Obros OS: For you

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello everyone!
I'm new here, although I've been watching the show since last August.
I started watching the show for Omkaara, fell in love with Obros and thus my first ever piece. Please comment on how it is.
2 YEARS AGO

Shivaay seemed to be the happiest one, he had finally realized that he was in love, ready to confess it, & also keep his obsession over NKK aside. Moments later, all the happiness went in vain. Yes, a video had the capability to do so. Shivaay was traumatized with Dai maa's half suppressed statement. When he tried to make sense of what she meant, it concluded as, "Om is Bade papa's illegitimate son". Here, NKK didn't mattered to him, all what he was concerned about was his brother, his Om. After the rollercoaster of emotions which he had gone through the day, The Great Wall of Shivaay was in need of support. He wanted his brother in his arms, hug him close & tight that no one could ever think of snatching his Om, away from him. Shivaay's "Kanji aankhein" were looking for his Kara. Only if he knew that Kara was silently looking at him from behind, reading what shivaay yearned for, observantly reading his body composure. Omkaara had brilliant skills of reading someone's mind with just a glance or through their body language. He certainly can't be wrong when it is about Shivaay, his Shivaay, the person who loved him more than anything and anyone ever can.The one because of whom he is alive and standing here. However hard the Great Wall of Shivaay tried to maintain his demeanour, his Om could read it, and shivaay knew it! Shivaay tried to behave as normal as he could. Shivaay turned back, his kanji aankh's search was over, now! He couldn't refrain himself from swiftly moving (yes, he didn't run, he was trying to be normal Naa) towards Om. Om smilingly and suspiciously (not revealing) looking at him. Shivaay took him in a hug, one hand caressing the "khuli zulfein" and the other hand from the behind of his Kara's shoulders pushing kara close to himself, while kissing the nape of his neck. He just couldn't stay away from his Omkaara, his strength and weakness. Omkaara, didn't moved a bit. He stood motionless, with a tenacious grip on shivaay and sporadically rubbing his back, calming him, as if asking him and giving him the strength to speak. (Generally, this role was of Shivaay's)
S: Bhai, tu bada ho gaya, all grown up...hmm?
He said this with both pain and relief in his voice and eyes.
O: Mai Tera Bhai hoon shivaay
He said, with pride reflecting in his voice. This words shook shivaay. For a couple of seconds they were out of the hug and had a look exchange, the patent one! Conveying what the other meant.
Shivaay reverted with the words, "tu mera hi bhai hai", with a tighter grip on his hair and shoulders.
O's words implied that he was trying to behave like his brother, all matured, and taking up some burden from the Great Wall.
They were back into their warm hug. Suddenly, they heard some kinda noise, it was their cry baby, screaming from a far distance, regarding how bad their brothers are who didn't even cared about his craving for scrumptious food made by his bhaiya and O, it was his cheat day, mahn! They broke the hug thinking about the consequences if Rudy found them out getting emotional in his absence. Both of them ran to the kitchen to satiate their "Kumbhkarn" bro. Yes, he ate in similar quantities, as kumbhkarn used to. But this quantity was allowed only on his cheat days.
Next day, Om received the same video which was received by shivaay, the previous day, which led to the "Great wall of shivaay's breakdown". Somehow, the person who had made the video had made it with such skills and manipulative intentions, which led to Om & shivaay's implication to be the same. Om realized that this video was the reason behind shivaay's "tu mera hi Bhai hai". Om felt that he failed miserably in reading his brother's mind & heart this time. Last night he felt that shivaay's gesture meant that he was ready to accept his feelings towards a surname-less girl, with all his heart, and keeping his mind aside. He felt that his shayari: "sach Mai dhal jaatey hai kissay, dil se dohrane ke baad, Ishq par hoga yaqeen ...ishq ho jaane ke baad" goes true for his brother, now.It was all about the last night, now, the circumstances are nowhere close to.
Only did he knew that last night's gesture was for both.
Om too had 2 strokes to survive with, in a single day. 1st, he was an illegitimate child. 2nd, His brother hiding away the truth from him. He was upset that shivaay couldn't overcome his rant over NKK.

