* Farak -the talk * shivika OS 23/7 *170+ lyks* note pg 7

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virmanforever

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

This is great! Keep up the great work, loved it!

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Nohsin10

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

Fantastic update

It's so emotional

😭😭

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rainbowveins

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

The Shivika conversation gave me so much satisfaction, I can't even tell you.You adressed each and every issue that had to be clarified.Amazing work, as usual❤️

PS can't wait for Fall!

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smileyallora

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU
awesome update smiley...
you know wat i loved that slap... because again she decided to leave him... if for making Annika stay in his life a slap is needed then it's fine...they are unique couple yar so slapping each other... throwing things it's doesn't matter at all... they should realize wat is the problem and find out a way through it... it was too emotional to see Annika talking to the baby... shivaay should understand her insecurities and make her realize that only she can be his takkar ki jodi

thank you so much aparna😊

haha yeah...for a person like shivaay who had never lost anything in his life, losing anika was a major nightmare... he had brought her back after himalayan indirect efforts... but inspite of it if she again utters this and decides to leave how would the emotionally stunted shivaay react??

this is why i wrote it..circumstance demanded him.. he would fix everything in next part...am so glad you took it in the right way😊

@bold, in my story they would aparna.. EVERYTHING will be done😉 happy tides will hit the shivikan shores 😉

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ericas

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

Lovelllyyy episode

Sooo cute

Pm plz

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smileyallora

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: meetaa_13
SUPERB !!

Loved it to the core ..waiting for this confrontation in the show

thank you 😊

me too... dunno how and when they are gonna do it

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Gurveen
Fantastic update
Anika and Shivay both are wrong for their broken relation
They both will mend it by taking about their insecurities
Update soon please

thank you so much😊 you are absolutely right😊

will update soon

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smileyallora

@smileyallora

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: Shizuku.T
Loved it...Would love to see such mature conversation in the show. Don't want a near death experience for love realization. They are realizing it what they mean to each other but to verbalize it is something I want to see.

Oh well even if it doesn't happen in the show, I am so glad you penned it down. Now I don't have to get my expectations shattered by HS, once again.

thanks a lot dear😊 exactly my feelings. I eant THE TALK. Them having MUs again and again has kinda killed my fan spirit.

@bold this really means a lot. Am so glad i was able to make you feel better. About cvs... ive stopped expecting😲

Once again thank u for this comment⭐️

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smileyallora

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

NOTE:

First of all thank you so much guys for the overwhelming response. i had posted the update exactly at 10 last night (i.e) before 24 hours. And 24 hours is what it took for you guys to shower this 150 likes on my fiction.This means a lot to me as, this is the update i had actually updated without any expectations and conceived in a short time( it took me an hour to type thats a different tangent) after the hiatus.

As many know , i had recently recovered from illness and i had updated just 2 parts before this( which i knew was not my best, & i was low on my confidence, yet you guys supported me in that too). I had this mental block in my mind , that having stayed almost a month from forum, might have killed my imagination and i will no longer be successful in my updates(this improved with fall fic update). i also had this notion that, now that the forums have merged it would be difficult for FFs to thrive in this flood of posts.

But in both the cases you guys have proved me wrong. And am glad to have been proven wrong. this is also the reason ive been holding back a few important updates(testing waters).Having got my spree back, would make those with held updates as well as this fics part 2 ASAP.😊⭐️

once again a big hug and thank you guys😊

keepp reading and keep supporting me😊

Edited by smileyallora - 8 years ago

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smileyallora

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Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: ithihaas
I am in love with this farak - the talk.
Finally all the emotions were out in air from both of them.
I feel, both of them are responsible for their separation. It takes two to tango. I will not talk about how much each of them is responsible for it but yes its both their faults.
I loved Annika's outburst. It was much needed. She needs to put all her feelings, thoughts before Shivaay.
Please do update the next part !!! Waiting !!!

thank you so much for the love😊totally agree with each word you have put forward.

@highlighted WORD!!!

i believe at this point, them speaking it out, baring it all is the only way to get back their old charm😊

keep reading and keep supporting me😊

Edited by smileyallora - 8 years ago