Ansh - a Shivika ff (Part 3 updated)

Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey everyone I have given two tries on my writings on Shivika. One was accepted I guess and the other went unnoticed. I have not yet finalised the name of this story all ideas are welcome.
Sunlight peeped through the window panes caressing a beautiful face.The morning rays brought an end to her sleep and she opened her eyes to find herself engulfed in the warmth of a hug.She smiled seeing the cause of the warmth lying beside her quite fast asleep. She could simply spend the rest of her life watching him sleep. He was her reason to live and he was the life she possessed. She lived through him.Smiling at her thoughts she began to get up when she felt a tight tug only to him looking at her dazed. His face lit into a very adorable smile and said "Good morning Ma".She simply kissed her son with all the love she her for him and wished " Good Morning Ansh".

Part 2 - pg 2
Part 3 - pg 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
#2
Nice...would love to know what happened between shiviks
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Posted: 8 years ago
#3
A really good start. Even though it's a few lines, it is beautifully written. 👏
Continue soon. :)
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Posted: 8 years ago
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a good start..love to read next part soon
Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you everyone for the wonderful replies on my writing.So here I present the next part of the story

PART 2

He was home after a long tiring day at work. To be honest he was never tired of his work it was a part of him and as his brothers and wife would say he was obsessed with it.Thinking about the most important people of his life itself brought a smile to his face.Oh... how much he loved them and loved being loved by them. He began opening his laptop when he noticed a vision in white by the poolside. His wife looked ethereal dressed in pure white and her locks swaying freely. On sensing his gaze on her she turned towards him and gave him a look of pure love. She gestured him to come towards her and who was he to disobey his gorgeous wife. He took long strides towards her and stretched his arms towards her only to find that she was gone. Like every time in the past 5 yrs she just disappeared. He felt anguish engulf him. He could never explain the extent of voidness and pain that he was undergoing. He could never bring himself in terms with the fact that she was no more a part of his life. Yet unlike others he was sure of her existence in his maybe not near him but somewhere else. His beating heart was proof enough.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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aww they are seperated , hope he finds her and his son soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awww sweet nd lovely start[B

R]eagerly waiting to know wht happened between shivika
Hope he found borh of them soon
Continue soon
Do pm me if possible
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update yar
so Both of them are separated...
Annika is living with her son and shivaay is living alone
wat happened between them
Posted: 8 years ago
#9

Part 3

She did not remember where she was nor did she remember who she was all that she remembered was that handsome smile and that voice which seemed melody to her ears. She slowly opened her eyes and tried to remember something when she realized the raw fact that she did not remember what her name was. Fright engulfed her making her go desperate with helplessness and fear. She wailed loudly in despair when she felt a hand on her shoulder...

He ran like someone possessed screaming out her name at intervals. The silence around him broke him bringing tears into his eyes . Still he did not lose hope because he knew like his heart did that she was somewhere out pinning for him just like he did for her . With this resolve he blinked back his tears and turned around only to get shocked by ...

Posted: 8 years ago
#10

😊 Thanks for the comment yaar. Dude I have just started getting active on this forum can you pls help me on how to PM updates.

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