SS:tum hi ho updated part 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank u guys for all the love and appreciation on my first attempt which motivated me to write more ...So i have an idea for this story ...do tell if you want me to continue it or not

Part 1
It has been 2 yrs since Annika Shivaay's remarriage ,everything was going smooth for Oberoi clan, Rikara has just accepted each other completely and Ruvya were also getting married soon , the preparations were going on for their sangeet ceremony
Anika was roaming here and there managing everything " bhaiyaa vo flowers ache se lgana waha ...aur caterers aaye ki nhi ...uff pareshaan ho gyi hu main sb 2 rs wala kaam kr rhe h ".suddenly she felt two arms around her waist "kya h shivaay aapko koi kaam nahi hai kya "
Shivaay kept his chin on her shoulder and mumbled"hai naa apni patni ka khyaal rakhna jo subh se itni busy hain ki breakfast tak nhi kiya "
Annika turning around still in his arms to face him " shivaay mera sch me man nhi h subh se michmachi ho rahi h mrko ...thakawat ki wajh se shyad ...bs ek baar sangeet ache se ho jaye .."
Shivaay half hugged her " mujhe kuch nhi sunna ..chlo mere saath .. maine tumhare liye soup bnaya hain tum vo to khaa hi skti hu ...chlo ab " and dragged her by hand to dining table and pushed a chair for her and made her sit on it by , sitting opposite to her
Annika said exasparated "shivaay aap bewajah pareshaan ho rhe hain ...main thik hu " and tried to get up
Shivaay held her by hand and made her sit again "samjh nhi aata tumhe chup chaap baitho...dikh raha kitni thik ho ...shakal dkho apni itni pale lg rhi ho , brought forward a spoon to her mouth
Annika relucantly opened her mouth and he fed her " Stupid singh oberoi ..har waqt tadi me rehte hain "
Shivaay kept on feeding her "kaha na chup chaap khaao "
Annika wiping her lips with napkin"hogaya aapka ..soup khatam ...jaun main bohot kaam h mujhe " and got up
Shivaay held her hand and turned her suddenly making her crash on his chest " Annika dhyaan rkha kro apna ..tumhe pta hain na tumhe kuch bhi hota to jaan nikal jati h meri " and kissed her forehead
Anika relaxed in his arms and kept her head on his chest "aapke hote hu mujhe kuch nhi ho skta "
Omru entered at same time ..Rudy winked at om and said loudly to catch their attention " O dkha apne bhaiyaa bhabhi ka kuch nahi ho sakta , sangeet mera hain aur romance inko sujh raha hain "
On hearing rudy's voice both moved apart and anika rolled her eyes at shivaay " sab aapki galti hain"
Shivaay stammered "maine kya kiya"
Rudy moved to stand between annika and shivaay " bs billu billi ka kuch nahi ho sakta ..har waqt bs romance ..kabhi is pillar k peeche kabhi uss"
Om winking at rudra "shi kaha dumbell singh oberoi ne pehli baar ..guys already tumhre shaadi aur function itni baar ho chuke ..ab kisi aur ko bhi mauka bhi do " and highfived rudy
Both laughed at their expense while annika stared angrily at shivaay
Shivaay hiting rudra on back of his head " hogya tera ...taayaar nahi hona tujhe "
Rudy rubbing back oh his head " haa to isley to aaya tha ..aap dono kuch zyda ki busy the" and laughed again
Shivaay taking angry steps towards rudy said " rudy sangeet pe dulhe ke face par bruises ache nhi lagega na ..to chup " to which omkara laughed loudly
Rudy holding his ears " dhokhebaaz O ..acha sorry main to bhabhi se puchne aaya tha ki konsi sherwani phnu in dono me se "showing her two sherwani
Annika came forward and took gold one from rudy's hand " yeh wali achi hai ...bhavya se matching bhi h ...ek dum khidkitod lgoge "
Rudy hugged her " thanks bhabhi ..main jaake taayar hota hu " and then winking at shivaay said "bhaaiya aap continue kar sakte ho romance ..hum jaa rhe h chlo O " , left running fearing shivaay's reaction
O lauged at his antics " pagal hain yeh ladka ..shaadi ho rhi hain par bacha hi rhega ..acha guys main bhi chlta hu gauri ne kaam bhi diya tha aur agar nahi kiya na to pta h na "
Shivika cut Om in between " to ek jhaap me deewar pe saith jaaye be" and both laughed looking at each other
Om smiled "choti si hain ..par bohot jaan hain usme ..bye guys " and left
Annika turned facing "chlo main bhi jati hu ..mujhe tayyar bhi hona h "
Shivaay -"thik hai ..pr please dont tire yourself out"
Annika smiled at shivaay " acha baba .." and stared walking
Shivaay smiled at her back "pagal ladki"
Annika turned and said " suna maine ..bagad billa"
Shivaay smirked at her "tabhi kaha ..jaao ab and take care "
It was evening and oberoi mansion was decorated in colours of red and white looking heavenly
Shivaay looked for annika here and there "kaha chli gayi yeh ladki " suddenly saw Omru at corner and moved towards them , took appreciative glance at rudy and said " aaj to dumbell oberoi ..sach main acha lag raha ..haina Om "
Om winking at shivaay " acha to lgega pehli baar pure kapde jo pehne hain " and highfived shivaay to which shivaay laughed loudly
