Bitter Victories - SvetKara/ RiKara OS - Page 3

"Neither; cause I can't promise her something which is already hers,"...only that much is enough...loved it

Fantastic one shot.

Originally posted by: priya_86

I am a Shrenu fan...and trust me I would love any twist in the simple love story...

Have you seen the movie "Dil apna aur Preet parayi"?...

It had Rajkumar...meena kumari and sasikala...RJ was married to sasikala...and what an awesome story it was...Meena Kumari at her best...as the sauten...sasikala was great as the mean and vindictive wife...RJ was desperately in love with Meena kumari's character...but was helpless...your story reminds me of that angle

I am a Terrible RiKara and Shrenu shipper...but I am open to all concepts. ...but I know CVs will not think in this line...This would have really explored Shrenu's acting skills...😊

Originally posted by: annniii

"Neither; cause I can't promise her something which is already hers,"...only that much is enough...loved it

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

Fantastic one shot.

For a moment I thought that om was dancing with gauri.

Saku dear, 😊
It was totally a different concept! I loved reading it that how years ago Svetlana made all the webs to marry Omkara for her own evil intention (she wanted to say to Om that she is his wife right??) bunow have helplessly fallen for him where as Omkara seeks solace from someone who's name's initial is "G" aka our Gauri. 😳 And Svetlana now understood that how Jhanvi might had felt when she was mistress of Jhanvi's husband Tej! 😉 I totally loved it! 😉 Going to read the prequel soon. 😳
With love,
Aheli.

Sakura it's awesome.. Really loved it.

Can't believe you have made me FEEL something for Swetlana. And that too - Pity. Just wow. 👏

I didn't knew you write in dbo forum missed you in swr forum

Ok.. How in the blazes of the world did I miss this masterpiece !!!!! This was so wonderfully written. I could imagine each and every word as I read and I fell in love again.. This was the SvetKara I wanted to see.. The one that is poisonous.. The one who is toxic and makes Om fall into the deepest pit of darkness. Had SvetKara gone this way, the track would have been amazing... Thanku so much for writing this OS..