SidNi FF: She is on my mind

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She is on my mind



Prologue

Nights dark and days bright. Life is so real and sometimes so fake that we don't even realize.
The cool breeze took over the atmosphere on the mountain top.
It was a very different and romantic weather from the usual days. Birds chirped even after there was complete silence to make the atmosphere enlighten.
A red stole from the back flew in and dashed into a guy's face on the other end.
As soon as he turned to see whose it was he was mesmerized and dazzled by the looks.
Read on to know the complete story...


EDIT BY: Shabs

Writer: Nidhi


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sidni FF: She is on my mind

Character Sketch:

Siddharth khurrana: He was once the most naughty and famous student of Dubai modern high school! Yet! The 24 year old guy was the one whom every queen desired. The whole Western part of India later was ruled by his name. The business industries would give way to him. He loved everyone but could never build a connect with his friends. Read on to find more about his character and life...

Roshni Patel: Once a very sweet and chirping roshni had changed into a strong-headed and bold roshni as time came into the play. She never could find what father love was but always connected with her friends and family. Every magazine had the interviews she took and the hard work she possessed.Read on to find more about her character and life...

Smita Patel: A strong headed and passionate singer who always believed in love and peace. She loved everyone in the family except Roshni! Roshni though loved her Smita always found roshni weak and did not like this at all. Smita always dreamed of a prince charming. Read on to find about her character and life...

DD Patel: The head of the Patel family and a very cunning and smart business woman. Many hated her because of her arrogance but deep down in the heart she was a weak and loving woman. She loved both her daughters and treated Rita also as her own daughter, she never did partiality in her daughters. Read on to find more about her character and life...

Rita Dhiman: Unable to have parents love she always knew the meaning of what it was and truly mesmerized it. The sharp and intelligent mind of hers always had brought her the upper hand in the Fashion Shows she put up. Never believed in what true love is but will she also be able to know what the power of Love is. Read on to know more about her life...

Raj Khurrana: Siddharth's dad and god he was. A strong and loving man and the owner of the best and richest company in the Western India. Though his wife is no more whom he loved a lot he never fails to disappoint his sons and daughters and loves them all equally! He was such a man that no one could hate him and the shayari he wrote was marvellous. Read on to find more about his life and character...

Raghav Khurrana: He was a big time flirt and never could understand the true meaning of Love. But then it was by heaven's Grace that a princess came into his life and changed everything. He loved his mom a lot and always misses her and thinks he has killed his mom. Read on to find more about his character and life...

Sarita Goyal: It's so true that God won't be graceful to everyone and nor was he graceful to Sarita. She was abondned by her parents when she was two and at the age of 5 she was adopted and made a part of the Khurrana family. She never shared her feelings with anyone except her brother Sidharth and loves Siddharth to the core and wants happiness for him. Read on to find more about her character and life...

Riya Sharma: Once in life she had a crush on Siddharth and loved him like hell but as the times have passed she understood that she is only a true friend of sid. Roshni and she were close friends since roshni shifted to Dubai. Roshni has been inspiration for her and her career was decided due to roshni. She is now a successful fashionsta of India. Read on to find more about her life...
*Shiv Patel roshni's father died when roshni was 12. Siddharth's mom would as well die in the updates to come..*


Note: The rest of the characters like Nani, Kesar chachu, bua etc are all same and there is no change..

Hope you all would love reading my story and look forward for your reviews!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very interesting... I'm already intrigued... all the best
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks a ton 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks so much 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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feels great that u liked it 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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will update by Sunday 😛
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Chapter 1, (Written by Nidhi)

Back in the year 2000,
Wandering in the streets was a Little girl just like a princess walking on the footpath of the dark streets of Paris. The girl looked like she was just ten! Paris the city of lights was actually the most dull that day. Cars moved to and fro. No one stopped by asking whether who she was and where did she come from. Soon came a white shiny Lamborghini and stopped beside her two men armed with guns got down and opened the doors and then came out her parents. So frightened to see their daughter in such a condition.

Early in the morning tickets were booked, clothes were packed and the family flew to Dubai. The city the little princess wanted to be in. On reaching Dubai the little girl overjoyed forgot all her sadness and roamed freely never giving a damn about the past nor the future. The next evening was two days before she celebrated her birthday and her father and mother's anniversary. She found herself so lucky being born on the same day as her parents anniversary.
That evening brought in gifts of joy sent down from heaven. She met a person the princess and sister who the little girl always wanted of. The princess whom she met just before her b-day was Rita. Rita Dhiman the sweet, chirping, loving, caring, smart and stylish queen of Dubai modern high school.
Life of that little princess changed from then on. She had thought she really lived a fairy life story.

After two days,
The day had arrived, the little princess was very Happy. It was her tenth birthday. For the first time she had everyone whom she could party with.

