My Baby Doll : A Childhood Love Story part 2 updated on pg 7 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
#11
Lovely beginning 😛

Love rags possessiveness

What will happen when he grows up will he be more possessive.

And the baby loves him to

Please update soon
Edited by MagicalMadness - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#12
Beautiful update Waiting for next update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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😊WOW beautiful story line .please update reguraly .who says u can't write like others u r also one of best writter here on this forum .why did u become slient reader.u should try for more u r aslo like us big RAGNA FAN .SO PLEASE don't stop ur talent and write more and come back soon .THANKS .
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Posted: 8 years ago
#14
Beautiful prologue
plz continue
waiting for next chappy
update soon
and please add index also
plz pm me when you update



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Character sketches
Raghav singhania:22 years old a very rude and tough man .after completing his graduation, is helping in his dad's office with hi S elder brother Prem singhania... He is a monster for outside world a perfect son for his parents, perfect brother for his sibling and the most important he can do anything for his baby doll.. His world evolve around his baby doll. She is his strength as well his weakness...

Kalpana jadhav : 16 years old a innocent, cute and bubbly girl.. She is happiness of both of the house.. She is princess of her daddy, gudiya for his mom and life of our raghav singhania. She is the one who can control raghav .

Vijay singhania: he is a father of diya, Prem and raghav.. A very smart business man, good father and husband. Loves his family a lot..


Shandhya : she is a housewife.. A good wife and perfect mother for his kids.. Caring and understanding lady..

Diya: elder daughter of Vijay singhania.. A very lovely sister..

Prem singhania: Vijay singhania's elder son.. A very obedient and ideal son and very understanding brother.. Loves raghav a lot..

Raj jadhav: a very good business man and a caring and lovable husband.. His daughter kalpana is his life and happiness of the house.. Childhood friend of Vijay singhania...

Maya : a very lovely and fun loving lady.. All kids just adored her.. They shared all their secrets with her.. A easy going and caring mother.. Kalpana is very fond of her mother after raghav..



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Posted: 8 years ago
#16
Nice cs waiting for update
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lovely c s.i am happy no pakhi.
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Posted: 8 years ago
#18
part 1
Vijay Singhania and Raj Jadhav are the friends since hostel time.
Raj is an orphan and he had gotten a scholarship for studying in prestigious college and there he met Vijay who sent forcibly by his family where they became a friend...

they became best friend and after marriage, their wives became a best friend.
after 2 years Sandhya delivered a baby girl making their friendship stronger.

after 3 years Sandhya again gave birth to a boy who increased their happiness even more but still they were sad as Maya womb was still empty.
though Raj and his wife treated Diya and prem as their own kids, they were craving for their own child...
after 2 years Sandhya again gave birth to a baby boy and tried to give that baby to Raj and Maya but they denied as they still believe in God, one day they will get happiness of parenthood.
after 5 years they received a good news that Maya was conceiving making their wishes came true...


Vijay with his wife, daughter, and sons enters in the hospital private ward to meet his best friend.

Vijay:"congratulation Raj for becoming the father .i am so happy for you, my friend " ..

raj (proudly):" thank you, Vijay ..now I am the father of a daughter..at last, i got my princess.

Vijay's wife Sandhya also wish him and her best friend.

Sandhya:" congratulation Maya.

she turns around and wishes Raj too.

they are still busy in talking to each other but a small boy staring the new born baby who is sleeping in her crib as she is his favorite candy.

the boy's mother asks the small boy.

sandhya:" Raghav, why are you staring her since the time you have come here.

"Raghav:" mama, she is so cute ..I like her .she looks like Di's Barbie doll so from now she is my baby doll.only mine.

Diya:" Raghav move, let's see her .you are hovering her .. she will feel suffocation.

prem:"yes Raghav, di is saying right.at least give her some space.

Raghav(possessively):" no di and Bhai .she won't ..she is my baby doll.I won't let anyone touch her.

Vijay:" Diya and prem leave him ..don't pester him.

they nod and move from there.

and he turns towards baby and kiss her making her smile in her sleep and leave both the parents to amuse

Raghav (clapping ):" mama, see the baby smile when I kissed her ..she also likes me.

both the parents laugh on the excitement of Raghav.

baby starts wailing at the top of her lungs making Raghav surprise and worry.

Raghav(angrily):" you all make my baby doll cry..you all are bad making both parents shocked on his sudden outburst.

he leans towards the baby and coaxes her.

Raghav:" shh.. baby doll I am here .they all are bad ..they made you cried..we will not talk to them.

and surprisingly the baby stop cry and starring the person in front of her and thinking who is he who is talking to her softly.

then Raghav kiss the baby making her again smile.

both the parents stand at their places with their mouths open as they are seeing some kinda movie.." the first time she cried it took me an hour to stop her and here just a minute she stopped crying thought baby's mother Maya amusedly.



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at baby's name ceremony priest announce the baby's name is "Kalpana" and he further says "this girl will be lucky for his parents..wherever she goes she will bring prosperity and happiness ...her soulmate name will start from "A" ...

both the family are so happy especially their son raghav..his only work to move around Kalpana.
now a day he has started to live with Jadhav ..his stubborn made his parents accept his demand and they are a relief as Jadhav mansion is just beside Singhania mansion...
he always does pestering her Maya maa that why not her baby doll is taking to him..why is she sleeping so much ?, when will she be able to play with him? when will he share his chocolates with her...


sorry for mistakes i have made in this part..thanks for your suport...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good start

So is Raghav not supposed to be Kalpanas soulmate

The priest said her soul mates name starts with A
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Posted: 8 years ago
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awesome update dear, but raghav is not kalpi solumate,and who is this A,raghav is so possessive about her what's his reaction when she find her solumate A (in future)
pls update soon dear
Edited by vanajaragna - 8 years ago

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