Will you... I will - JAi/Vennala OS Page 3 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

19

Views

4.9k

Users

6

Likes

55

Frequent Posters

Shafy_Kaira_MN thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#11

Hey guys, thank you so such response. I am here with my another OS continuing with previous one I am presenting you the POV of Vennella


When you'll be back

Vennalla's POV

It happens... it happens always when I enter your room... It always Gives Me the feeling that you are still here here ... Here with me...Please come back Jai...

Third Person

Saying to herself Vennella entered his room... the room which could have belongs to hers as well if that event wouldn't occured on their engagement. Today she was feeling so lonely a lot more..., maybe because today is their anniversary, today was the day when she actually saw him or should say their first meet. As soon she entered his room, to divert her mind she thought to clean it up.

Sheentered his room despite being Deva said not to , but she didn't listen to him and entered, she just couldn't stopped herself. She was cleaning his room, cleaning the dust from tables, bed and almirah when a photo fall from top shelf of the almirah. She bend down to have a look and as soon she turned the picture to see, all the old memories flashed in front of her.

This Picture was speaking about a time when she was with him and by him she means the person who still resides in her heart though in real he is still so far from her. She sat on his bed and went down to the old memory Lane when was the picture clicked.

As smile crept on her face when she remembers about it. Jai has stopped her alliance with the American proposal and convinced everyone including her to marry with him. He has never been good in expressing his emotions butt while proposing also he just mentioned that he will keep in his heart but never said that he loves her.


Vennalla's POV

You have always been like this, first day when I enter your office you told Kishore to take the middle cabin just because me and him were sharing a good conversation you were jealous at that time but never let me know about it. You are so so mysterious Jai, everyone say that you don't say much you don't express your feelings much but I know you eyes Express it, and seriously they express so beautifully that I don't need more words from you. Those deep Eyes I've always longed to see the love for me on them and that day when you came to my house and stopped that marriage proposal I could see that love in your eyes. But I can't forget that day when Mr reserved Jai open up about his feelings and confessed those lovely words to me.

Third Person

Whole family including Jai's mother were all in village preparing for the wedding but she cannot forget the day or should say night when they both confess their feelings to each other. Jai had a very important meeting in Hyderabad and they have to left for a day or two which was accompanied by Vennela as well as she was also looking after that project.

Vennalla's POV

We were getting ready in your Hyderabad house, but the fact was I wasn't getting ready for the party I was getting ready for you. Since our marriage has been fixed it's a first appearance together in front of the whole world as a couple. Don't know why but that I just want to get ready for you only for you, want to see that longiness in your eyes for a love that was still unconfessed from both of our sides.

That day I realize that I should also convey my feelings to you but I was ... Should say... Very shy in initiating the confession I want ... what if you confess and then I reply back to the same but on second thought what if you were waiting for my confession. Making up in my mind I promised myself that tonight I will confess my feelings to you.

Third Person

He entered the room screaming her name that she made them late , Vennela...how much time will you... he stopped on his track and his mouth was huge open because the site in front of him was breathtaking. She was looking absolutely stunning and he just couldn't take his eyes off. She knew he was staring at her shamelessly smoking to herself she walked up to him closed his mouth and Whisper slowly in his ear, close your mouth as mosquito will enter in it .


He came back from his Trance and straighten himself . He cleared his throat and said, I am just saying that we are getting late for the party if you are done shall we move . Somewhere Vennela didn't like it as she was expecting him to praise her or say something nice to her about how she is looking but he just turned down her expectation. She nodded and walked past to him but she stopped in Her track as he actually held her hand before she could think further pulled her towards him such that her back was touching his torso, he whispered slowly in her ear, By the way you are looking absolutely stunning aaj toh pakka Kisi Ko Marne Ka Irada Hai... Please bear on your this servant madam. The smile which was bit lost came again and she just ran away from there.

The party was better boring or should say Jai was dealing with this clients but it was boring for Vennela. She was sitting on the bar counter and looking here and there when her Eyes stopped at the scene in front of her. A girl wearing a very short dress was hugging Jai and also giving him light kiss on his cheek, she fumed in anger . There were two reasons for her anger. No 1 a girl was kissing Jai and 2 he was giving a smile to her. She didn't think much and took multiple vodka shots displayed in front of her. It just took a minute for her to get high, here Jai was looking for her searching where she could have been; he went outside and found his lady love was sitting near watchman stool talking with him he sense that something is surely wrong with her.

