Metanoia - OnTrack SS - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Excellent plot. Superb writing as always.👏
Happy to see that they are expressing and addressing their individual problems and turmoils rather than expecting the other person to read their minds.👏
Would love to read more.Do continue.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Congo Di for your result...
Lovely update... He believes her...She told him the truth... And still pinky is blaming Anika... Really want her OMM...
Waiting for the next part... Update soon...
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Posted: 8 years ago
#13
Haiii Harshu,
Congrats for the result.
I have read your special shot silver lining and it was special.
Now coming to this update, I loved Anika's question to that trust issue 👏
I want to witness something like that in the show.

And I think promises are meant to be broken or kept depending on the circumstances 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
hmm cant imagine what to say right now
lots going on
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Posted: 8 years ago
#15
Interesting.
Looking forward to more.

Congrats on your result.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Harshada 🤗
Its amazing update, i had never thought that anika would say smthing like that in t situations where shivaay know t truth.
shivaay's only lines 4 trust make him listin so much frm anika...
lets see whats nxt on t card.
congo 4 mrks, they are best thing a student love to tell(if gud) like me either they r my 12th class or of clg, when u dnt open ur books.
i hope u will nt broke the promise, even if they r meant to broke.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Hello Harshu!!😳

Congratulations for your result!!🤗⭐️👏 So happy about your result!!😃

As always the concept is just fabulous..⭐️They are blaming each other..😈Loved Annika's outburst!!⭐️ And I wanna see your version of Pinky's OMM..😉A pretty please..😳 Loved it dear!!

Update soon!!😃

Love,
Rusha
Edited by RushaSen - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Amazing start Harshada.. [❤️ As usual, you've got me thinking as to what is churning in Shivaay's mind now? 🤔
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome start.
Loved it.
Eagerly waiting for the next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congratulations sweetheart ❤️ I am so happy for you and I can actually feel the excitement coming andar se because you scored so great in English. And I damn know the feeling so well. Did I ever mention that English is my favourite subject ? Lol now I am rambling but it's so so good to see you rambling once in a while and to see you so happy :')
About the SS, congrats on a new one. Baaki toh I have decided that I am not qualified to give comment on your work. But this one was honest shot. Bilkul dil se niklne wala ❤️
And and I have one new word to add for your writing. You write so delicately that it's like the word was made to put in your fic. * If that made sense at all*
Anyways take care and I read your reply at page 98. The only word I could find was my incoming chocolates 😆
I want them jaldi okay?
P.S: I am totally rambling here I know but today I am having those extreme teenager wala giddy mood swing.

Ocean bhar ke pyaar ❤️
The One who Can Not Be Named.

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