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DIL KYA KARE


(meri pheli fan fiction hai)


SHARMAS


GAYATRI : mother

SURYA : father BIG BISSNESSMAN

KAVYA : 23 year old he love his sister help his dad in bissness (eijaz khan)

MISTY : 22 years old getting married to kartik

ALIYAH : 20 yars old

KRIPA : 19 year old jaan of the familly she care for every one (college)

KHAANAS

DILIP : father love is familly friend with the sharmas

NAINA : mother positif she love her child

Kartik : 25 year old possitive role

PRITVI : 23 years old

anjali :22 yaer old very sweet (natasha kavyanjali)

ANGAD : 20 year he is un college



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Posted: 19 years ago
#2
camera show a big house
in the house

Gayatri : Ali, mishty jao usko utao giyara (11) baj gaye hai

we see 2 girls ek blue sharwar kameez main hoti hai vo mishty hoti hai or dusri phone rakh rahi hoti hai vo jean or or blue shirt vo aliyah oti hai

M : misty
AA : aliyah

m, aa : yes mumy

dono upar jati hai

kamrein main hati hain

aa : chalo uto 11 bajh gahai hein

girl : sone do na di sirf 11 hi baje hain

M: haila kya ladki hai (aliyah ko dekhe kethji hai) kethi sirf 11 baje hain . Jab tumari shaadi hogi to suba suba utna pare gha abi adaat lagao .chalo utho abhi

girl : Hum To Bhai Jaise Hain Vaise Raheinge ... (3)aliayh or mishty usko dekhi hai
phele vo apne hath(hand) dekha thi hai phir
apne aankhe dikha thi hain phir apna mou (mouth)
or phir apna pura chera vo KRIPA hoti hai

Ab Koi Khush Ho Ya Ho Khafa
Hum Nahin Badleinge Apni Ada
Samjhe Na Samjhe Koi Hum Yahi Kaheinge
Hum To Bhai Jaise Hain Vaise Raheinge ... (2)
vo apne kapre pheinti hain et skirt or et top jispe likha ota hai hot

apni mummy kho galey se laha khe
Hum Dil Ki Shahzadi Hai, Marzi Ki Mallika...(2)
Sar Pe Aanchal Kyun Rakhe(with misty dupata)
Dhalkaa To Dhalkaa
Ab Koi Khush Ho Ya Koi Roothe
Is Baat Par Chahe Har Baat Toote
Hum To Bhai Jaise Hain Vaise Raheinge... (2)

we see sury enter en smile
Humein Shokh Mehandi Ka Na Shahnai Ka Hai...(2)
Humare Liye To Apna Ghar Hi Bhala Hai
Sunta Agar Ho To Sun Le Kaazi
Lagtaa Nahin Kabhi Hum Honge Razi
Hum To Bhai Jaise Hain Vaise Raheinge...(2)
Ab Koi Khush Ho ... Vaise Raheinge
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Posted: 19 years ago
#3
that was really cool please continue...

i like the idea of bringing KYPH and KA together 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
#4
continue soon. interesting story. I like the part of having kkavya and Anjali in the story.
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Posted: 19 years ago
#5
in london (main ek chiz badal rahin hoon anjali 19 yaer ki hai or angad 20 pritvi 22)

show a house

naina : bata apne bhai ko jaga de pata nahin kab tak sohai raha ghe, kartik
to suba tumare papa ke saat chale gaya hai.

we see a girl with sharwar kameez pink palak khe dekti hai she smiling vo
ANJALI hoti

anjali anju

anju : ok mum

she go up stair
anju : hihi dekna kaise jaga thi hoon

she come in a room 3 bed hote hain
ek khali

anju : hello brothers get up

boys : nahin sone do

anju : ok na utho mujhe kya

she go in the bathroom 2 glass pani (water) ke lati hai or un dono pe penti hain
vo asti hain

dono ek dum se ut jate hain or vo dono pritvi or ngad ote hain

A and P: kya uwa , (anjali ko dekh kar) anju ki bachi

dono anjuli khe piche bagte hain anjali naina ke piche chup jati hain

N : kiya huwa (pritvi or angad ko dekar) tum dono bige huwe kyun ho

A : anju ne pani phenka

naina look at anjali

Anju : na maine kuch nahin kya

P : hu? na anju ne nahin kya maine khud apne upar pani phenka hai

Anju : dekha na mummy bhai bhi kai rahain hain khe maine kuch nahin kiya
(pritvi ko dekar) vaise bhai apki tabiat to thik hain na aise hi pani pank diya

P and a : anju ki bachi nahin choronga tumain

a and p anju ko pakar lete hain

a : ab sorry bolo

anju : sory bhaiiiissss

a : ok

next : angad go to india
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Posted: 19 years ago
#6
kripa : mama bhai kab ara hai

Gayatri : a suba phone aya tha or usne kaha 2 din bad

Kripa :kiyaaa!!!!! phele to kete sirf do din lagaon gha or ab 4 din ho
gahain hai or ab phir 2 din main bhai c naraaz hoon
we see ek ladka likin uska chera nahin


gayatri smile smile

Phir ladke khe ankhe dikha the hain

Aliyah asti hai

Kripa : tum kyun as rahi ho

Phir uski smile

AA : aise hi mood hai mera

phir camera uska pura chera dikha thi hain or vo KAVYA hota hai vo kripa kai piche hota
hai

K : agar bhai ka phone ahai to khena ke main naraz hoon or mujhse baat na kare

kavy : itni naaraz ho

K : haan to .

