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Posted: 8 years ago
Go ahead dear... But you have to adf book cover and prologue too.You can put from chp 1.as there,nobody wrote about cn ff there .You can create a trend.
me toPlanning to put blossom with some changes and extra seq in watt pad.

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shailusri1983

He has become too active and naughty for comfort ever since we came to US. My kiddo loves books and stories. You'll be surprised he usually gives me scenarios and characters and I have to create stories out of them. The Bahubali Sequel which I am writing on Wattpad. He was the one who gave me the initial concept that it would be about Mahendra and Avantika's children, Bhagiradhi and Gajendra. I developed on it later. Similarly, there are a set of exclusive fantasy tales which I and my son share. They are our secret tales. They are about Suzie the Giraffe and Annie the Musical Reindeer.




What an amazing Mother Son duo you make !! Son giving a hand in the story development ... Wow !!!! I am sure he will make an even better story writer than you are !!!

It's A Great Idea to replicate the whole FF on watt pad. But, I am not able to read your Shatru Sesham there. 😲

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Posted: 8 years ago

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What an amazing Mother Son duo you make !! Son giving a hand in the story development ... Wow !!!! I am sure he will make an even better story writer than you are !!!

It's A Great Idea to replicate the whole FF on watt pad. But, I am not able to read your Shatru Sesham there. 😲


Perhaps a lot of FFs with greater views than mine are coming first. Try this. It always works for me. I go to google and type SHATRU SESHAM on Wattpad. It usually comes.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update shailu. Thanks for continuing the ff :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
Congratulations on chapter 50! The crisp update is quite intriguing. I really enjoy reading your Helena.
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Chapter Fifty-One:

At Patliputra outside Acharya Chanakya's Chamber,

Acharya Chanakya and Patrani Helena rushed over to the garden outside to identify who the eavesdropper who had been listening to their conversation was. It turned out to be Malayketu's uncle Veerabahu who was in the last throes of death. As he foamed near the mouth due to the effect of the poisonous dart, he spoke in a broken and choking tone, "Traitors...You cheated...You will not escape...Our vast army...at the backyard of Patliputra..."

Without raising his voice or any change of facial expression, Acharya Chanakya said, "Good riddance! I was thinking all this while that we did not make any arrangements with regard to you. Thank you for making things easier for us."

Helena, though happy to be rid of one of the many enemies of Magadh, was a bit concerned on hearing the last words of Veerabahu, "Acharya...We got rid of Malayketu and also Veerabahu. But what about their huge army sitting in our own backyard. They are sure to retaliate if they suspect that there is some kind of treachery or foul play happening to either Veerabahu or Malayketu. They must have had standing instructions to attack..."

Chanakya: I have an answer for that...

Even before he could complete the sentence, a dense dust of smoke rose up from the empty ground, some distance away from the back of the Patliputra Palace where Malayketu and Veerabahu's army had been stationed. Cries of distant fighting were heard.

Chanakya: Ah...There comes your answer Maharani.

Helena: Wasn't that where Veerabahu's army was?

Chanakya: Yes...the food and drink provided to their soldiers was drugged. So it took care of most of them...and if there were any left, our army seem to be taking good care of them...If you remember, there are two gates at the backyard of our palace. We had specifically requested that Veerabahu's army be stationed in the empty ground between the second gate and the first gate. The drawbridge of the first gate had been drawn up much earlier in the evening citing security concerns and the doors of the first gate firmly secured...By next morning, I assure you that we will be rid of this nuisance...

Helena: That was a really spectacular and well-planned military maneuver. Your planning always leaves me in awe, Acharya.

At Chandragupt's Army Camp,

Chandragupt was giving a motivational speech to his men, "We have received news just now that Kumar Madhav of Peeplivan has won the hand of Princess Malathi of Toshali in the Swayamvar. He is rapidly advancing from the Tosali side of the Magadhan border along with a two Akshouhini Sena. Acharya Chanakya assures me Prince Arjun of Rajnagari will also reach Sitapur within another day from the other side to reinforce our strength with a one Akshouhini Sena. We are already two Aksouhini strong. This is not including the soldiers under Prathpal Gajanan who is within the fortress of Sitapur who are sizable in number. Padmanand with a strength of two Akshouhinis doesn't stand a chance, surrounded as he is from all sides, and heavily outnumbered. It is now or never. I want all of you not to fight for me, but for yourselves, for your families, for your children, for a hope, for a better future where a tyrant and oppressor like Padmanand will never dare to raise his head and curtail our freedom and independence with the yoke of servitude. We will launch our offensive tomorrow morning. That Padmanand should not see the light of another day. Har Har Mahadev!...Har Har Mahadev!...Har Har Mahadev!"