Rudy pouting at them " apne hue paraye ..dushman hua zamana..ek to vaise hi main nervous hu ..upar se aap dono" and wiped fake tears
Shivaay controlling his laughter " dkh nervous to hona hi chahiye ..yaad hai tune hi kaha thaa married aadmi sirf bacho ka diaper badal sakta hain ,remote ka channel bhi nhi badal skta ..aur teri wali to cop hain ...soch ek galti aur jail k andr "
Om smirking at shivaay" aur vo bhi bina bail ke" hearing which rudy imagined the time bhavya handcuffed him to stop her from interfering in her work
Rudy stammered " bhaaa...iyaa. O kya hoga mera "
Shivom smirking " jo hoga manzoore khuda hoga" at laughed looking at each other
gauri came listening to their conversation" kyu pareshaan kr rhe hain aap dono rudy bhaiyya ko ..aur aap omkara ji humne aapko ek kaam bola tha kiya aapne "
Om sheepishly " vo main bhool gaya "
Gauri dragging him by his hand " aap chaliye aapko hum btate h ..ekdum bhullakad chirote ho aap "and luking at shivru said " hum aate h ..aur haa bade bhaaiya aapki nazre jine dhoondh rahi hai vo bhavya ko leke aaygi " smirking left from there
Shivaay satisfied at her answer looked and rudra and said tu bhavya se pyaar karta hai na ?"
Rudy smiling " bohot zyda ...socha bhi nahi tha ki main bhi kisi se pyaar kar sakta hu "
Shivaay looking proudly at his brother kept his hand on rudy's head affectionately " to bs baaki sab bhool jaa kyuki jab tak vo tere saath hogi teri har mushkil aasan ho jaygi ..itna yaad rakh pr kabhi bhi uss pyaar ko for granted mat liyo ...meri wali galti kabhi mat kario"
Rudy hugged him overwhelmed with emotions " bhaiyya maine jo seekha hain aapse seekha aur rahi baat pyaar ki to aap jis shiddat se pyaar karte ho koi nhi kar sakta ..chahe vo hume ho ya annika bhabhi ko"
Shivaay wiping rudy' s tear " tu bhi ek dum sissy hain ..bas kar rona ..warna photos kharab aaygi teri"
Rudy composing " main kaha ro raha ...aap ro rhe hain

Part 2 : pg 2
Part 3 : pg3
Edited by kavleen17 - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Awsome
Loved obros and shivika a little moments
Rudy my favourite is finally getting married.
Really eager to read more
Keep writing
Much love!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#3
amazing update 🤗
hope its only 4 shivika n omru.
PLz cont. soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#4
aww so cute
lovely
hehe my sweetie rudy
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Posted: 8 years ago
#5
So cute
Rudra and bavya are getting married
Shivay ko romance sooj raha hai
Update soon please
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2
Shivaay controlling himself " chl bs ab koi sad baatien nahi ..aaj tera sangeet hai ..aaj sirf khushiyaan hogi har jagh"
At the same time , lights dimmed and a spotlight fell on the stairs from where Annika was bringing Bhavya . Anika was dressed in a golden colour crop top and a skirt with a pink border , whereas Bhavya being the bride to be was dressed in traditional maroon colour lehnga choli
Shivaay looking mesmerised at Annika " kitni sundar lag rhi hai ...ekdum khidkitod khubsurat "
Rudy looking at Bhavya " bhaaiyaa main to apni wali ko lene jaa rha hu .. aap dkhlo ki aapko bs bhabhi ko yhi se ghoorna h ya bhabhi ki languaga me kahu to taadna hain ya unke paas jana hai " laughing moved towards bhavya
Annika as if sensing shivaay looking at her looked up , met her eyes with shivaay ,blushing mumbled to herself " iss bagad bille ka kuch nhi ho sakta , sab kuch aankhon se hi keh dete hain , agar mooh se tareef kardege to inki height kum ho jayegi na "
Shivaay as if in daze moved towards her , took her hands and brought it to his lips and kissed it " tum bohot sundar lag rahi ho "
Anika blushed and lowered her eyes and whispered " haa tabhi to itni der se taad rahe the " to which shivaay chuckled
Shivaay turned her around and kept his chin on her shoulder and whispered " haa to biwi ho tum meri .. pura haq hai mujhe " and kissed on her bare shoulders
Anika mumbled embarrased " shi..vaay kya kar rahe ho sab hai yaha "
Shivaay removed stray hairs affectionately from her shoulder " to kya annika ...apni patni se romance karne ki permission nahi chahiye mujhe"
Annika lips curved into a smile " aap aur aapki tadi"
Shivaay turned her still in his arms and kissed her on forehead " acha vo sb chodho ... chlo mere saath ab sab preparations hogayi hai aur guest aane mein time hai to tab tak kuch khaa lo " and dragged her towards food counter
Annika said irritately " kya h shivaay ...aap har waqt mujhe khilane me lage rehte ho "
Shivaay brought her plate filled with aloo puri and fed her morsel by morsel
Annika wiping her face with tissue " hogaya mera ...chle ab guest aate hi hoge " and both linked hands and went towards entrance
After some time , sangeet was going on in full swing . All the couples were enjoying to the fullest . While dancing suddenly anika fell unconcious , shivaay rushed towards Annika and took her head in his lap " Annika aankhen kholo , kya hua h tumhe ..."