K : ek minute yeh kon bola

kripa piche mur ke dekti hai

K : bhaIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIi ek minute main apse naaraz hoon

Kavy : sorry baba
k : na
kavya : ok tho main yeh chocolate aliyah ko de deta hoon

k : nahinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn

vo chocolate lene lagi hai lekin kavya chocolate usko nahin deta

K : do na

Kavya :no phele meri papi do or kaho ke mujhe maaf kar diya

K : kabhi nahin

Kavy : ok to chocolate bi kabi nahin

k : ok ok sorry (vo usko kiss karti hain)

Gayatry : beta safar thik raha , misty kider hai tumai lene ghi ti

misty andar hati hain
misty: yahain hoon

kripa : ek minute misty lene ghi hai iska matlab sab ko pata tha or mujhe pataya nahin

G : beta kavya nhe kaha ta na bata na

Kripa : kyun

KK : aisi hi mera mood tha or jab mene phone kya tum so rahin tho to maine kaha khe tumain na
patahain

phone ring

gayatri : hello

gayatri : naina kaisi ho

gayatry : acha tho kaal arahain hain

gayatry : ok by

Aa K M and KK : khon ara hai

G : misty khe saghai ki tayari ke liya anju or angad a ara hain hai

M sharma rahin oti hain

K : or jij nahin ara hain

G : nahin abi nahin

kripa or aliyah nhai angad anju or pritvi ko sirf ek bar dekha tha jab vo choti thi or
kartik ko janti hain kyunki kartik india 2 month phele aya tha or kavya angad pritvi
or kartik ko janta hai likin anjuli ko nahin kyunki jab vo london gaya tha anju trip pe
gahi thi

G : kavya kal tum une lene jaoge

KK : ok

sorry ajj mene thik se nahin likha
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Posted: 19 years ago
#7
london

N : angad anjuli tayar ho ya nahin jaldi karo kahin plane miss na o jahai

A and anju : yes mom ready hai

N : ok chalo

AIRPOt
Anju : ok by mom jaldi ana

INDIA

gayatry : acha kripa vo angad or anjuli tumare college main jahain ghe jab vo ahain to tum unko college dekhana

kripa : acha mom ab main ja rahin hoon ya phir college khe lye late o jahongi

kripa khe college main
kripa apni mercedes main athi hai sab usko dekhte hain

girls : hi krips

kripa : hi

ek ladka atha hai uska naam rajiv ot hai

rajiv : hi kripaa

kripa : hi rajiv kaise ho main tumse kuch khena chati hoon

rajiv socha hai khe kripa usko pasand karti hai

Kripa : tumain pata hai

Rajiv : kya

K : tumain pata hai ki ..

rajiv : ki...

K : meri gari park nahin ouhi to tum park kar do usko chabi deti hai

sab aste hain

ek ladki ati hai vo tamana oti hai (kali of khusum)

T : tum bi na sab ladki rajiv pe fida hai or vo tumpe or tum o ke

K : main kya karon agar ar ladka kripa sharma pe fida hai

somone : yes ye to hai

kripa phiche dekti hai or vo zaara oti hai(koena yeh meri like hai)

kripa : zaara (she hug her)

Kripa : ek afte se kider thi

Z : apni dost ki shaadi phe vaise kaisi ho

K : thik hoon oops ek kaam a gaya mujhe principal khe pass jana hai or kena hai ki angad or anjali
ider parne a rahen hai

T : yeh angad or anjali kaun hai

K : mere jij ke bhai or behen

vo 3 principal ke office khe taraf ja rahin hoti hai ke 2 ladki a jati hain

vo dono PAmmi (kavyanjali) or anitah (KYPH) oti hain

Kripa : ho hi anita or monckey oops pammi

ANITAh : its anitaaa darling

K T ans Z : oh sorry anitaaaaaaaaaa

A : wathever

Pammi : vaise kripa kavya kaisa hai

K : a thik hai a vo mujhe tumare bare khuch ke raha tha

PAmmi : (kush hoti hain) acha kya ke raha tha!!!!!!!!!

k : yehi khe jab tum uske samne athi ho to vo

Pammi : to vooooo

K : vo darr jata hai itni make-up laga ti ho ke tum witch lag ti ho

everyone laugh except anitah or pammi vo dono chali jaati hain

kripa principal ke office jaati hai or vo ke deti hai khe angad or anjali is college main parne arahain hai

