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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys...This is a joint ff done by nikki_rox (ME!!!!!) and *Adorable_Anu*....Instead of our SZ gang being cadets they are college student...here is the Character Sketch

Manya: New girl in school. Her dad just got posted to Mumbai from Dehli

Akash: Same as in serial

Roopa: Secretly in love with Akash

Rehaan: Loves to tease Kiran. Likes Kiran

Kiran: Smart and NOT irritating...Likes Rehaan

Gopu: Funniest one in the gang. Likes Sanju

Sanju: NOT a Tomboy. Very short tempered.

Om: Speaks clear, fluent Hindi, Manya's childhood friend. Hasn't seen Manya in 2 years since her dad got posted Dehli.Has confused feelings for Manya.

Manya's dad: Not dead. Very fun and loving dad

Our gang (minus manya's dad) are all 20 years old but Akash will be turning 21 in March.

Updates

Part 1 - Page 1

Part 2 - Page 2

Part 3 - Page 2

Part 4 - Page 4

Part 5 - Page 6

Part 6 - Page 7

Part 7 - Page 12

Part 8 - Page 16

Part 9 - Page 17

Part 10 - Page 18

Cheers

Anu & Niks

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Posted: 17 years ago
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sounds interesting...can't wait 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Good..at last you posted it Niks! 😆

Not forgetting also..

Mr.Khanna : Chemistry teacher

Mdm.Jyostna : Their Literature and Form Teacher

And some other characters which will be introduced later in the ff!

Anu
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Posted: 17 years ago
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cooooooool anu and niks...
khanna sir teaches chemi 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys we're (anu and me) are back as promised with the first chappie of *iSHQ hUA*
By the way..the update roster is like i'll post odd no chappies(e.g. 1,3,5 etc,etc) and Anu will post even no chappies(e.g. 2,4,6 etc,etc)
On with the show...

Part 1

Manya had butterflies in her stomach as the train pulled up at Mumbai station. Looking out the window she took in her surroundings. It really felt good to be back after 2 years. She got up, took a bag and followed her family out to the platform. Her dad turned around and said:

D: Waapas aakar kitna achha lag raha hai na?
M: Haan Dad
MM(Mom): Ab chalo hum jaa kar taxi lele. Phir ghar jaakar araam se baat karenge

By the time Manya and her family reached home it was evening and Mom immediately got to work on dinner. After unpacking all the clothes Manya helped Mom lay the table and all three of them sat down to eat.

D: Toh Manya, school ke liye taiyaar?
M: Daaaad...School nahin college. Main abhi bacchi nahin rahii
MM: Lekin hamare liye toh tu bacchi hi rahegi na?
M: Moooom
D: Achha baba thik hai tum bacchi nahin rahi
M: Thank you. Dad mujhe college jaane se dar leg raha hai.Main wahaa kisi ko nahin jaanti. Aggar kisi ne mujhe chahe nahin to...
D: Arre yeh kya. Pehle kahti ho ki ab bacchi nahin rahi phir baccho jaise baat karti ho. College mein kisi ko jaanti nahin to jaan logi aur naye dost banaogi.
M: Haan dad lekin...
D: Manyaaaa darro mat. Log tumhe pasand karenge aur aggar nahin pasand karenge to it's their loss
M:(Smiling)Thanks dad
D: Anytime beta

The Next Day

Manya was waiting for the bus to go to college when a car drove by, splattering Manya's churidaar pants

M: Eh andhe!! Dekh kar nahin chalaa sakte kya?!

The car stops and Akash comes out of the car wearing sunglasses. Slowly he walks towards her and stops right infront of her. Slowly he takes off his glasses and glares at Manya

A: Tameez se baat karo. Kya tum janti ho ki main kaun hoon?
M:(laughs) Arre koi is bechare ki madat kar sakta hai? Isko yeh nahin pataa ki yeh kaun hai

At the bus stop everyone starts laughing as Akash stands there speechless. Then Manya's bus comes and just before she climbs aboard she turns around to face Akash and says

M: Jaakar kisi doctor se apna dimaag check kar lena.Shayad woh aapko bataa sake ki aap kaun hai?

And with that she walked off, leaving Akash seething with anger.


Dats all 4 now folks...Chappie 2 should be up by the end of the week

Till den
Cheers,
Anu n Niks
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Do comment guys..I know there're loads of Silent readers so pls do comment!

Will post next part soon..

Anu
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thats awsum!!!!! luved it! plz do the update soon!!!!! nd try 2 do the updates qwik each time!!!!!!!!!! sorry!! but sumtimes ppl just 4get bout the ff nd dont continue! or like do it 3 months later 😕 but i luved it!! continue soon! luv aakash's entry 😉 nd maanya's nd akash's 1st meeting!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thx for comments those who commented!Lagta not many people here read fanfics.Common yaar..wher is everyone??Anyway..here's the next part..

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Part 2

Manya enters college.She's reading a book while walking.While walking,she bumbs into someone and her books drop to the ground.
M:Hai Ram..Yeh Mumbai mein sab log andhein hain kya?
She and the guy bend down to get the books when they look at each other.They stare at each other.Both of them say together-
M:Om?
O:Manya?

Just then Akash,Om's best buddy walks into the scene
A(thinking):Yeh ladki..mere pichey yahan tak aa gayi..!
Manya looks away,ignoring Om.She gathers her books and walks.Om calls out to her but Manya continues to walk on.Om looks at her walk away while Akash is left confused and left out.

Next scene in the classroom...

Everyone - Akash,Om,Rupa,Rehan,Kiran,Gopu and Sanju are seated.There is an empty seat beside Om which is also in front of Akash.
Mdm Jyostna,their Litereature and Form teacher walks in.
MJ(Mdm Jyostna):Class,I have an announcement to make.
The whole class keeps quiet and looks up.
MJ:We have a new student in college.Her name is Manya Sharma.
Manya walks in.Everyone stares at her.
Akash(whispering to himself):Yeh..Mere class mein..Godd..!
Manya looks around and sees that there is only one empty seat which is next to Om and in front of the guy whom she finds a snob.She reluctantly takes her seat.Om looks happy.On the other hand,Akash glares at her angrily.
MJ:I hope you all will make her feel comfortable here..especially you Om..(because she's seated next to him)

Throughout the Literature lesson,Om keeps trying to talk to Manya to find out why she's ignoring him.
While Akash wonders:Yeh Om is midget ke pichey kyun pada hai?..
Finally class ends and Manya gathers her books and hurries out of the classroom for lunch.

Next scene..in the canteen..

Manya puts her lunch tray down on the table and just as she was about to sit,she remembered that she forgot to get water.
On the way to the drink stall,there was a puddle of water on the floor.She slips on it,as she was about to fall,she feels someone's very strong arms wrap around her waist.She holds him tight on his shoulder preventing her from falling..

Precap
Akash and Manya are arguing.
M:You Saand!
A:Ayee Madam mossaile!..

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That's it guys..Do comment!

Anu

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Pls do coment...
Gosh it looks alot shorter than when we wrote it
Love hugs and kisses
Niks
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Posted: 17 years ago
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suercool..and as 4 comments don't worry i think tht the community willl get more active as we proceed mere sath kuch aisa hi ho raha hai...b/w i love the story

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