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Kya ye sab show mein sach mein ho sakta h??

Aww that was lovely loved your intake on this upcoming track, this rs spoke miles through the words your wrote. This is by far one off the best works on avneil!!!!

Awesome update

awesome os sanju just loved it... for a second i thought neil lost avni but the way he screamed our avnis name away from her compartment and the way she heard him and cried silently covering her face... i was like please avni go to him.. but finally neil found her and the way u descried his emotions the way he looked at avni with anger on his face and hurt shown in his eyes and how he held her hand tightly and took her with him i was like yipee...loved how neil was telling avni not leave him by holding his hand and that bone crushing hug was awww...loved how avni also hugged him back... happy how bebe admitted her mistake and said sorry to avni...and what i loved also was when bebe was speaking to avni neil didnt leave her hand... loved avneils bedroom scene... the way avni was telling how she and ali have nothing going on between them and how neil said he trust her and the way avni rested her head on his shoulder and how they slept like that... when neil woke up and was about to move to the couch and i was like oh no but happy how avni stoppped him and told him to sleep next to her... amazing os sanju loved it... but please do update your other rs... haha dont worry still updating my ff and hope u like the updated part

Thank-you for all the lovely comments guys...