My First story :Love by chance Part 10 pg 128 Oct 8 - Page 36

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: divz9769

interesting teaser

pls continue soon


I will update soon..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: harshiita

How's ur health harshii..
I hope now u r better..


Yes dear now I m much better..
Thx for ur concern.. 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hlw frnds I'm so happy bcoz this story completes 50 pages this is just bcoz all of you... So thank you every one for ur love and support... 😛 Now I don't waste ur time here is next update.. Enjoy..


Part - 6



Mihir - OK I will talk with her than inform you bt rememember one thing that don't use this madrasan word in front of her..okk
Raman nodded..then he looked mihir with naughty smile..

Mihir - what ? Why are you smiling like this..

Raman - wo bhai can I ask you something..mihir nodded then he asks - waise bhai Bhabhi ki koi bhn h..
Mihir - kyu tu kya krega jaanke ..

Raman - arey bhai ap mujhe glt smjh rhe ho mai to bs isliye puchh rha tha ki agr ho to WO bhi Bhabhi ke sath aa jaye hmlogo se Milne..

Mihir - PR wo kya kregi wahan aakar tujhe to mihika se milna h naa..

Raman - haa bhai BT mai lovebirds ke beech mai akela bore nhi hona chahta or naa hi aap dono ke beech kabaab mein haddi banana chahta hu to jb ap log apne mein busy hoge so then me and she will talk and pass our time..saying he looks on mihir for his answer..

Mihir - oh isliye tu puchh rha tha okk mai mihku se bolunga Thk h BT I can't promise bcoz uski maa dono ko ek sath jldi bhejti nhi..

Raman - okk bhai ..

***iyer house***

Ishita was watching her favorite cartoon Doreamon with full concentration meanwhile mihika came after talking with Mihir about their meeting ..she sit besides ishu & says - ishu abhi naa mihir ka phn aaya tha tha or wo keh rha tha ki uska bhai mujhe milna chahta h to tu nhi mere sath chalegi yrr mujhe akele thoda awkward lagega bol saying she turn & saw ishita who didn't pay any attention towards her talk bcoz she is watching her favorite cartoon..

Mihika (stand up in anger) - and switch off the TV then ishita saw her with confused expression..

Ishita - what happened akka ? TV kyu band kiya u know naa mera doreamon aa rha tha plz open the TV..

Mihika - yahan mai itni der se tujhse kitni important baat kr rhi hu or tune apne ish bekaar se cartoon mein busy h..

Ishita - don't you dare akka mere doreamon ko bekaar mat bolo he is sooo cute ..saying she make angry pout...

Mihika - achha Teri bhn se jyada wo important h thk h dekh kiya aj tujhe saying she starts fake cry..ishita feels bad
Ishita - sorry akka saying she held her ears..

Mihika - OK I forgive you now plz listen..

Ishita - okk BT iske baad ap mujhe doreamon dekhne dogi okk

Mihika - okk meri mata tu or tera doreamon love ...now listen saying she narrates every things with him..

Ishita - ohh to ye baat h to prblm kya h jao naa jiju ka bhai h to mil lo..

Mihika - plz tu bhi chl mere sath..
Ishita - me pr mai kya krungi apke sath Jake..

Mihika - plz yrr plz plz plz plz plzzz..
Ishita - OK okk chalungi listening this mihika hugs her saying thank you..

Ishita - BT sirf doreamon dekhne ke baad ..
Mihika starts laughing & said - okk meri doreamon deewani..tu dekh ke phr shaam ko chlte h okk..ishita nodded..

***bhalla house***

Mihir was working on laptop when toshi came and sit besides him & says - puttar ye le maine tere waaste badaam ka halwa bnaya h khake dekh kaisa bna h..saying she offer him a spoonful halwa

Mihir taste it &says - ammm wah maa it's so yummy aapke kaisa halwa to koi bna hi nhi skta ..

Toshi - hmm ek baar Teri votti aa gyi na tb maa se jyada uske haaton ka swaad aayega tujhe..

Mihir - no maa aisa kbhi nhi hoga qki apki jagah koi nhi le skta saying he hugs her..meanwhile Raman also came & said - that's not fair maa you always make bhai's fav dishes BT not for me saying he make cute Pout..

Mihir & toshi ji both laughs on his antics..then toshi ji called him..then trio hugs together.. Toshi ji starts feed both of them together and they also feeds her ..

Toshi - achha Now I m going mujhe rasoi mein bhut kaam h saying she went from there.. When she left Raman asks - waise bhai apki baat hui Bhabhi se..

