blouse hooks as they moved to the couch which is not far from there.
She started to moan into the kiss as her eyes closed automatically feeling the strangest feeling she has ever had.
His assault continued with her help in removing her blouse and her top-inner wear.

After approximately 20 minutes, she was sitting in his lap with her half nude body as he sucked her assets.
He was about to get his head out of there and kiss her but the morning moment got interrupted with his phone which broke their passionate-intimate moment.
She opened her eyes which still reflected the emotions she was going through.
He peeked her lips as he can see that she isn't fully out of the pleasure world and picked his shirt which was on the sofa and put it around her.
"I liked it!" she muttered to herself as she moved to bathroom in a daze of what happened while he smiled to himself as he attended the call.

*** What were we doing?
Is this what he called to be close?
It's nice! It feels strange but good at the same time.

Maa! Help me! My mind is not working and I can't see if it's like this. ***

- What did I do?
I just wanted to kiss her but got deported with the feelings.
What will be she thinking of me and my actions?
I feel like she liked it but let's see.
I will behave as always and if she doesn't like, she need to say that too.

I need to control! -

She got ready and started to prepare breakfast when he joined her few minutes after.
He hugged her from back as he rested his chin on her shoulder and both hands around her form.
"Maa and Papa are coming tomorrow after Papa's friend's son's marriage."
She smiled and asked "Really?"
"Yeah" he smiled "They will go back on Saturday!"
"Oh!" her face fell.
"Do you want to go back with them?"
She turned immediately to his side "No! Why? You want me to go?"

Not knowing why this reaction, he said "I thought you wanted to be with them!"

*** Oh! He didn't want me to go away! He just thought of my liking and need! So sweet of him. ***

She kissed him on his cheek "I don't want to go anywhere if you are not coming with me!" saying so, she turned and continued her cooking and he again rested his chin on her shoulder.

"Do you liked what we did?"
She nodded.
"Do you want us to do these things?"
She nodded.

He kissed her cheek and said "The moment you entered my life is the best moment of life!"
"For me too!" she didn't turn to his side but her smile grew wider thinking about her marriage with her Prince.

They made their way to the orphanage after breakfast, to drop her there before getting to his work.

"Should I change something when Maa and Papa come?"
"You need to change nothing!"
"Hmmm" as she got off from his bike.
"If you need anything, call me!"
"Ok!" and she peeked his lips and made her way to the main building where she has to be present.

*** If all the things I'm feeling for him is called love! I love him a lot and I want to love him more and more! ***

He was standing like a statute with the effects of her kiss.
The older people and young people who passed by and saw them are in awe!

- I should tell her to not kiss me in public and especially no kiss in front of Maa and Papa.
What will they think about us? -

"It feels nice!" as he touched his lips and started the bike.

The classes went one by one and Chakor mingled well with children and in evening they went back home together.

"You remember the English teacher?" she asked as they were cooking their diner together.
"Hmmm"
"She said we are cute!"
"When did she saw me?" he asked as he saw her shying and smiling to herself.

- I think I got what is running in her cute mind! -

"I told you that we can't do things in public!" he started.
"What things in public?"
"Like this morning!"
"We were in the parking and no one was near us!"
He tells her the things which were running in his mind since morning and she asks if she did something wrong.

"We can't do these things when Maa or Papa are there!"
"But you said that it was for kids and we are not!"

- How to make her understand that it's not in front of others?
Hmmm Yeah! -

"Of course we aren't kids. It's just that other people will feel uncomfortable seeing us like that." setting the dinner.

*** Oh! that's why they never show that on soaps. Not even in 'Modern Patni (Modern Wife)' where they were all modern and all. ***

"I see!" serving him.
"You understood?" as he made her sit on the chair next to his.
"Hmmm" she hummed and nodded.

"Why do you always get worried?" as he showed a piece of Poori in front of her mouth.
She took and chewed as she replied "It's just uhhmmm I don't know uhhmm what I'm doing is uhhmmm right or wrong." she took a piece of Poori and presented it in front of him.
He holds her hand and says "Do what you prefer and want without hurting others. If you think you will hurt someone by doing something, ask the person if he or she will get disturbed by your doings. Else just choose to do not execute your plan in case you are sure it might hurt someone." he took the piece from her fingers "And with me! You be yourself! If I don't like something from your side, I will tell you!" he got another piece for her "If you don't like something, you should tell me too!"
"Hmmm" she nodded as she was mouth full of Poori.

- Everything is good now! -

*** What is there to complain when he is perfect! ***

They finished their dinner and entered their world of discovery.