In Chandragupt's Royal Tent,

As he returned to his tent, Chandragupt observed the light of his life and his love, his lovely wife Nandini looking listless, forlorn and lifeless. It seemed as though all her energies had been sapped up. He went and sat beside her.

Nandini: I am sorry. I found myself unequal to attend the military meeting. How did it go?

Chandragupt: Very well! All our men are well-motivated and in a positive frame of mind for tomorrow's battle. ( A long pause ensued after this) And you? Are you too ready for this?

Nandini (ruefully): Maybe yes...Maybe not...I am sorry...I am trying my best...but still...I keep failing some where or the other...If I succeed as a wife...I keep failing as a daughter...Why don't you speak some of your motivational lectures to me as well?...I badly need them now...Even more than your men...

Chandragupt did not say anything. He just sat beside her holding her hands in his looking straight into her eyes. She was comforted by his soothing presence and loving glance. Her troubled and gloomy expression vanished. She smiled softly through her tears as she said, "I don't know how you do it every time! Your mere presence reassures and comforts me and fills me with a hidden strength. I could die this minute for you looking into your eyes like this. I wish for nothing more in my life."

Chandragupt put his hands on her lips, "Hush...no more of those morbid thoughts. No more talk of death. You will live with me for many many more years. You say I motivate you...but do you know who motivates me?...You...are my strength...my inspiration...my motivation. Anybody can do what I am doing...fighting my enemy...but fighting your own is difficult. Nandini, you will find me with you in every walk of life, in ever trial and tribulation, in happiness and in sorrow. Everything that is yours is mine; you are not alone in anything. Any storm of life will have to pass me before it reaches you."

The same night at the Fortress of Sitapur,

Padmanand lay awake in his bed. Sleep persistently continued to evade him. He and his men were in great danger. Pranthpal Gajanan had turned out to be Chandragupt and Chanakya's agent. He had acted as though he had gone against them while he had been acting according to their orders all this while. He had trusted him too easily. He and his entire force were very precariously placed. Open hostilities had not broken between him and Gajanan. In all probability, Gajanan had orders only to detain him and his Sena at Sitapur until Chandragupt could arrive there to take him on.

Suddenly, Padmanand rose up with a jerk, "That is Amatya's secret signal! What is he doing here? He ought to be with Rajkumar Dhananand. So does this mean...no...no...I cannot start having these negative thoughts.

He secretly slipped out of the fortress in the darkness of the night.

Near a secluded mountain henge at some distance from the fortress,

Padmanand: You here...Amatya...and Bhadrasal too...How are things with Rajkumar Dhananand?

Bhadrasal hung up his face at the mention of Dhananand, but Amatya without losing either his confidence nor resourcefulness of speech, "I have three bad news and one good news, Maharaj. Which shall I tell first?"

Padmanand: The bad first!

Rakshas: Rajkumar Dhananand is no longer in our midst.

Padmanand: Heavens support me! Can this get any worse? My son and heir is no more.

Rakshas: Shall I tell the rest or stop, Maharaj?

Padmanand (with a heavy heart) Continue...

Rakshas: Malayketu and Veerabahu have jumped sides and joined hands with Chanakya and Chandragupt.

Padmanand: And...

Rakshas: Prathpal Gajanan is a triple agent. He is working for Chanakya and Chandragupt while pretending to be on our side. Maharaj Chandragupt is converging upon Sitapur with a mighty force from one side while Rajkumar Madhav of Peeplivan in converging from the opposite side along with the Army of Toshali in tow. Kunwar Arjun is also arriving shortly to reinforce the military power of Magadh and Peeplivan. Maharaj, we are surrounded from all sides outside and also within the fortress.

