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Posted: 8 years ago
#21
Beautiful update 😳
Avni is such a tease 😉
Update next part soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#22
Hi! Okay I loved todays episode...It was fab. And Shwetas face after Neil decides to go with avni was a treat...Lol.😆 So..Neil n avni are going to live separate..☺️preety much like my ff...Am so happy with Avneil..So I decided to give a small update...It has no/ Lil Avneil..As i think from past 4 chapters it was them only..So i dedicted this to neela...Biggest Avneil Shipper..Also The Ff goes ahead to reveal why r Avneil livinh separate...in future updates...

Remember some plots are similar while some are different with show.

I hope you enjoy this ff.😛

Right now my semesters r going on with 2-3 exams still remaing...so pardon me for anything rubbish or typos i will edit later. writing with phone is quite difficult.😒

Okay !I will end my rant..Just send me buddy requests if you want PM for future update.

Will reply indiviually to all after exams.



Chapter 5 : Future Plans?


"Ja rahe ho?" Avni asked sadly buttoning Neil's shirt.

"Jana toh nhi chata lekin important case hai dont worry jaldi aa jaunga." He said gving a small peck on her cheek and turned to leave.

"Bye. Take care." Avni said waving him off standing at the doorstep.

"Bye. Tum apan dhyan rakhna kuch imp. baat ho toh DD ya Neela ma ko call karna mera phone switched off rahega bye." He said giving her one last kiss. Two days of married life and he was already addicted to her.

"Kya karu...Maid bhi aake chali gyi...Neil bhi sham ko aayega..Phone bhi nhi kar sakti..Ek kaam karti hoon mein Ma ke pass jati hoon.. Do din se baat bhi nhi huyi unse." Avni spoke to herself and left the house with purse n keys happily.


Same Day- Neelas home

"Ma!" Avni called happily backhugging Neela as she entered the house with spare keys just to surprise her.

"Bacha? Tumne toh dara hi diya mujhe. Achanak meri yaad kaise...Jab se Phirse Shaadi ki hai ek phone nhi kiya mujhe...Itna bhi kya Pyar mein khona...KATTI." She pouted and faced the other side.

"Aree ma...Am sorry...Aap naraz ho? pls maaf kardo..aise phir nhi hoga." Avni said holding ears.

"Aree meri buddhu beti..Main toh mazak kar rahi thi balki main toh bahut khush hoon tumhe settled dekhar..Jo khushi mujhe aur Ayesha ji nhi mili voh tumhe milte dekh. Neil bahut acha hai...Uska khyal rakhna..dukhi mat karna jaise pehle kiya tha." Neela said passing a loving hand over Avnis head.

"Haan Ma ab mein usse kisi aur k liye chod kar nhi jaungi balki humare liye..humare rishte k liye laadugi." Avni said determined.

"Vaise Tumhe pata chala Dayawanti ko life imprisonment ki saza mili hai aur diksha aur bakiyoon ka case abhi bhi court mein chal raha hai...Chalo accha hua Ayesha ji ko justice mil gaya." neela settling down on the sofa. "Vaise ab aage ka kya plan hai?"

"Plan kaisa plan? Badla toh pura ho gaya." Avni asked confused.

"Yahi toh. Badla pura ho gaya ab aage tumhara kya plan hai..aapne career ke apne sapno ke bare mein.Neil pura din case mein busy rahta hai.Mein apne NGO aur business mein busy hoti hoon. Toh tum pura din kya karogi?"

"Hmm..Maine iss bare mein socha nhi hai par zaroor sochungi. Abhi toh maine kuch aur socha hai"

"Kya?"

"Khana bana sikhna" avni said determined.

"Khaana aur tum?" Neela asked laughing."Bechara Neil"

"Kya maa ap bhi neil ki tarah shuru ho gayi...mujhe aapse nhi karni...Katti." She said annoyed .

"Accha baba sorry...Chalo mein tumhe kuch dishes sikha deti hoon." Neela said taking her hand into hers.


Precap: Avni makes food for neil. Avneil romance And? And? Shweta- Avni Faceoff...😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#23
Beautiful update
Their honeymoon is over and back to work
Avni has decided to learn cooking for Neil
Let's see what she will learn and will it be good???
Precap sounds awesome
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24
My head plays Neil's words tumhe is duniya mei pohe ki alawa kuch banana bhi ata 😆😆 Let's see what are you going to make her prepare .
Neela kabhi kabhi Neil ki ma jyada lagti hai 😆😆 They both are so alike . I thought Neela was to speak of kids 😆 In show she expressed it much before . It's great to see Neela encouraging her to work .
Swetha 🥱🥱
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Posted: 8 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Crazy_Saks_

<font color="#000033">Chapter One - Home Sweet Home...</font>

"So...Finally We are home...Did you like it?" Neil asked enthusiastically carrying Avni in Bridal Style and stopped near the threshold.

"I will be able to look around the house, only if you put me down Neil." Avni said trying to wriggle out of his grip, to eager to get inside their love nest.

"ok-okay! Easy Wifey! Easy." He said putting her down but instantly stopped her from stepping a foot inside. "Wait Avni..."

"What happened now?" Avni asked with a pouting face.

He didnt reply but went inside and came quickly with a Kalash of rice and Alta, while Avni waited outside dumbfounded.

"Neil?" Avni asked choked glancing at the things he carried.

"You know a bride always does Grapravesh before entering the house as a sign of wealth & prosperity, I didn't believe in it...But since you are the Laxmi of this house, you have to be welcome pompously." He replied geniuely while Avni could only perform the rituals with glistening eyes, admiring her husbands thoughfulness and her luck.


"So Now...Hows the home? I know its not too big but I tried to furnish according to your liking." He asked backhugging her, now in their room, as she finished the tour of the house.

"Its beautiful...Thank you." She smiled leaning onto him.

"Hmm...Only Thanks? Nothing else?" He asked gesturing for a kiss.

"Hmm...Wait." she said playfully going dangerously close to his lips, while he closed his eyes in anticipation, they could play this game she thought.

For a good second or two Neil waited anxiously for his wifes lusicious lips to capture but instead something soft landed at his face. He opened to see his wife a few feet away laughing at his plight and a pillow at his feet.

"Avni...Wait...I will not leave you...Where will you go?...wait." He yelled in frustration running behind her as the home resounded with his frustrated yet playful screams and her occasional giggles...

At Last he was able to catch hold of his notorious wife, sealing their lips forever😳...going a trance of ultimate bliss...bliss of being away from conspiring Mehtas, Nagging mother in law and obsessed bbf of your wife...It was just the start of their blissful life...


Okay! So this was chap one...Hope you like it...As you can clearly notice ...Avneil have shifted to a new home separately...So the story basically revolves after arrest of Dayawanti...The reason for the spilt...Realisation of love...their newly confessed love...Married life...and not to mention Shweta,Riya and Ali would be there too...


Hoping for a positive review!

Bye!


Sakshi

😳

precap: first night




Hi sakshi. For me u are a connected relation as my bua also has same name as urs. I feel at atached to u as a bestie. And i commented so that u should post ur ff on wattpad and telly updates. It is blissful for me. Loved it to the core

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