Airpot

Kavya angad or anjali ka intazaar kar raha hota hai
angad ata hai or kavya ko hug karta hai
phir anjali a rahi hoti hai jab kavya usko dekhta hai tho dekhta hi rhai jata hai(aisa tho ona hi tha)
vo uske samne aati hai

anjali : hi
kavya aisa hi reta hai
anjali ; hello kahan ko gahain

Kavya : han ... oops eu hi

angad asta hai

angad : chale

kavya : haan chale
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Posted: 19 years ago
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continue soon please. That was really good. 😊
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Angad anjuli or kavya ghar poonsh the hai
sab ek dusre ko heg karte hai lekin
sirf kripa nahin hoti kyunko vo college main hoti hai
gayatri : angad anjuli app fresh oh jaho or araam karo safar main tak gahein hoge

Angad ; ji

Gayatri : ali or anjuli ko unka room dikha do misty or main mandir ja rahain hai or kavya papa kai pass
(kavya anjuli ko dakh raha hota hai)
aliyah : ok (vo angad ko dekh rahin hoti hai)

aliyah : un dono ko room dekha ti hai
aliyah : ye tumara room angad
angad : thanks

angad or kripa ka room saat hi hota hai unka balcony ek hota hai , angad fresh okar balcony pe jata hai or usko kripa ka room nazar hata hai darwaza open hota hai vo kripa ke room main chala jata hai

Angad : sweet room
phir usko ek photo nazar athi hai jispe kripa dono hanton (hand) main chocolate pakar rahin oti hai angad dekhti hi uspar fida ho jaati hai

Angad kya ladki hai yaar
phir usko ek dairy dikhai deti hai
kripa college se wapis athi hai
angad dairy parna churu kar tha hai
kripa apne room main jati hain usko angad nazar nahin atha
kripa bathroom main change kar thi or phir shhesha main dekh kar kheti hai
Kripa : im so beautyful
jab vo bathroom se nikal thi hai usko angad nazar atha hai uski dairy parta uwe

Kripa : haiiii(use dairy le ke)tumari immat kaisi uwi mere kamrein main ane ki or
upar se meri dairy parne ki
(angad usko dekhta hai hai lekhin khush bolta nahin kripa ke sapno main kowa ota hai)
Kripa : hello kon ho tum
Kripa : (hello (kripa usko ila thi hai or angad kripa ke khab se wapis a jata hai)kaun ho
tum
Angad : u r so sexy
kRIPA : hu?????
Angad : oops a hi main angad hoon
kripa : acha to tum angad ho, mmmm dikhne main to tum
Angad : pata hai HOT lagta hoon
kripa : nahin bandar (monckey) lagte ho (she laugh)
angad : tum bhi itni khubsurat nahin ho jiyni ki dikhti ho
Kripa : acha
Angad : haan use kahin zyada ho
Kripa : haan haan pata hai ab jaoider se
Angad : kyun (bed pe beth jata hai) main ider thik hoon
Kripa : Jao niklo lekin tum andar kaise ahai ho
Angad : balcony se
Kripa : acha tumara kamra pass wala hai
Angad : yes
Kripa : ab tum ja rahai ho ke nahin
angad : nahin
Kripa : ok ider hi bete raho
Angad : kool

kripa angad ke room main jati hai or angad ke sare kapre niche pend deti hai ek kenchi
(scissors) leke kapre lag ti hai angad akhe ketha hai
Angad : yeh kya kar rahin hoon
Kripa : dikhai nahin deta kya tumarein kapre kat rahin hoon
Angad : haha very funny yeh mujhe nazar a raha tha lekin kyun
Kripa : kyun ki tum mere kamrein se nahin nikal rahein the
Angad : ab nikal gaya hoon ab to choro
Kripa : ok mmmm lekin ek kati hoon kyunki tumne meri dairy pari
(kripa uski ek shirt kaat deti hai)
angad : aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa tumain main nahin choron gha

kripa dor thi hai or vo uske piche pagta hai phir angad kripa khe upar ghir jata hai
vo dono ek dusre ko dekhte rethe hai
phir anju angad ko bulati hai

anju : bhaya kider hoooo
Angad kripa ke upar se uth jata hai

anju : o yahan ho
Angad : hain kya baat hai
Anju : vo mama or papa ne mujhse kaha khe tumko khena ke shaam ko kar na

Anjuli krips ko dekhti hai
anju : hi tum kripa ho right
Kripa : yes
Anjuli ko phone ata hai

anju : excuse me
vo wahan se chali jati hai

Angad kripa ko dekte hai
Kripa : ab kya dekh rahai ho
Angad : mujh se dosti karogi
Kripa : main itni jaldi kisise dosti nahin kar tj=hi or tumse khabi nahin

(vo wahan se chali jati hai)

angad : dosti to karni paregi ... vaise dosti ke lye itna akar rahin hai
jab shaadi khe lye kahonga tho kya oga
lekin phebi kya ladki hai
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continue soon. why have u stopped writing

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