RiKara SS - Girlfriend pt3 pg12 (31/7)

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi,
It's Sakura with a new...Actually old idea of mine regarding Omkara's love story. See here instead of present and future I am thinking what if she was his past, his first love as he is hers...?
What if there was no other but them all along? So yeah, this is the cheesy perhaps the most cliche tale of rich boy falling for the poor girl and blah blah blah...hop in if you're interested!😃

Below is the introduction and since this is about an artist and his first love, I thought of doing it in an artistic way. (Imakes are not mine. Credit to the rightful owners and hugs to Internet chaachi 😉)


Introduction

I live in a time slipping through my outstretched fingers...like sand on a hot summer desert. So I try the hardest I could, to hold back every moment of us, every glimpse of you.


Of that moment when I first saw you, the sun in your face. The way your lashes dropped hiding your eyes...


Of each time I watched you, lost in your own world wishing to own a small part of that world...

Of that first rain...or the first conversation...

Of the times I let you go...

Of the times you held me back...

Of every sliver of happiness that felt like a dream...

Of every taste of bitterness...
I want to capture them all.
They call me an artist when I am a broken soul. You'd have laughed if you hear things they say...Par tumhe apni sapno se fursat kaha?

Miss you Gauri, I wish you know. I wish you're dreaming of me, as I dream of you...every night, every waking moment. You do, don't you?



Index
Chapter one - page 5
Chapter two - page 8
Chapter three - page 12
Chapter four - coming soon!





Open for your thoughts, questions and theories.
Love,
Sakura
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Naina280599 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is actually really interesting, specially because you're writing this. I'm hooked. Post soon and if possible do send a PM?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Sakura.. sounds like love this one.. always wanted to read about Gauri being Omkaras first n the only love .. n this sounds perfect. Artist n his love. Can't wait to know more. N the sketches lovely.. excited me. Cliches are fun when I know you are gonna handle them :))..
Thanks for this take. Cheers!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Naina280599

This is actually really interesting, specially because you're writing this. I'm hooked. Post soon and if possible do send a PM?

Thanks Naina I'm excited about this too! Will post soon!
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Originally posted by: A-Musing-Me

Sakura.. sounds like love this one.. always wanted to read about Gauri being Omkaras first n the only love .. n this sounds perfect. Artist n his love. Can't wait to know more. N the sketches lovely.. excited me. Cliches are fun when I know you are gonna handle them :))..
Thanks for this take. Cheers!

ThankS Neha glad you liked it! Yeah, this is cliche however I hope you'd like it😊 will post soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey sakura...it seems no not seems it is actually very intersting concept of their first and only love... wow
Potraits are also very lovely..and thanks a lot for the pm
Cant wait to read this update asap
Even title is very intersting GIRLFRIEND
Dost se kuch jyada girlfried se thoda kam HALFGIRLFRIEND😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey sakura this is lovely I loved it continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Very outside the box Sakura... and extremely interesting too!
I'm already hooked and waiting to read all about Omkara's first and last love... You've managed to distill the soft, emotional and artistic part of Omkara into those images of Gauri and their relationship. This is beautiful and I can't wait to experience more of it soon!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Yes Sakura is back with her awsome story 😎
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow. Totally intriguing! 🤓

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