My Baby Doll : A Childhood Love Story part 2 updated on pg 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hello , a new member here to write a story on ragana , after seeing the slow performance of forum i have decided to come here ..to do some contribution to make forum active .. I was a silent member before coming here. i am taking a huge risk to write on Ragna after seeing the talented writers of here..lol..still i want..
sorry for mistakes i have made in story ..
prologue

Vijay with his wife, daughter, and sons enters in the hospital private ward to meet his best friend.

Vjay:"congratulation Raj for becoming the father .i am so happy for you, my friend " ..

raj (proudly):" thank you, Vijay ..now I am a father of a daughter..at last, I got my princess.

vijay's wife Sandhya also wish him and her best friend.

Sandhya:" congratulation Maya.
she turns around and wishes Raj too.

they are still busy in talking to each other but a small boy staring the new born baby who is sleeping in her crib as she is his favorite candy.

the boy's mother asks the small boy.

sandhya:" Raghav, why are you staring her since the time you have come here.

Raghav:" mama, she is so cute ..I like her .she looks like Di's Barbie doll so from now she is my baby doll.only mine.

Diya:" Raghav move, let's see her .you are hovering her .. she will feel suffocation.

prem:"yes Raghav, di is saying right.at least give her some space.

Raghav(possessively):" no di and Bhai .she won't ..she is my baby doll.I won't let anyone touch her.

Vijay:" Diya and prem leave him ..don't pester him.

they nod and move from there.

and he turns towards baby and kiss her making her smile in her sleep and leave both the parents to amuse

Raghav (clapping ):" mama, see the baby smile when I kissed her ..she also likes me.

both the parents laugh on the excitement of Raghav.

baby starts wailing at the top of her lungs making Raghav surprise and worry.

Raghav(angrily):" you all make my baby doll cry..you all are bad making both parents shocked on his sudden outburst.

he leans towards the baby and coaxes her.

Raghav:" shh.. baby doll I am here .they all are bad ..they made you cried..we will not talk to them.

and surprisingly the baby stop cry and starring the person in front of her and thinking who is he who is talking to her softly.

then Raghav kiss the baby making her again smile.

both the parents stand at their places with their mouths open as they are seeing some kinda movie.." the first time she cried it took me an hour to stop her and here just a minute she stopped crying thought baby's mother Maya amusedl


prologue : above


part 2 : CLICK HERE



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Posted: 8 years ago
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first of all thank you for this story,the baby will be kalpi only I am sure about it,raghav is so possessive about baby awesome update dear pls if you get a time pls update regularly and don't left this story to be incomplete sorry to say this dear because when I read a story with full interest its always left discontinued its hurts me a lot ,that's why I am saying this dear pls understand readers situation
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: vanajaragna

first of all thank you for this story,the baby will be kalpi only I am sure about it,raghav is so possessive about baby awesome update dear pls if you get a time pls update regularly and don't left this story to be incomplete sorry to say this dear because when I read a story with full interest its always left discontinued its hurts me a lot ,that's why I am saying this dear pls understand readers situation


DONT WORRY .I WILL GIVE UPDATE REGULARLY BUT IT WILL BE SHORT AS I CANT WRITE LONG CHAPTER.HOPE YOU ALL UNDERSTAND .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ayu12


DONT WORRY .I WILL GIVE UPDATE REGULARLY BUT IT WILL BE SHORT AS I CANT WRITE LONG CHAPTER.HOPE YOU ALL UNDERSTAND .

its not the matter dear updates are small or long,we want to read updates that's it dear
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: naharkhan123

Beautiful start plz continue


THANK YOU NAHARKHAN
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Omg it's so good very cute like their relation thanks so much for starting such a beautiful story
And about long or short update most important thing is complete ending
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Posted: 8 years ago
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lovely start dear welcome here...waiting for next part...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome update
Its too fab
Its too cute
Update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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wonderful start
I love childhood stories
Thanks and welcome to our ragna family
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely start.if possible please update next part soon.

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