The Moon God's Boon (Devasena/Amarendra) OS [Updated: Part 2 on Pg. 2]

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hasi.83

@hasi.83

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#11

Its Awesome and well written Tashu..

worth waiting for...

Good job ma👏

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tweetie19

@tweetie19

Dazzler

+ 9

Posted: 8 years ago

#12

Loved it...it reminded of the scene where Amara and Devasena are fighting the pindaris..they were in perfect sync like performing a poetic dance..

Looking forward for the next part to see how veer and shakuntala bring AmaraSena closer 😳

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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 8 years ago

#13

Okay now...

I see you have a knack in having Amarendra and Devasena fight goons away together. So that was beautifully put together.

Thank you so much for continuing.

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poetic

@poetic

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 8 years ago

#14

Very nice Tashu. Am so glad you are continuing this 👍🏼

And love how Veer and Shakuntala realised what Amarendra and Devsena are going to be for each other. Love is about to bloom

AD together are seamless, perfectly moulded to each other's cadence and rhythm

Please update soon 😊

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Priya_KABHI

@PriyaKABHI

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

#15

Thanks for Update,Dear.😊

It was Amazing Part.😊

The banner was so Nice.😊

Amrendra and Devasena fighting on goons was so Nice.😊

Devasena Braveness was Amazing.😊

The way Veer and Shakuntala thinking that they are made for each other was so Interesting.😊

The Whole Part was so Interestingly explained.😊

Please Update Next Part soon.😊

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PriyaSweety-Anu

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Aaradhaya1688

@aaradhaya1688

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#16

First thankyou for continuing it

Loved it

It really different and awesome

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SAISakura16

@SAISakura16

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#17

Bookmarking - will read n comment soon Tashu..

sorry..

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natashu

@natashu

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#18

@everyone: thank you for reading -- it's much appreciated! 🤗

@Ishu: no worries! 😃

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SAISakura16

@SAISakura16

Stunner

Posted: 8 years ago

#19

Wow Tashu!! 👏👏 That was Amazing!!!

Love your style of writing !! ❤️

Veer-Shakuntala are going to play cupids.. excited for upcoming parts!

And Amarendra-Devasena sequence was so beautifully described.. reminded me of the Pindari fight! How poetic it was!

And the love is about to bloom.. can't wait for the next part!

Thank you for this treat! 🤗

Edited by -SAISakura16- - 8 years ago

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natashu

@natashu

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 8 years ago

#20

@Ishu: Thank you for your comment, love! 🤗 Glad you liked it! 😳

@shafty: Thank you 😃

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