Padmanand: What else is left now? We are literally defeated from all sides and on all counts.

Rakshas: There is Maharaj...Bhadrasal has taken Maharani Durdhara, Durdhara's father, Chandragupt's foster parents, and all the villagers of Patalgram where Maharaj Chandragupt grew up as hostages...and an even more favorable piece of news...Maharani Durdhara is pregnant. She is carrying the first heir of Magadh...Whether Chandragupt has five Akshouhinis Sena or ten, he will never do anything that will endanger the life of his future heir...We can easily buy our freedom and safe passage out of Magadh.

Padmanand (with bated breath) Where are Durdhara and the rest?

Scroll below the same page for Chapter 52. There are five parts in this chapter.

Edited by shailusri1983 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
chanakya tactful and Helena is an able commander in here.
How he drugged the army was so interesting.
Chandini moment after many days and nandini 's doubt as a daughter was predicatable.
chandra motivates his vast army.
Padmanand and Amatya talks were so intriguing.
Looks like they have kept durdhara as captive who bears future heie.
what is he upto?
is he planning to annihilate Chandra's heir and family or just to have them as shield for escape?
dhana death did not bring him much sorrow looks like he anticipated it.Afterall he knows his son 's limits. .
Very eventful update.
please update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
[QUOTE=JanakNandini]chanakya tactful and Helena is an able commander in here.
How he drugged the army was so interesting.
Chandini moment after many days and nandini 's doubt as a daughter was predicatable.
chandra motivates his vast army.
Padmanand and Amatya talks were so intriguing.
Looks like they have kept durdhara as captive who bears future heie.
what is he upto?
is he planning to annihilate Chandra's heir and family or just to have them as shield for escape?
dhana death did not bring him much sorrow looks like he anticipated it.Afterall he knows his son 's limits. .
Very eventful update.
please update soon.
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Padmanand is affected by Dhananand's death. He is just not revealing it outside. We still do not know if he holds Amatya and Bhadrasal responsible for his death. Though Padma knows his son's limits, he is not going to mourn less for him because of that reason. He needs Amatya's and Bhadrasal's contribution right now. When he no longer needs them, he may reveal his true colors. Thank you for a very beautiful review Avantika.

Edited by shailusri1983 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update, Akka! Chandra's speech was fine rhetoric and Amatya-Bhadrasal's move was very shrewd.
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter Fifty-Two (Five Parts):

Part 1

Chandragupt and his allied forces had surrounded Sitapur completely from three sides. The fourth side which was literally impassable comprising of marshy swamps was left open. With the first rays of dawn, Gajanan and his men would open the doors of the fortress from within and Chandragupt and his men would launch their attack on Padmanand with the least possible damage and casualties to their side and inflicting the maximum damage on their enemies.

Just then, all of them were taken aback by a sudden turn of events. Pranthpal Gajanan was pushed off the parapet wall of the fortress near the East Gate of the fortress with a stone tied to his feet.

Chandragupt and the rest of his soldiers averted their eyes for a fraction of a second as an instinctive reaction before they rode to the spot evading and protecting themselves from the onslaught of the archers from the walls of the fortress. A few of Chandragupt's men heaved the dead body of Gajanan on a horse and quickly rode out of range of the Padmanand's archers who continuously kept them under fire.

Chandragupt with a deeply troubled voice, "Is he alive?"

A captain who was examining for signs of life, "No...Instantaneous death. His head is fully smashed...They even tied a huge and heavy boulder to his feet to make sure he would die."

Nandini, her heart palpitating and beating unusually fast, "Then does this mean that our other soldiers inside the fortress are dead?"

Prince Madhav replied, "In all probability!...May be Padmanand knew from the beginning itself...and kept all of us in the dark..."

One of the soldiers who had helped them in pulling and heaving the dead body of Gajanan interrupted their discussions, "I am sorry to interrupt, Maharaj...But I found this scroll lying beside Pranthpal Gajanan's body. It was flung from the parapet wall. I thought it must be important."

Chandragupt in a calm and unruffled voice, "Yes...thank you...You may go now..."

(Turn to the next page for the remaining four parts)

Edited by shailusri1983 - 7 years ago

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