He went up to her and ask her to let's go home but she repent and said in a little drunk voice,Why should I go home with you you are just like all other men, I wore a saree for you today and you ...you are hugging or kissing a different different person who were wearing very very very small dresses, I mean today you proved it proof did that all men same and yes I am not going home with you I will sit over here and will chat with watchman Chacha he is much better than you..

By then it was confirm that she was drunk, that too very much. He tried to make her stand but she she just shrugged is hand off and scolded him, can't you listen at once what I am saying is that I am not coming home with you I just hate you hate you just go away.

He knew she won't listen like this, he went down to her and said in a very polite manner, Vennu... I am sorry I didn't know that she will kiss me and moreover I am getting married to you why would I go away with different girl

She said still fuming, What I know and what you expect me to know tell me tell me with just making fool of me I'm not going with you just hate you go away from here right with just making fool of me I'm not going with you just hate you go away from here right now , she stood up on her own and try to walk away from there though she was so much wrong she wasn't even to walk properly. He went behind her and requested her again, Vennu ... I'm sorry darling I really didn't know that she'll do like this... Let's go home we can talk over there, let's go home right now the weather does not seems to be right I guess it will rain we should reach home before it starts raining heavily isn't it?

She said, why do you care for me take her take her to your home don't worry about me I will get wet in rain I love getting drenched in rain why do you care about my feelings I have so many plans for today but today you just ruined everything I just hate you go away saying she she pushed him and walked as fast as she could in her drunk state.

You know she won't listen like this she never listen to him and more she is drunk now why she would listen to him. He went up to her and before she can say anything more he simply picked her in his arms and walked up to their car, she struggled a lot to get rid of his arms but his strong hold was not making any effect. He placed her in the passenger seat where seat belt and went up to his driver seat to drive away to home. She try to retort but then he loses a bit patient and said in a strict tone, that's it that's it for today ok just sit quietly not a single but should appear.

She simply not it and said quietly no she was drunk but she knew when Jai gets angry no one can turn down his anger and she cannot just wake up a lion right now.


It was very lonely road and they were not very far from their home but all of a sudden it starts raining very very very heavily. Vennela who was sitting like a obedient child jumped with happiness seeing the rain and insisted Jai to stop the car

Jai : why ?

Vennela : it's raining and I want to dance in the rain

Jai: no no no we know Vennu you will catch cold

Vennela : you don't love me you only love that girl if she would have said then surely you would have stop the car allowed to dance in the rain... If you won't stop I'll jump


He immediately stop the car defeating himself in front of her and, ok but only in one condition just for 5 minutes.

Out of impulse she kissed his left cheek and went out of the car to dance in rain leaving behind a shock person. So she was drunk but somewhere she knew what she did, it was just out of impulse she just was so happy that he allowed her to dance in rain and just want to thank you in return.


Vennalla's POV

He didn't knew that my hangover was almost done when he scolded me to sit properly in the car, but dancing in the rain is my dream. I just want to dance in there and then he allowed, I was so happy that he's so sweet I guess he loves me so much I just want to say that I love him but then something stop to me because somewhere I was still a bit angry from him why did he allowed another girl to be so close to him and with the girl he love so much,the girl he is getting married he didn't even confessed his feelings to her but when he just said that ok that I can dance again I just want to want to say thank thank you saying that he is best but words were not forming into the moment so I just impulsively placed a soft kiss on his cheek and just ran out from there, how could I meet his eyes now. Rain was dropping each droplet was coming from my eyes touching each and every part of my skin and I'm going down taking down all the stress in everything but the moment we shared up second ago was not coming down from my brain, he must be thinking that I am drunk but I was I was not drunk the kiss that I made was something did it purposely.

The question is will he understand that or he'll think that since I am drunk so that something I did in that moment will this moment be something for him or nothing...

I was thinking about him thinking about all this when when I feel warm breath on my neck and before I absorbed it a warm hand was kissing my waist and slowly grabbed whole body from back sending his warmth into mine. For moment I was very shock but then smile came, he came for me... He came because he knew I love dancing in rain and just want to be there for me.

Third person


He twirl her around, so she was facing him they were having the heavy breaths, water droplets were falling on them making the scene more beautiful it seems nature was also enjoying it and want to see what will go further.

She tried to free herself from his hold somewhere she was still a bit Fury for him, he grabbed her again and pulled her closely and said I knew when you are drunk and when you are not and moreover Mera effect Itna padta hai hai that no other thing can affect you that much.

He picked her up and said,let's go home . Reaching there home he picked her up again and made his way towards towards her room by the time none of them were living there eye contact. He made a stand her feet in said cupping said, Vennela...you are very very beautiful and this dress I must say you look stunning in saree I have a request will you wear these sarees only for me after marriage..??.

