Harharaiyke Raita Phail Gaya!

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Posted: 8 years ago
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BASHERS STAY AWAY

Hello Everyone, I am Poorva ... An active RiKara writer from the DBO & IB forum quite inactive for the last few days 😆 ... So right now I decide and do this post instead of any story because I am really frustrated and annoyed as an audience ... About the show, I used to watched bits and pieces of ShivIka chemistry and light hearted OmRu moments before and I loved them even when I was not a TRP viewer of the show ... Then came the first ever spinoff and I loved RiKara chemistry, I belong to their fandom and watched the show after the merger anticipating RiKara story but now its not just about ... Gauri or Om ... Its about the whole team, the writing, the execution ... Everything is literally messed up ... As a neutral viewer I was looking forward to some family based light hearted and dramatic content ... I willingly watched the IB space investing around 45 minutes of my day... And now I do not want to watch IB because it is stagnant ... ShivIka is getting remarried ... For reasons that have to be handled maturely ... Having seen their depth of love and emotion for each other ... Both of them still questioning each other ... ' KYA FARQ PADTA HAIN?' sounds weak ... RiKara is just absent in the attendance sheet when the biggest misunderstanding which was a hindrance in their relationship gets cleared by a guest appearing character in the most casual ways ... RuVya who need to have a strong baseline to all the written moments that bring them closer ... Is busy concentrating on many outside elements ... The show has three different kinds of relationship levels to explore and express where ShivIka is married and in love, RiKara needs to make efforts to make their marriage work and RuVya need to be declared as officially in love, there are so many elements that can be brought into the sphere ... There is so much scope ...
About the current marriage track, I say it would have suited RiKara or RuVya much more than the eldest couple ...

For now that Om has realized that his wife of circumstantial ritual is naive, innocent and so not a gold digger that he presumed ... This could have been the time that Om could have started to claim right over her to make all the wrong into right ... For all the angst, emotion and pain ... RiKara was a perfect fit in the frame, most importantly their marriage could have been made legal ...

We know the RuVya are individually attracted to each other, they stay together under the same roof ... So why could they not be given a marriage of circumstantial clash like that of his brothers ... RuVya will be reasonably bound together then ... Again here angst, emotion and ache could have played their part well ...

For ShivIka ... More important should be to find out the truth of Pinky and the revelance of Anika's big reason of giving up on her marriage within three days ... The whole illegitimacy drama made Om to be the one when he is absolutely not! Birth is never a joke so why not just expose the whole truth and let ShivIka handle their life

As I said RiKara have many issues to sort out and many things to talk about

Let RuVya experience how it feels to fall deeply in love ...

My point being that the story has to move forward and the writers need to understand that there are many other interesting things to show in an hour's slot other than planning repitive marriages ...

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Poooruu di 🤗 A big jhappi to you.

Only if the writer could think as maturely as you!

Right now the story is making 0 sense. We fans are fighting about screen space and such when the couple who get the most is making no sense too.! They just have more time to showcase that. 🤣

The baby track was absolutely illogical and unnecessary. The couples esp Shivika and Rikara were going through a turning point in their relationship, and instead of exploring that feelings, we were forced to watch the boys playing hide and seek with the baby and the girls.

Right now the wedding drama makes me wanna pull my hair out. Yesterday's epi made me lose few brain cells too! Heights of randomness! The Ring got more footage than the misunderstanding clearance of RiKara ! The ring got more screen space than Rikara! Sigh! The writer instead of the swapping of the grooms, brides and the reboots could focus on Shivika's internal issues that is trust and insecurities. With all these unnecessary drama the issues will be brushed under the rug leaving them intact!

About RiKara I dont even want to say! The misunderstanding which was the base of their relationship was touched and cleared by a total stranger within a minute. Frankly I sometimes feel I am watching 4 different serials in 1 hour. Tejvi are included too. It feels they cut and paste 4-5 min of Rikara and Ruvya scenes into the middle, the scenes which look out of the blue lacking continuity and transition. .

I am unhappy with the way the way they are shaping up bhavya. Forget the flying and stuff, what is she doing in OM? And even she is, can we focus on her relationship with others too? Like personally I want an interaction, a conversation between Om & Bhavya seeing they both have lot dard inside them.

Tejvi angle is above me and as you know I have stopped watching the serial on Tv. Not gonna do unless I get some stability in the characters and the plot.

Eagerly waiting for this marriage to end. So that all the couples will be back on track and we will see them focusing on some REAL issues between them.

Edited by Priya_Iyer - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Forgot to add,

We expect and need growth in characters but the writers are hell bent on Butchering them.
Edited by Priya_Iyer - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I agree to mostly everything you said. The current track they are showing looks too immature for Shivika. They are supposed to have more depth in their relationship by now than the equation they are showing between them. One thing I disagree is that this track would suit Rikara or Ruvua. I very strongly say this track absolutely don't fit Rikara. I agree it would hav been the best fit for Ruvya based on where they are at their relationship. I could not bring myself to watch the show this week as nothing, nothing makes sense. Neither the Shivika stuff they are showing or the things Gauri is doing to bring them together makes sense to me. It all lacks maturity and looks like some stupid child play.

We have three beautiful couples in the show at various stages in their relationship and instead of shaping their stories beautifully, the writer is stuck in some fantasy land refusing to let one couple move forward, she likes them stagnant and keeps them moving in circles in the exact same place. Writer also refuses to spend any time or effort in the other two couples. I have given up hoping for anything good to come out of Rikara or Ruvya while Shivika will get chewed like a flavorless chewing gum again and again and again.
Edited by BIaddict - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Personally, I don't think any of the pairs needed this wedding track now, but it looks like SP's planned the separation to lead up to this already planned grand August triple shaadi. Unfortunately for the writers and SP the audience preferred Shivika together rather than apart so the post separation track was scrapped and she came back to OM. After the merge they are rebooting Shivika's old tracks to fill the void of the scrapped tracks while Ruvya's old DBO tracks are still being used, and Rikara was left without a track.

Every other episode all the characters flip to match the current track, which ruins the whole flow of the show. This is the result of last minute changes due to TRPs, the other show's needs, and SP's august demand steering the show into a weird place to make the shaadi happen. Gul really needs to hire more writers because how are they supposed to write for three shows at the same time. Nothing makes sense after the merge its all just fillers and massive dragging. Only two things happening right now: the shaadi and Svetlana track. The young generation/villains are either trying to stop the wedding or make it happen while Tejvi/Pinky is all about Svetlana track. There is nothing else going on the show. The characters are incorporated in these two tracks, but nothing is happening for the characters individually or the show in general. Writers are just stalling by keeping Shivika apart until the wedding and stalling Rikara's track because they don't seem to have any ideas for them right now.

Everything changes in an episode or its a reboot track. Look at how Tejvi's trap Svetlana plan made sense at the beginning, but now Svetlana is trapping them so we got this new dead boyfriend angle. The whole thing is completely unnecessary and has nothing to do with their original plan to get Tej's dirty secrets back. Watch after the wedding Svetlana will take over the show and it will be all about the secrets she has or knows. The writers were never good at multitasking, but it will be even worse now. With a hour slot at least one character should have a decent track, but everything is a mess. The writers are clearly struggling, but Gul doesn't seem to care.
Edited by yellomellow - 8 years ago

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