* Farak -the talk * shivika OS 23/7 *170+ lyks* note pg 7 - Page 6

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Posted: 8 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: LoveToWrite

Smileeeyyy *face palm* Why slap? *again face palm"


i knew it😆i knew this is how u would react😆

u know how much i hate such things... but yea i have a reason.. the upcoming part justified me to include the slap...

remember shivaay has always said to ragini that the one who raises hand against a woman is not a human even... both he and myself remember it

and this is completely impulsive... emotional... anika slapped shivaay when he raised a question about her character... that was not just because of honor but also because of the hurt her feelings for him had caused

here, no honor nothing involved... its sheer emotional turmoil... "how is it that our relationship is taken for granted?" "am i insignificant for her?" "after all we have been through why am i getting ABANDONED again?" ... for a person like shivaay who had neither faced abandonment nor rejection before..this might cause an upstir of emotions and being the emotionally insensitive / stunted person that he is , anger will be his first expression... this happened because i wanted to stick to the basic character of shivaay. also believe me, a hard shelled and fort hearted person like anika would not have protested or let her insecurities right out there in front of shivvay had he not triggered her...

he would totally make up for it... trust me😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: zyrah17

Wow what a conversation between shivika
i love it di , fentastic mind blowing
waiting for the next


thank you so much zyrah dear😊
will update soon..

keep reading and keep supporting me😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Adithi555

Awesome...wish something like this happen in the show before shivika reunion...shivika should talk n clear all their MU n insecurities...but not expecting anything from gulneet... you please continue.atleast we can read n imagine some beautiful scenario on their reunion...




thank you😊hope shivika will really have the talk asap😊

@bold means a lot really😊

keep reading and keep supporting me
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Posted: 8 years ago
#55
Hello Smiley dear!🤗
How are you dear?? I am so sorry that I didn't know about your illness..Actually my exam is around the corner..So am really busy in preparation..Visiting forum rarely..I didn't check any note from you too.. So sorry dear!! Hope you are doing good now..🤗 Big hugs to you dear!

Coming back to OS,this was absolutely brilliant!👏 At last they spoke it out..Am eagerly waiting to see this in show..But am pretty sure they won't show it..😆 So thank you so much for writing this..😳 Annika's outburst was bang on..Much needed..Shivaay should understand her insecurities too.. Annika's talk with Pari was so emotional..😭 And about the slap..Well..I didn't feel bad..I think as they are SHIVIKA,that slap is ok for them..

According to me they both are equally responsible for their separation.. After leap there's no progress in their story.. Am tired with their childishness..So your os is really a great gift for me..⭐️

Update next part soon.. Thanks for the pm..😳

Take care of your health dear!❤️

With love,
Rusha
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Posted: 8 years ago
#56
Smiley maate!!
Pranam ho maate!!
Kis sthaan se laati ho app itne sunda vichar??


P.S. - Loved it a lot😆



-Shikha
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Posted: 8 years ago
#57
awesome os
eagerly waiting for u to continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
#58
Maaf Karna Smiley
I took so damn long to reply
You know life can be a bitch when it comes to work.
I was kinda caught up in a busy schedule.
I loved the update.
Hope it happens soon in seriel.
I'm waiting for next part.
I'll make your banner very soon.
Just wait n I'll pm you the link in Wattpad PM inbox n you can post your banners here too
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I loved it! I hope we get to see more jealous ragini and pinky's reaction! Please update as soon as possible! I can't wait!!! 👏 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#60
Lovely Shot..!
The emotions the frustration the hurt... all beautifully put forward
I would wait for the second. :)


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