Vennalla's POV

I was just completely stunned was it a request or was he pleading to me as a begging me that I should accept his request

Third person

She asked why do you even care about it you are so busy about checking other girls in the party and now you are saying me to wear saree even after marriage

It it affect me a lot darling

Well it doesn't seem so

Let me rephrase it, it did affect me a lot darling because you don't know how much I controlled myself coming to you grabbing your this petite waist and giving you a

A what continue why did you stopped...

Well I think I should do instead of saying it

What do you mean

I mean

Saying he pulled her close to him and smashed his lips on hers. It took up a second for her to understand that he is actually kissing her senselessly and with few seconds more she too responded to his kiss grabbing his neck and pulling him more closer to her

Vennalla's POV

I can't forget that moment really everything was all went black for a second I was completely clueless what was going on but then it took me few seconds to realise that we are sharing that moment The Touch of your lips the way you hold me tightly not leaving me at all. Like you came and unload my heart and given me a sense that you are there and you will be there I wish that my that wish would have come true you are here in my heart right now but you are not here in front of me I can only imagine you can if I want to talk to you all have is your photo but physically you're not in front of me I can't hold you can't share my sorrow with you I can't share your sorrow I can't lighten your burden can't help you feel so helpless that I really can't help you right now to sort out all these things to sort out this rivalry between two villages to sort out your differences between you and Deva uncle. When all these things will come to end, when I am waiting for that day desperately and I just want that day to come soon as soon as it could be.

That night was one of the most memorable night for me not because we shared a first kiss but the first time I saw romantic Jai the person who shared all his feelings with me

Third person

They broke off after it was life threatening for them, couldn't able to meet her eyes She was blushing very hard, he pick up her face looked into her eyes and said,"Now you got it why I wasn't looking at you" he smirked a bit and she just smiled out. He called her name filled with love," Vennela I want to say something" looking into her eyes he continued," you don't know how much important you are in my life my life begin with you my life ends with you. In a very short span of time you become a very very important part of my life or I should say you have become my life I can't imagine my life without you I wish we could have met but before. I am sure that you need't send all those marriage alliances I would have been there for you her eyes filled with tears this is the first time he was saying all his feelings so beautifully she just want to let him continued and he continued for

Before I met my dad I met you it seems like destiny had played his game that I should meet you first in fall in love with you...

She looked at him shockingly what he saying was he was it was a love at first sight for him as well

Understood what she was thinking and nodded said yes it was love at first sight for me as well I did fall for you that the moment. I love you I love you too much too much I love you love you love you so much just be with me bear with my anger I know I am a bit short tempered but please bear it I know you are the one who can handle me I know you are the one who can calm me down I know you are the one taking care of my all moves I know you are the only one to understand me and no one else does in this world I just want to ask you once again will you marry me will you love me in your life will you allow me to take care of you as well will you allow me to share the love you have in your heart with me as well allow me to shower my love to you

She was shocked to the core , the person to whom she love so much reveal all feelings to her this could be the only best day of my life, she hugged him tightly and said," I already allowed you to enter in my heart you have been already entered in my life before proposed to me for the match and one more thing I love you I love you a lot and thank you so much for loving me back thank you so much for making me realise that I do deserve for you and thank you so much for making me my own independent life making me realise that I am also also capable of doing something something of my own something that is constructive something which gives me pleasant and something which which joints me with you I just can't thank you enough I love u Jai I love you a lot

Vennalla's POV


He confess that night he confessed that he loves me he loves me a lot and he too fall in love at first sight for me made me realise that I wasn't a piece for him whether a delicate thing but he keep in his heart forever but now I am not sure whether I am still in your heart or not I don't know when you will return I don't know where are you I don't know how are you and I don't know that you still love me do you love me I still love you and with time my love has just get stronger and stronger. I don't want anything Jai just a small space in your heart. Please come back.

Thinking about the confusion she fall asleep again this photo hugging to her heart.


misspotter thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#12
This is so awesome..
I love to read about Jai Venella
Akshatha19 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#13
wow
so beautiful...


being fan of PRANUSHKA i just loved it..
i wish they confess their in real life tooo

i liked this lines in first part-
"she always been queen of my heart but today I realized she is not just queen of my heart, she is queen of our house our family, she is queen of all their hearts and she is queen by heart. Today I felt so happy and so proud that she loves me"


------------------------------------------------------

2nd part the confession and kiss thing just so dreamy...