Om left OM, shivaay let him go, he knew that his brother needs time to heal. He didn't thought of giving him the explanation for hiding the truth.
Usse waqt chahiye.
Uske shivaay ne Usse sach chupaya hai, which was like a jhooth to him. It definitely ain't a small thing for Om. Om Bilkul bhi jhooth bardasht ni Kar sakta hai, not even for few seconds. Om knew that shivaay did it for him, but it wasn't acceptable for him. He needs time to understand all these things. World is a weird place for Om.

2 months have passed.
Shivaay and Omkaara both didn't had a word with each other, they didn't meet each other. ShivKara were broken without each other. Both wanted the other to get over their obsession and vulnerabilities. Om wanted shivaay to break up with his "NKK" and Shivaay wanted Om to have a break up with "truth". Om didn't want shivaay to judge people based on their surname, Bloodline, & lineage. Shivaay didn't want Om to be fooled up by people, he knew how cruel the world is, he wanted to protect his Om from this brutal world. This change's limit was not only for themselves but for the world. Not only your brother but the world might lie to you, beware brother. You won't judge me if I'm illegitimate, don't judge the world as well, the NKK has nothing to with the person.
The craving to meet each other was brutally destroyed when their vow of getting the other come over their vulnerabilities strike their head. But it was difficult.
Whilst the silent sufferer of the 2 stubborn people's actions & reactions was their baby Rudy.
Although Shivaay tried to not leave him alone and be by his side all the time, Neither O's place could be filled, nor was shivaay's heart and mind in his place, he was suffering as well. His Omkaara wasn't with him.
Baby Ru, behaved like a mature guy ,now, he was no more a baby. He was serious about his studies. He found a friend who could understand him, his Sumo. Sumo came to his rescue when he felt and was lonely. This girl gave him her helping hand. Rudy who was the reason behind everyone's happiness in the family, used to occasionally smile now, because of her. She encouraged him to play basketball when she saw him play once, he was depressed and the wrath of it was removed upon the poor ball. She could see his passion about the sport and also forced him to take part in the matches.
His O had gifted him the same basketball when he was just 5 years old. Although Rudy didn't liked the reason behind the gift, he enjoyed playing with his brothers. O felt that Rudy is all golu-golu and hence gifted him with the gol basketball. Golu, had a gol basketball now. He learnt the sport from his bhaiya and O. Shivaay and Om used to play basketball and hence this was the other way to encourage Rudy into the league. Om had his initial lessons regarding the sport from shivaay. Shivaay stopped jumping to reach high enough to let the ball pass through the basket, but Omkaara did. Shivaay knew how to play it and those jumping lessons were earlier given to Omkaara by him. But he'd didn't jump now, because he wanted Om to win, with a reasonable reason.
MomKaara taught Rudy how to play the game, and Rudy rarely win, when he competed with Om. Om was like a strict mom who wanted his child to learn his lessons through the failures. Now we know why shivaay's height is a touchy topic...and also why Om is the tallest amongst the 3.