Guests walked in into the huge banquet hall. It was the cake cutting time and the time the lil princess would get her gifts
The cake had exactly eleven candles placed on it.One for the good luck cheered Rita from the back with a knife in her hand.
And the song began...
Happy birthday roshni.
Happy birthday roshni
Happy birthday to you
May God bless you
May God bless you
Shine like yo do
And be my pretty angel yelled Rita from the side.
Everyone gave gifts and now it was Rita's now. She acted perfectly to show roshni that she had no gift. But as soon as rosh was about to cry Rita from the back pulled out a big basket wrapped with a picture depicted to roshni.
Roshni too excited seeing that gift without giving a second thought quickly opened that gift and what she saw was mesmerizing!
It was a collage of her pictures with Rita and some chocolates which rosh loved a lot.
Roshni gave Rita a tight hug and from the back of her mind she thought that she was just dreaming.
The whole night was spent dancing, singing and playing fun-filled games. At was at around 11 in the night everyone was gone and the banquet hall seemed as silent as a church did.
Roshni, Rita and the whole Patel family returned home tired and went off to sleep. It was one of the amazing and rememberable days to roshni's life
As roshni fell asleep she mumbeled that after my meeting with Rita everything seems so amazing.


Thank you everyone. Hopefully you liked the update and hope I keep entertaining you with my updates. Please drop in you review in the review section below...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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thanks for the review will try give u another update soon.
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Chapter 2

It was a bright sunny morning everything just made complete sense to roshni this time...

Weeks passed and soon it was time for her to shift into a new mansion of there own.
...
5 years down the line...
Roshni's had her aim fit in her mind it was not just that she was in 9th but also to the fact that she wanted to prove her mom that she is very capable and fulfill her dad's last wish of she being a journalist.

It was a very normal day but anxiousness carved in. Roshni found herself trembling, with utmost courage she got up and was dressed up in casuals as usual because it was Dubai's school of course...
The classroom was very noisy and was very well a student's love destination for studies. The teacher walked in as soon as the bell rang Trnnnggg Trnnnggg trnnnggg.
The students were back to their benches and roshni sat on the second last bench with a cute little smile on her beautiful face. Two men marked in the classroom destroying all the peace created. Behind them walked in the little Siddharth khurrana with a beaming upset look on his face to not attend classes. Siddharth pulled back and sat just beside roshni. The class got over and it was time for a short break.
All the students ran towards the canteen but instead Siddharth walked towards the window sill and was soon followed by rosh( as most of the family members called roshni). She let out a sigh and spoke up
"Hey I am roshni Patel would you like to be my friend on being asked so Sid replied "It would be my pleasure, well I am Siddharth khurrana or say Sid but I want a promise from you??
" Promise from me?? What promise roshni sounded completely puzzled.
"Promise that you will be beside me and support me as a friend because the more friends I make I lose them so often. Said an upset Siddharth
"Yeh I promise! Actually pinky promise! "Said roshni cutely.
The bell rang and everyone were back on time. Roshni was overjoyed that she had found a cool friend on the first day. Now roshni who earlier thought the school will be boring because she did not have friends was changed. Half of the boys and girls in the school loved roshni, her talent and her sweet gestures, everyone appreciated roshni including principal to the students.

Every day would seem so good. It was the perfect time phase for roshni. Her studies we're at it's peak and she was the topper of the school alongside Siddharth, her best friend.

It was August 11,
The evening seemed heavy and sky dull. Roshni lying on her bed picked her phone up and saw notification telling it was sid's bday tomorrow. She was horrified!! It was a near about disaster she created in the minutes to come.
After 15 minutes walked into the room was Nani Maa. Shocked and devastated about what had happened to roshni she asked,
"Kya hua mera bacha, aaj Meri princess it tensed kyu Hai?
Roshni replied sadly "Nani Maa tomorrow is sid's bday and I haven't done anything great at all. I am such a big stupid. "
"Hmmm, I have a plan. Come closer lemme tell u bacha and see how this plan works out.
As soon as Nani finished telling her plan, roshni's smile was back onto her beautiful face. Roshni and nani Maa hurriedly got on to start working and execute their plans in such a way that everything was the best. It was all completed and roshni seemed very satisfied as she fell off to sleep

Next morning,
The sun was out and a cold breeze blew. The chirp of the birds awakened roshni.
Stretching her back roshni stood beside her bed and had a glance at the wall clock. She was horrified she had almost slept for two extra hours. From the side table she picked up a hair pin, tied her hair in a cute bun and began to work.
It was at around 1 in the afternoon she took a bath and was ready in a blue t-shirt and black shorts. She picked up the bags, called the driver of her car, wore her shoes and moved out of the house as soon as she could.
Meanwhile in roshni's car...
"Dada please thoda jaldi chalaye. I don't wanna be late at all. Said a tensed roshni.
"Chinta mat kato betiya Rani. I will make u reach on time. Said the driver ramu.
In another 10 mins roshni stood rooted in front of a huge gate of a mansion. Took a deep breath and walked in.



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