Loved it please keep writing...
waiting for next part...
Shafy_Kaira_MN thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Akshatha19

wow
so beautiful...


being fan of PRANUSHKA i just loved it..
i wish they confess their in real life tooo

i liked this lines in first part-
"she always been queen of my heart but today I realized she is not just queen of my heart, she is queen of our house our family, she is queen of all their hearts and she is queen by heart. Today I felt so happy and so proud that she loves me"


------------------------------------------------------

2nd part the confession and kiss thing just so dreamy...


Loved it please keep writing...
waiting for next part...


Thank you so much...

That really means a lot to me
Shafy_Kaira_MN thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: poetic

This so nice. I have always admired and loved Jai and Vennela and reading about them is such a pleasure.

Loved the emotions you portrayed and the way they were keyed onto each other.

True love indeed.



Thank you so much..😊
Shafy_Kaira_MN thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Continuing with Part 2, here is my another OS on Jai/Vennala.
This time it has POV of both Jai and Vennala.

When you'll be back Page 2


Jai came back to Poorna's house after defeating Uma's goons. He was also hurt and his left arm was bleeding, Poorna saw it and asked, How did this happen brother did you fight with someone ?. Jai made an excuse and said that he mistakenly got hurt. Poorna took him to the nearby clinic as it may cause septic to him.

There doctor was curing his wound and Poorna was in phone standing outside talking with his girlfriend . Not coming into anyone's notice even of Jai's Venalla was standing at his back. Doctor dressing his wound and asked his name. He replied, Jai. Soon he spoke his name, they heard something fell down.

Venalla's POV

I was getting medicines when I heard a name, a name which has the capacity to bring 1000 volt current to flow in my body, which can roses my heartbeats to much extent like a thunderstorm. It's been so long I have heard this name and so long I have heard this voice is it his voice... ! Is he here or I am thinking too much!!

How This can happen though ? As far as I have got the news he has traveled to abroad and no news of him after that...what if he decided to came back... but if he's back ??? what if he is actually sitting back of me but if the voice I heard is real should I turn around or just run away from here... I am not sure what should I do...!! But I can't I can't run away from here but also I don't have that much courage as well to turn around.


How am I going to face him ... what I am going to say to him !!!! should I say that I still love him and waiting for him or should I ask about his life whether he wants to come back or not should I confess to him that I am waiting for his arrival should I deliver all the things that I have in my heart or I just watch him silently and secretly without in notice with anyone not even his.

Third Person

She didn't turn around and walked away from there so that she can watch him not knowing to anyone. There Jai felt her presence he felt it she was here he turned around but found no one he looked here and there when his eyes stopped at a place where Poorna was in his call and at his back his uncle was standing he need to get both of them distracted if both of them come in face to face of each other then surely they'll create some nuisance and he'll be back to square one . He thanked the doctor for completing his dressing and he move ahead.


Jai' POV

I did something on my Uncle's car so that his mind got distracted over there he moved away from position where Poorna was standing. I hid behind a wall and looking at the direction where uncle moved. I miss my family a lot. They all are waiting for me, I am so desperate to meet them and here I am stuck up in this village trying to resolve the things but not able to achieve not able to resolve the things not able to dissolve the sour feelings in both the villages.


I had to do something as fast as I could. I looked here and there to see if anyone else came from the family came but to my dismay none except uncle came.


I made promised to myself that I'll be back soon, I will resolve all these things and will apologize to baba I am sure you he'll forgive me and will be back to my home. I miss home.

Third person

He moved a bit back and at the same time someone else was looking here anf there and moving backwards when suddenly they collided with each other.


He turned around saying, I'm so... but stopped in middle.


Jai' POV


This is not possible... no no way... may be I am hallucinating, this all will go vanish. I stretched my hand in order to touch her to believe that whatever I am seeing is true.


Venalla' POV

He is here my heart can never be wrong. Really can't believe that he is standing in front of me all fit and fine but I do see a band-aid around his arm I wonder what could had happened to him but really I am just imagining about him when slowly I felt touch touch. The touch was enough to vanish all my doubts, the touch for which I was longing for so many years the touch that I almost forgot was is my cheeks and my whole body burnt out in happiness. I was too happy to show. He was here in front of me tears brim in my eyes and I just couldn't stop myself.

Jai' Pov

I am not hallucinating she is here I can feel her when I touch her cheek. Yes... !!! her eyes I can see that she's also desperate for me to come back she misses me too and I missed alot I just want to say so many things to her want to say that I will be back very soon I will sort out everything but somehow words for not forming in my mouth I want to say I want to hug I want to hug you as tight as I could I want to remove the gap of those years. I wanted to say that I am here to bring on happiness in our life but I couldn't my throat went all dried up.


