My First story :Love by chance Part 10 pg 128 Oct 8

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swathin

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Posted: 8 years ago

#141

Superb start
Ishu is too cute
Raman coming after 10 years
Loved it

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

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Posted: 8 years ago

#142

very nice story.do cont soon...

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Anju

@Muskan193

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Posted: 8 years ago

#143

Nice update dear...
But this is not fair..where is raman..
I am waiying for ishra
It was almost mimi update
But its ok will wait for ishra
Update soon dear
Thank u gor pm

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Harshita Srivastava

@harshiidiv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Muskan193
Nice update dear...
But this is not fair..where is raman..
I am waiying for ishra
It was almost mimi update
But its ok will wait for ishra
Update soon dear
Thank u gor pm

Raman entry in next update pakka..

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Mad4Divz

@Mad4Divz

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Posted: 8 years ago

#145

Nice story
Gr8 start
Cntn soon
Thanks4pm

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Harshita Srivastava

@harshiidiv

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Posted: 8 years ago

#146

Hlw frnds I m here with next update & this update for harshita no no not for me BT my buddy " harshiita"yes we share same name ..this update for u" harshu" ..enjoy..

Part- 3

Mihika entered her home taking baby steps to looking here & there (st) - lgta h ki maidaan saaf h chl beta jldi se apne room mein ghush jaa issue phle ki amma aa jaye saying she about to enter in her room meanwhile amma saw her & called -- arey mihku tu ab aa rhi h itni late..
Mihika(stammering )-wo WO amma bus nhi mil rhi thi isliye late ho gyi..
Amma -don't say lie mihku I know tm apni kisi frnd ke sath gol gappe khane lgi hogi haina..
Mihika - no amma aisa nhi h..that's when appa came from backside & says - madhu WO newspaper nhi pdha kaha h LA do jara saying he signaled mihika through eyes & mihika run to her room ..amma turned & when she not find mihika she understand appa nautanki & going to gave him peace of mind BT appa also escaped from there..
In bhalla house

Mr.bhalla is reading some projects file's when toshi ji came & says -kya bhalla ji aj apka beta aa rha or ap aj nhi kaam lye baithe h.. Saying she closed his files...
Mr bhalla - to kya kru ap to waise bhi sari taiyari kr rhi h or ab to mihir bhi h..saying he again open his files..
Toshi -WO mai ye soch rhi bhalla ji Q naa hm Raman ke aane ki khushi mein ek changi so party rakh le ap koi bolde ho..
Mr.bhalla - apka beta pdhai puri krke aa rha h koi Jung meet ke nhi..
Toshi - phr bhi party rakhne mein Harz kya h..
Mr.bhalla ( loudly) - enough toshi ji apko nhi lgta ki ap Raman se kuch jyada hi pyar krti h kahi aisa to bhi ki WO apka apna beta h isliye..saying he stopped
Toshi - ye ap kya bol rhe h bhalla ji khabrdar Jo apne mere bacho ki taraf meri mamta pe Jo sawal uthaya ye to mera ran janta h ki maine kbhi Raman or Mihir ke beech koi fark nhi kiya h phr bhi apne meri mamta pe sawal uthaya Syd meri mamta mein koi kami reh gyi hogi saying she start crying bitterly..
Mr.bhalla hug her & wiped her tears - nhi toshi ji aisa nhi h mujhe apki mamta PR Sak nhi h bs mai Darta hu kahi hm mihir ko kbhi ye ehsaas na dilaye ki WO hmara beta bhi h..saying he remember past.

Flashback

Mr.bhalla & Mr.arora was childhood frnds..they completed their studies together & start new business together in partnership..after their marriage their wives also became best frnds.. They are doing best in business after 2 yrs both wives gave them goodnews..
One days when both men returned home their wives asked for vacation.. Firstly they are not ready bcoz their wives in 8 months of pregnancy BT after so much discussion they ready & decided to go lonavala..
They was going to lonavala by car & they met with an accident..
All admitted in nearly hospital Mr bhalla has lil hurt BT both ladies & Mr.arora in critical conditions.. Doctor decide to do their delivery.. After taking Mr.bhalla's sign on papers they start..
After sometimes nurse came with a baby boy in her hand in white towel she gave the baby in Mr .bhalla hand & says.- sorry sir hm apke dost ki wife ko bacha nhi PAYE she died after giving birth this baby..Mr bhalla shocked after 5 min toshi ji also delivered a baby boy.. & nurse came & gave him saying congratulations sir ur wife also delivered a baby boy.. He take the baby in his hand & asked - & my frnd..
apke frnd ke condition is very critical he want to meet you plz come saying she take him in ward.
Mr.arora taking his last breath called - omi aao jldi mere pass waqt nhi h jyada..
Mr.bhalla run to him - no mohan don't worry mai tujhe kuch nhi hone dunga..BT Mr arora asked him - no omi mere pass an time nhi h tu mujhse ek wada kr ki tu mere bete ko apne bete ki tarah palega or use kbhi ye maalum nhi padne dega ki WO hmara beta h..Mr.bhalla was not agree BT looking his condition he placed his hand in his & promised him ..Mr.arora smiles in gratitude & take his last breath.. From this day Mr & Mrs bhalla doing mihir upbringing as their own son & never disclose this truth to anyone not even their family..

in present time

Both are hugging each other & crying remembering past..that's when mihir called them maa papa jldi aao hme airport Jana h ..
Both composed & says - aye puttar..
Trio reached airport & waiting for his flight when toshi ji asks - puttar kahi hme der to bhi ho gyi..
Mihir - arey nhi maa flight bs abhi land hui h Raman bs aata hi hoga he was saying when his eyes fell on Raman who was coming with some girls ..he was wearing black tee with blue denims & black shades ..looking too handsome..
Mihir called him & wave his hand.. Raman recognize his voice & find him standing and he also wave his hand.. Both run to each other & hug each other tightly ..
Mihir - I miss u Raman..
Raman - i miss u too bhai..

That's for update dear..I gave this update for all of u with our hero entry.. 😉 so hit the like button & do comments ..

Thank you..

Edited by harshiidiv - 8 years ago

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threeta

@threeta

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#147

This is not fair Raman ki entry pai hi stop kardiya.

Superb update.

So Mihir is not their biological son.

Thanks for updating

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threeta

@threeta

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

#148

Wow I m first one who comment.Congratulations to me

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pyara12

@pyara12

Dazzler

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Posted: 8 years ago

#149

Superb update dear

Amma caught Miku and asked y is she late

Omg Mihir is not mr& Mrs bhallas son

Emotional flashback

Toshi cried as Mr. Bhalla told her that she is giving more importance to raman.

Raman finally came to india

Both brothers hugged each year other

Thanks for pm

Update soon

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Aradhana

@aru_27

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

#150

awesome update
so raman and mihir are not twins
flashback scene is so emotional
raman recognized mihir voice
both brothers hugged each other
nice
thanks for pm
continue soon