5/page 6 updated 21/08 - Blissful life Avneil ff

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter One - Home Sweet Home...

"So...Finally We are home...Did you like it?" Neil asked enthusiastically carrying Avni in Bridal Style and stopped near the threshold.

"I will be able to look around the house, only if you put me down Neil." Avni said trying to wriggle out of his grip, to eager to get inside their love nest.

"ok-okay! Easy Wifey! Easy." He said putting her down but instantly stopped her from stepping a foot inside. "Wait Avni..."

"What happened now?" Avni asked with a pouting face.

He didnt reply but went inside and came quickly with a Kalash of rice and Alta, while Avni waited outside dumbfounded.

"Neil?" Avni asked choked glancing at the things he carried.

"You know a bride always does Grapravesh before entering the house as a sign of wealth & prosperity, I didn't believe in it...But since you are the Laxmi of this house, you have to be welcome pompously." He replied geniuely while Avni could only perform the rituals with glistening eyes, admiring her husbands thoughfulness and her luck.


"So Now...Hows the home? I know its not too big but I tried to furnish according to your liking." He asked backhugging her, now in their room, as she finished the tour of the house.

"Its beautiful...Thank you." She smiled leaning onto him.

"Hmm...Only Thanks? Nothing else?" He asked gesturing for a kiss.

"Hmm...Wait." she said playfully going dangerously close to his lips, while he closed his eyes in anticipation, they could play this game she thought.

For a good second or two Neil waited anxiously for his wifes lusicious lips to capture but instead something soft landed at his face. He opened to see his wife a few feet away laughing at his plight and a pillow at his feet.

"Avni...Wait...I will not leave you...Where will you go?...wait." He yelled in frustration running behind her as the home resounded with his frustrated yet playful screams and her occasional giggles...

At Last he was able to catch hold of his notorious wife, sealing their lips forever 😳...going a trance of ultimate bliss...bliss of being away from conspiring Mehtas, Nagging mother in law and obsessed bbf of your wife...It was just the start of their blissful life...


Okay! So this was chap one...Hope you like it...As you can clearly notice ...Avneil have shifted to a new home separately...So the story basically revolves after arrest of Dayawanti...The reason for the spilt...Realisation of love...their newly confessed love...Married life...and not to mention Shweta,Riya and Ali would be there too...


Hoping for a positive review!

Bye!


Sakshi

😳

precap: first night
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Index 😉

Chapter one~ home sweet home - pg 1

chapter two~ First night pg 3

Chapter 3~ One by all means pg 3😳

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4871475&PID=143130502&#p143130502

Chapter 4: Playful mornig page 5

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4871475&PID=143588212&#p143588212
Edited by Crazy_Saks_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Read the first chapter...It was cute but short...
AvNeil in their seperate house..loved it...
Plz update soon and make chapter little longer :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Fantastic prologue
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey want to read more Sakshiii
Update asap
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow!! Aisa chamtkar bas hum fans hi kar sakte h...
Yaar tu apna idea. CVs ko de na..
Unka dimaag waise bhi aajkal ghuma hua h.. Jab dekho beech mein se abruptly scenes gaayab kr rhe h.. Pata nai kya chal rha unke mind mein..
Waise your story sounds good..
Update soon to reveal more..
Waiting for updates..

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Posted: 8 years ago
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I just loved it
the apartment is Neil's studio right?
we had to keep ourselves happy with the fanfic 😆
give Ali n Rhea too😃
Happy writing
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Posted: 8 years ago
#8
Chapter : First night

"Neil...?" Avni called out coming out of the restroom wearing a red silky nighty to find her husband vanished. Maybe he too went out to change into night suit she thought and went out near the windowsill.

The day was quite hectic but she was happy,happy to be able to live with her one true love, to get married to a man who loves her to moon and back. smiling dreamily she touched her mangalsutra delicately remember how happy she felt when Neil declared his love for her infornt of everyone when they blamed her of having an extra martial affair with ali.He was the only one who stood for her against everyone even his bebe. The content she felt when she realised Neela ma was right, her love wasnt doomed.. it was RECIPROCATED!! and the bliss she felt when they got remarried again in court with DD and Neela ma as witnessess..

"Red suits you." Neil whispered against her ears making her jump out of her wits end..

"Neil...you almost killed me" Avni said with a heavy breath trying to slow down her hearts speed.

"Oh! am really sorry for that but now you are killing me with your savange looks dear wifey." he smirked seeing the effect he was having on her as he traced the contours of her trembling lips with his rough fingers .

"NEIL.." She managed to whisper as he came way more closer."

"Hmm.." he said absentmindedly as he stared at her lips with pure passion and love and gently kissed her on her shoulder.

"STOP!" She said pushig him away reluctantly.

Neil stood agaped at his wifes action, an hour before she was happily kissing him, then what happened now? was she not ready? was he rushing things ? if yes then he would not get physical with her until she gets ready. but right now he needed to know the reason behind her hesistance.
.

"we cant do this" she said firmly almost killing herself by voicing the words out.



"Why?" he asked frustrated.


"Because your family still havent accepted our relation?
dont you think we should wait till then. "


This is it? She was rejecting his love for the people who questioned her character ...like seriously? He thought n got more angry.


"okay fine then. if this is it. am going and sleeping of the couch. there is no point in staying here. " he said with hurtful eyes.


"But neil" she said feeling guilty.

"no avni you care for others but you dont care about your husbands feelings.. theres no point in arguing here. m going. GOOD NIGHT. " He said stompig away.


precap. Avni convincg neil & Avneil romance.😳

Edited by Crazy_Saks_ - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: pri12

Awosme...

Plz continue soon



thanks.

btw we do ship same couples...i ❤️ arshi shivika avneil rikara and rumya...😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Chapter 3 : One in all senses 😳
Ting Tong! Ting Tong!

Continuous ring sounded all through the apartment but noone opened the door all he met was silence...fear suddenly gripped him he had been ignoring all her calls and msgs from morning.. what if she was in trouble? She still had enemies out there...what if dayawanti was arrested, her outside network was not to be underestimated...No! she might be asleep he calmed himself and opened the door with the spare key.

what he saw after getting in was a sight to behold. the whole house was lit with scented candles and lamps..he was still contempleting the situation when two dainty embraced him from behind. " "Neil." He heard the whispered and he didnt need to tell who it was. Her jasmine fragnance intoxicated him.

He turned around and took in the eternal beauty infornt of him.

"avni..." she tried to speak but she stopped him.

"shush! am sorry for ruining our first night with my words but now i will compensate for it." she said and got onto her toes and sealed her lips with his.

The anger.. the hurtness.. the frustration all went away as raw love passion and lust for his wife groped him. Clutching her by her waist he lead her to their bedroom which was decorated by roses petals and candles. Still kissing her fiercely he laid her on the bed.. parting away for a second he got up and supported him himself on his left elbow so as to not to put all his weight on her petite form. kissing her collarbone he took her knuckles in his hand and kissed them softly as he stared at her angelic body wrapped up in a designer red saree.. "You look ravishing. Red really suits you well. " he said taking her lips again with his..while Avni flushed thinking about what was about to follow as he hurriedly tugged at her saree pallu ... they were definitly going to be one tonight..one in all ways 😳


Author note. i know it ended abruptly but i m really bad at writing smug. sry. but you r open to imagine avneil consummation night. sry if it was to short. but my exams dates are getting pretty close so m really very sry.


PRECAP: Next morning 😳

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