Omru and gauri bhavya rushed towards them
Shivaay shouted " somebody call the damn doctor "
Om said " main bulata hu doctor ko"
Gauri brought a glass full of water and sat near shivaay" bade bhaaiya yh chidkie bhaujai par ..kya pata unhe hosh aa jaye"
Shivaay dipped his hand in water and sprinkled droplets on annika to which annika slowly tried to open her eyes and stammered .."shivv..aay"
Shivaay brought her hand to his lip and kissed it tenderly with tenderly " chup bilkul chup ... jab pata tha tabiyaat thik nahi hai to kyu itni uchal khud kar rahi thi "
Rudy sat near annika " haa bhabhi aap bhi na ...dara diya humme ..agar aapko do min aur hosh nahi aata na to bade bhaaiya ne to sabki oh my mata hi krdeni thi " to which bhavya replied " haa bhabhi aur hum to dar hi gaye the .. pta chle apne sangeet wale din hi bhaaiya ko arrest karna padta "
Gauri sensing shivaay's turmoil " chlo bas bohot hua ..bade bhaaiya aap bhabhi ko leke room me chlo omkaraji doctor ko late hi hoge
Shivaay lifted annika in his arms much to her protest which was met with a glare and took her to room . He placed her gently on a bed and covered her with a blanket and was leaving when annika held shivaay' s hand " shivaay baat bhi nahi karege mujhse "
Shivaay still facing away from her hiding his tears " kyu karu ..tumhe bada farak padta h "
Annika tried to get up to which shivaay turned hurriedly and made her lay down " problem kya hai tumhari kyu kissi ki baat nahi sun sakti"
Annika grabbed his hands and made him sit down near her and wiped his tears " farak padta hain bohot farak padta kyuki I love you mere bagad bille ..par kyu karte hai itni fikar shivaay ...main sachme theek hu ..bs shayad thakawat ki wajah se"
Shivaay hugged her overwhelmed " pyaar hai isley fikar krta hu ...tum jaanti bhi ho tumhe aise behosh dekh kar kya haalat ho gayi thi meri ...mujhe laga main tumhe kho duga "
Annika soothing him " main aapka peecha itni aasani se nhi chodne wali ...samjhe aap"
Shivvay hugging her even tighter " aur main chahta bhi nahi ... na main khud kahi jauga , na tumhe kahi jaane duga ". Shivaay moving away from hug looked
In her eyes and said firmly .." tumhe kuch hone se pehle Shivaay singh oberoi ki jaan jaygi aur SSO ki jaan itni aasani se nhi jaygi "
Annika overwhelmed hugged him again and felt her eyes drooping in sleep , shivaay looked at her and kissed her again " jab tak doctor nahi aata isse sone deta hu" and properly arranged her on bed . He took her hand in his and whispered softly so as to not wake her up "tum meri jeene ki wajah ho Annika , sabka khayal hai tumhe bas apne alava ... par mere hote hue tumpe aanch bhi nhi aaygi because Mrs Annika Shivaay Singh oberoi I love you .


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Posted: 8 years ago
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aww so sweet
i am thinking rudy is getting his wedding gift early..
haha rudy chachu and bhavya chachi.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This caring and loving nature of shivaay is awsome
Loved to what extend he cares for her
Making updates
Really eager for next chapter
Much love!
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Posted: 8 years ago
#9
wow.. this is amazing n beautiful..
continue sooonish .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#10
Okay now we know what is up with anika
Buddhu singh oberoi papa banne wale hai
Awww

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