Coming back to the present time, Rudra had a crucial match, the next day. Shivaay was informed a week earlier, so that he could take out some time for his Rudy. Rudy texted Om saying that he had a match and Ordered him to attend it.Om didn't revert as it was an order, anyways, Om wouldn't ever revert. Rudy knew he'll be coming.
Match was on, and ShivKara were present there. Both behaved as normal as they could, Hiding all their emotions. They were proudly looking towards their student. Rudy was about to use his cheating technique to win the match. Omkaara & shivaay were very well aware of these techniques of their Rudy. Just a single move and ShivKara were looking at each other. They knew what Rudy was upto. players of opponent team weren't blind to this, they righteously made a huge issue of it...and 1 of them punched Rudy's nose. The others were about to attack, which was when the duo stepped in, as their baby's saviour. Om successfully tricked the other players with his excellent knowledge about the sport and proved Rudy as innocent, although he wasn't! Shivaay was surprised with this and was standing near Rudra. He was pleased to see that Om had finally broken up with "truth", at least for his family. How easily Om lied for Rudra?! Shivaay awaits for the day when Om formally breaks up with "truth" for his special someone. It would also help Om in realizing that people generally lie and it ain't a crime. Someday, his brother would not be left broken with the deeds of the people all over the world, his Om wouldn't fall weak in front of them.
The duo were back to OM, with their injured and overacting Rudy. His nose was broken, Rona dhona toh banta hai?!
While doctor was busy with Rudy's "marham-patti", ShivKara were standing close to his bed, watching their baby's drama.
Shivaay's phone which was lying on the side table begun to vibrate, which grabbed everyone's attention. Shivaay forwarded his hand towards Om, gesturing Om to pass it to him. Phone displayed Annika's name, Om was observant enough to notice the ring which shivaay had put on his ring finger. Om noticed the ring when Shivaay forwarded his hand towards him and after handing the phone over to him the smile on shivaay's face was clearly visible, it was different. Om knew what it meant. Om was contented with it. Shivaay's break up with "NKK" brought a feeling of achievement on Om's face.
Shivaay didn't take the call. Moments later, he got a text from Annika, with a video attached, it revealed the manipulation of the previous video, 2 months ago wala. Om isn't illegitimate, Om and other members were already aware of it.
They weren't brothers because of the true blue Oberoi blood, but because of what they have shared since childhood. They knew what they are to each other. Legitimate or illegitimate can never be the basis for their brotherhood. They were meant to be together, being in the same family were merely means for them to meet and share what they do!
Shivaay and Om went out with the doctor and before returning to their over emotional brother, they shared an heart-to-heart joining hug. It was an half hug, joining their hearts, a new kinda hug, they did so, because they felt so. But the warmness and the old vibes were present in this new hug.

They rushed back to Rudy's room before he comes out saying that nobody loves him...their 7 saal ki ladki with doley and biceps would come overreacting. ShivKara shared an eye contact before entering in his room and went to Rudy, giving him a crushing hug...with emotions which I definitely can't explain or express, it can only be felt.
Few mins later, In chorus: Rudy, Moment nikal gaya...pehle emotional thaa...ab awkward hai!!!
Rudy made all sorts of cry baby faces to melt the heartless ShivKara. ShivKara royally ignored their baby, and busted out in laughter the other moment.
They went back close to him and the bandaged nose got lucky by ShivKara kisses. Baby Ru in between, shivaay on the left and his Kara on right, kissed the respective sides of nose. Rudy's face bright and happy, cherishing the moment after 2 long months. ShivKara in chorus..."Dil Boley ...Rudy ki broken Nosy ...they shared a laugh and kissed his nose again. Rudy made sad and offended faces because of the slogan which they came up with...but a bright smile was back with ShivKara's kiss.
Ain't Rudy the most intelligent one?
Everything worked as per the plan. He is a good player, no cheating techniques were required, but his brothers and their relation was in need. For how long would they not face each other? This was the best way to get them together.

Bola naa 2 nose hote hai.
I was correct. Yes!
The human body having 2 nose was an answer given by me in LKG.
Don't judge me
Jaise 1 nose 2 nostrils
Vaise hi 1 soul 3 bodies.
I know it's lame


P.S. - Don't ask me about the technique which Rudy used, I've no formal knowledge regarding the sport.
Just like credit cards are accepted, I accept chamelis here
AAAN DOO
Can someone please help me with the title? I don't feel like thinking about the title or read this piece for the 2nd time because I don't feel that it's good but my friend (who ain't an ishqbaaaz viewer) liked it..so I felt like posting it here.
Thanks for reading, I hope I didn't waste your time.
Edited by Akansha276 - 8 years ago

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Guys, is it so bad? Please kuch toh bolo?!
I've written one more on them.
Okay, sorry for the torture.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: poo10

Very nicely written 👏

This made me smile. Thank you, Poo!
Edited by Akansha276 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Akansha276


This made me smile. Thank you, Poo!


Keep writing... 👍🏼
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Posted: 8 years ago
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good..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: poo10


Keep writing... 👍🏼

I'll definitely try.
Well, I'm Nisha's fan as well, although watched very few episodes.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Haha this was funny. Rudy's logic 😆
Lucky nose of Ru.
Love Obros😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: tikit

Haha this was funny. Rudy's logic 😆

Lucky nose of Ru.
Love Obros😛

Thank you!
Indeed a lucky nose.😊
Obros are love!

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