Suddenly I heard a voice like someone is coming what they saw her it might be dangerous to her I need to hide her.

Third person

He headed towards a wall and gestured her to be keep quiet, they heard a voice some goons were looking for them.

Venella's POV

He signaled someone was coming but he failed to notice one thing that my heart was pumping a loud enough to be heard from hundred miles away, seeing him so close to me I just my whole body was getting Goosebumps my breath was getting fast and I know I have to control them this is not that time he is not back, he didn't said anything though his eyes conveyed me a lot but still after so many years seeing him feel so so content i felt relieve that he's back he'll be back now but when and getting away from him again it will be difficult for me to pass each and every day I want to see so many things to him I want to scold him and beat him but this is not the right time I can do this I have to wait and here he hit me in the corner of the war saving me protecting me from the other people same old person always being protective for me smile Craft on my face

Jai's POV

Here I'm looking here and there to protect her from any goals and when I looked down she was smiling foolishly looking at me I asked her through actions why she smiling and as usual she just lowered my her head down then I realized nothing has changed in these years still I can read her eyes but alas I can't do anything I can't reveal anything I can't say anything I just want to I just wish I just wish this moment stood still I want to see her for a time it's been a long time I am seeing I just want to capture image in my heart should at least for some time.


Third person

They were looking into each other's eyes, not speaking a word like their eyes making all the conversation irrespective what is going in the outside world they were already into each other in their world which they were seeing in each other's eyes.


Jai' POV

Your eyes still Speaks a lot when the first time I saw them I lost in them so big so deep they had the capacity of captivating in one's heart I feel my I felt myself lucky that I reside in those eyes and today there speaking a lot they still saying that I am still there they are saying that you are waiting for me so much I want to say to you I am also waiting to come back I wish things to get sorted as soon as possible I wish Baba forgive me and I could fulfill his wish of demolishing the rivalry of these two villages let everyone to live in peace in that way only I can give condolence to my mother.

I know I am not able to say anything right now but I hope that I could able to convey everything to you I hope you could understand what I am trying to say through my silence because I know you always understand my silence


Vennalla's POV

It seems like god is playing some tricks with us today after so many years I am seeing you in front of me same old Jai but so much I want to hear from you so much I want to say myself I want to hug you I want to hug you as tight as I could I was just want to pour all my heart feelings right now but in the situation we are can't utter a word I know what you are thinking and I hope the same too I assure you there uncle will forgive you and I know that you will be back.

After seeing you so many years the hope was kind of getting faded away came back with a bang your eyes are saying that you will be back I hope they are not lying my heart will be shredded into pieces if they lie but I trust u more than myself I will wait and wait Till You make me wait I am all yours.


Third person

None of them were saying a word but it seems they has already conveyed their feelings to each other through their eyes. Jai's uncle called up Vennela, she immediately run from there but before going there she turned back looked at him smiled at him and went away giving him like assurance that she he there for him, conveying that he can go for it what he is thinking for and just.

misspotter thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#17
Soo beautifully written..
This is going vry intrsting..
Thnks for sharing ur valuable writings..
Penkie06 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 8 years ago
#18
Now this was extremely beautiful . I loved it. Do continue.
poetic thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Shafy,
Read parts 2 and 3 together. The story is so beautiful.

In part 2, I loved the way they both opened up slowly to each other about their feelings, and it took the rain to do the remaining work. It was so romantic, so ethereal. 😳

Part 3 - Loved how they instinctively knew at the Doctor's chamber that the other was there. Loved the way they met ... or rather, they collided. ❤️

It must have been so difficult for them to be away from each other for all this time.

Please update the next part pl. Quickly. 😊

Rachna
Shafy_Kaira_MN thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 8 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: poetic

Shafy,

Read parts 2 and 3 together. The story is so beautiful.

In part 2, I loved the way they both opened up slowly to each other about their feelings, and it took the rain to do the remaining work. It was so romantic, so ethereal. 😳

Part 3 - Loved how they instinctively knew at the Doctor's chamber that the other was there. Loved the way they met ... or rather, they collided. ❤️

It must have been so difficult for them to be away from each other for all this time.

Please update the next part pl. Quickly. 😊

Rachna


Thank you so much for such lovely words.

I havent started writing.. i'll try my best..

Related Topics

Sensational South Thumbnail

Posted by: Pallanguzhi

4 years ago

Pandiyan Stores - Season 2 (page 58 onwards)

Anyone else here following the series? Moorthy Dhanam valaikappu episodes going on ... Looks like Dhanam is returning to her beloved Pandiyan...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".