Mihir - ha aj shaam ko street cafe mein Milne ka fix hua h..
Raman - or unki wo bhn wo aayegi na ..mihir nodded ..

Raman - waise bhai apne Bhabhi ke bare mein to bta diya BT you didn't not told about her family..

Mihir - ushe appa I mean papa ministry mein the ab retired h or maa ek house wife h BT she is very strict..

Raman - or unki bhn..
Mihir - waise beta tujhe uske baare mein bhut janna h kahi koi baat to nhi..

Raman - arey nhi bhai mai to generally puchh rha tha apko nhi btana to koi nhi ..

Mihir - arey aisa nhi h achha btata hu wo kaise h you know she is our saviour ..
Raman - saviour mtlb ?

Mihir - u know she always help mihika to meet me and also save mihku from Amma 's scolding.. Bs ek hi pareshani h bechari ke sath ..

Raman - wo kya bhai then mihir narrates him her things breaking habits listening this Raman starts laughing when mihir says - hey Raman don't laugh on her yrr she is so sweet smjha ..

Raman - okk bhai waise ish things breaking Queen ka naam kya h..
Mihir - ishu..

Raman - wah bilkul sahi naam h jb itna samaan todegi to issue to hoga hi na..saying he again starts laughing then mihir glared him & says - her name ishita pyar Se use ishu bulate h issue nhi smjha ..

Raman - okk bhai mai to mazaak kr rha tha ap gussa q ho the ho..

On the other side mihika also told ishita about Raman & his all kaarnaame including future plans fiasco...

**coffee shop***

IshMi was waiting for RaMi arrival BT they are taking lots of time..

Ishita - kya akka pichhle aadhe change se hm wait kr rhe h PR wo log abhi tk aaye nhi jiju to hmesha time aate h..

Mihika - ha ishu mihir hmesha mujhse phle aata h BT first time wo itni der LGA rha h..

Ishita - I think ye SB unke Landon return bhai ki wajah se ho rha h jrur wahi der kr rha goga saying she made faces..

Mihika - don't say like this for him yrr we don't know what's the matter ..meanwhile mihir came & says - sorry sorry sorry ladies late ho gye..

Mihika - BT why mihir..

Mihir - wo yrr Raman ko apne ek frnd ka call aa gya so..he was saying while ishita glared on mihika and mihika says sorry looking this mihir asks - what's going between you to haa..

Ishita - mai btati hu jiju wo kya h .Maine akka ko bola ki you always came on time BT aj late ho gye so ho na ho its all bcoz of ur brother BT she didn't listen me saying she again glared her..

Mihir - ohh then mihika asks about Raman - waise Raman kahan h ..

Mihir - wo car park kr rha h bs aata hogs..then ishita saying - okk guys mai washroom hoke aati hu saying she turned to go meanwhile Raman also came & both bump with each other.. & mistakenly he put his leg on her ..she winch in pain and push him ans says - can't you see idiot..

Raman - yahi mai tujhe puchne wala tha jhalli ldki phle to khud Bina dekhe chlti h phr mujhe hi attitude dikha rhi h..

Ishita - hey don't you dare to call me with this name okk..

Raman - I will call you by this name only smjhi "Jhalli" ladki..ishita is hell irrigate with him & held his hair then both start pull each other hairs everyone was looking on them suddenly Mimi came and saw them fighting with each other ..


That's all for update.. I hope you all liked it so hit like button & do comments also..

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Edited by harshiidiv - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
fabulous update
jhalli nice name
lovly
both r fighting
awesome
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome chappy
Why he is that much interested to know about her sister
Fight started
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: -Kavya_P-

Awesome chappy

Why he is that much interested to know about her sister
Fight started
Update soon


Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Heyy..
Awesome chapter..

Hahah..Ishu n Her Doraemon..
She is such a baby..
All set to meet..
Raman laughing on Ishu's story..
Issue..😆Ishu..
London Return brother..😆
Omg..Milte hi fight Start..😃
Mimi saw them fighting..

Waiting for the next part eagerly..
Update Soonish..

Thanks for PM..

Take Care..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ishita and doremon...
Cute she is...
Even before knowing each other they started their work...
Jkr and ravan on action...
Waiting for it...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update di.
Raman requested mihir to call mihika with her sister. Mihir informed mihika and Mihika asked Ishita to come with her. Ishita is so cute. Ishra fight in first meeting. Interesting. Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome update
Raman was very much interested to know about mihika's family... He asked him to call her sis too
Ishu was supporting mihika's love 😊... Ishra started their love story with fighting 😉
Continue soon plz
Thanks for pm

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