"What should I prepare for tomorrow?" resting her head on his bare chest.
"Whatever you want!" he said as he massaged her bare back as her front is stuck to his.
"Hmmm!"
"Hmmm"
"Hehehe" she laughed cutely as he tickled under her arm "Please hehehe Stop hehehe"
"Ok my Queen!" and he stopped.
"Is this closeness sufficient to make babies?"
"Once babies come in our life, we will be busy with them."
"Isn't it normal!"
"Let me finish first Queen!" as he was rolling few strands of hair in his fingers.
"You can my King hehehe" as she hugged him tight.

*** King & Queen! It's so cute! ***

"The time I'm spending with you now and you with me will get reduced. We will be more with our kids than with each other. We started to know each other just now, so let's take it slow and steadily. You too need to get adjusted with this life and me too. So let's go slowly!" and he kissed her head.
"Hmmm" she kissed his chest.
"Chakor!"
"Hmmm?" she lifted her head with a questioning look.
With his eyes shinning in the moon light he said "Don't do that!"
"Huhhh"
"Kissing there!" and he received another sweet gift from his wife in the same spot which turned him on and made him lay her on bed and hover over her.

*** Did I do something wrong? ***

"Sor" and the rest of the words were eaten by the demanding kiss he gave her.

And the night went as he showed her another level of passion as they slept in each others arms with nothing as barrier between their bodies. (@AuthorNote: May be few of you might have thought it to be so rapido to get to this level but this is a relationship between a Man and Woman who are in love and everything can't be controlled or studied!)

Time passed and Friday evening arrived.
The elders of Rajvanshi family appeared and seemed to be happy seeing their son and daughter.

"How is life here dear?" Kamal asked Chakor as they were all seated for dinner.
She smiled and replied "It's different and I like it Papa!"
Her father smiled as he started to dine.

They finished dinner in few minutes with catching up questions.
Suraj stayed with his father as the discussion over the family farm was going on while Chakor went to clean the kitchen and the dishes.

"Do you feel comfortable here dear!"
"Han Maa! Everything is good!"
"Your husband?"
She turned to other side, hiding her face as a shy smile crossed her lips "He is the best!"
"Best? Hmmm!" and she smiled "So need to ask if he is taking good care of you!"
"Hmmm"
"Do you miss something?"
"Hmmm Missing?" she turned as she didn't get what that question means.
"Previous place, previous life, something?"
"Oh! No Maa!" she smiled as she continued her work.

And the talk between the ladies continued and ended with "Have you both thought about kids? We would like to see our grand-children!" Teju said with a loving smile.
And the reply was a shying young lady, standing there, not knowing what to talk as she isn't used to these talks with someone else than her husband.

"Take your time!" her mother said as she exited the kitchen.

*** I always thought why Kamli or Shobha were so timid to talk about this to their lovely mother but now, I did the same and I don't know why.
Ouf! I felt shiver run down my body just thinking about our talks and what Maa asked. ***

Minutes passed and the young couple were in their room doing things which has became their habitual things since few days, while the elder couple was in the hall over the mattress!

"They are happy! She is the so lovely!"
"I told you! She is the best daughter we can get!"
"Hmmm She loves our son a lot!"
"He made her his life now!" Kamal said.
And the elders continued their talk.

On the other side of the door, they were in their own world with no words exchanged but just simple actions.

"I should ask Maa and Papa what they want for lunch!" she talked to herself as she was making breakfast.
"They will tell you to do what you like!" he said as he circled his hand over her waist.
She leaned on him "I want to do something they like!"
"They will like whatever their daughter offers them!"
"Hmmm Not from me alone but I think they want something from us."
"Us?" as he moved her a bit in his hands in order to see her face.
"Babies!"

"I should have stayed in hall!" Teju told herself hiding her face in her hands as she made a U-turn from kitchen entrance.

"It will pain and I can't see you in pain!"
"I can go through anything."
"I can't! We will have babies but not now!"
"Hmmm"
"I love you!" he kissed her cheek and their morning romance continued in the kitchen while the scene changed in hall.

"Why are you all red Tejaswini ji?"
"Hooo Nothing!" taking a place in the couch, taping her sari pallu to clear her feelings.
"Hahaha We also went through that phase Tejaswini ji!"
"Huhhh?"
"You are shying seeing your son and daughter!"
"Hmm No Nothing like that!"
"Haha do you remember our old golden days?"
"Chiii" she got up and went to balcony, leaving Kamal alone.

They all had breakfast and elders bid goodbye earlier than planned as they wanted to give the couple the time of this weekend.

"Do you want to go somewhere?" as his hands rested over her hands which were on her tummy.
"If you want!" as she adjusted herself on him.
"Tomorrow we are going for my Football match!"
"Really?"
"Yeah!"
"Yes! I will be all ready!"
He smiled and peeked her cheek.
"Should I prepare something for lunch?"
"Not this time!"
"Okay!"

*** I'm going to see him play! Youpie! ***

She turned to his side, pressing her body to his, coming face to face.

"Will you teach me to play that game too?"
"You want to play it?"
"I can try!" she smiled.
"I will teach you privately whenever we both get time!"
"Okay!" and she peeked his lips "I love you!"

The simple touch of cotton on fire, had ignited the fire which made him attack her lips and their actions continued at some level.

"You won! You won!" she screamed and jumped on him as he reciprocated the hug his wife is giving him as his team as won the match "You played like your favourite footballer! You are the best!" she kissed him on his cheek with each word she said.

His colleagues and friends were smiling seeing the couple, and especially the young lady participating in the game instead of gossiping along with their wives who were present there.

"Thanks for coming!"
"Thanks for bringing me!" she leaned to kiss him but he shook his head and she got the message.

*** Oh yeah! How foolish of me! He told several times and still I'm not getting it! ***

"Ok love birds! See you!" a friend of his bid them bye as he passed by there.
"See you!" he said and she smiled her cute smile.

"Shall we go?" he presented his hand.
"Hmmm" as she circled his arm with both her hands.

2 months passed and everything is going for the best.

Chakor got more mature in these few weeks and life is going smooth.
She became close with the English teacher and they even started to talk about their marriage life.
She even got to know that her friend had a love marriage and she is now pregnant of 9 weeks.
And when asked how to convince her hubby for baby, she got the superb idea of provoking him thanks to Miss. English.

*** This idea is better than what they show in soaps! ***

She went to buy a simple and soft night gown with the help of her friend.

"What are you trying to do?"
With a questioning look "Trying to make you accept for babies!"
"And what is the link with this dress!"
"May be you will like this dress and accept the offer."
He smiled "I will love you in whatever dress you wear Queen!" as he kissed her and they slept in each others' embrace to begin the weekend.

*** Even this plan flopped! I should talk to him! That's the only solution! ***

- I don't know if she can bear the pain of giving birth. May be consult a doctor.
That will be better! -

Time passed and she was cooking lunch the next day when he back hugged her.
Hugging has become his little habit! And she likes it too.

"I will cook dinner today!"
"You don't like my cooking?" leaning over his body.
"I love it!"
"Then?"
"I want you to taste what your husband can cook!"
"I don't want to taste your cooking!"
"Why?"
"I'm angry on you!" as she tried to move away from him.

*** I completely forgot that I should be angry and talk to him about what I want.
Ouf I'm null than Subha from 'Kaam karo ya Pyaar karo? (Work or Love?)' who can't hide her laugh. ***

- Angry? There can be only one reason she can be angry! -

"I don't see that!"
"I don't know how to show it but I'm angry!" she successfully moved from him.
He turned the gas off and brought her to hall and made her sit on his lap "Can I know why my Queen is angry on me?"
"You know that!" she turned to other side still on his lap.
"Tell me what I can do for making you happy" he asked her holding her face in his hand after making her face him.

*** How to be angry on him? It's so difficult. ***

She held his collar and started "You see, I'm not scared of you or your touches! I like you a lot! You are my only family. Maa and Papa also but you are you!
Don't you like me as much as I like you? Don't you like babies? Why we aren't like others? Do you think I'm not good for you to be your babies' mother?" with sadness increasing with each words she said.
"I love you too!" he kissed her forehead "You are my everything to me and that too from the moment I got to know you accepted me as your husband." he kissed her left eye "Liking one person can't be said in words, so no comparison!" he peeked her other eye too "I love babies and I want a dozen of them to run around our legs" and he smiled and kissed her nose "No one can be like others, you need to learn how world is in order to guide our future generation. Their growth is in our hands, you and I will be teaching them." He kissed her lips and she reciprocated.
They broke the kiss and he added "You are more than good for me! And I don't want to share my life with any one else, except you and our children! I want to grow older with you and walk along with you, holding hands, be there for you until my last breath!" she closed his mouth with her hand and said
"Happy moments should be happy only, no thinking bad!"

*** Yeah! It's said in almost all soaps! ***

"Yes Miss! Oups Sorry Mrs!" they smiled and joined their forehead.
"So?" she asked with her heart pounding.

"You are the winsome of my life! Tell me! What do you want Mrs. Winsomeness?" locking his eyes with hers.

She said "I want you to own your Mrs. Winsomeness in every way possible!"

From there on, their happy life continued with different level of happiness and new experiences.
And as he wished, everything happened, even the Walk With Winsomeness!

END!

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Oh My Gawd! Another story ended!
I'm going to miss this couple a lot, especially this Lady!

Thanks a ton for all the readers and people who expresses their views!
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I got to invent a lot of serials (LOL) and experiment another side of marriage here.
Thanks a lot buddy!

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- Maithili

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