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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sashashyam

My dear Shailaja,


My eyes are in no better shape than yours, and I have stopped commenting on FFs for a while now. But still I wanted to congratulate you on a beautifully conceived and extremely well scripted and written chapter. I loved the determinedly non-mushy and not overtly sensual but very tender and mutually supportive relationship between your Chandra and Nandini. The last part is the best, quite perfect. My felicitations.

And yes, the lack of proof reading did not matter at all, for not even I could spot any errors! Take special care to follow your doctor's instructions re: your eyes. As this is most likely an infection and not a condition like mine, I hope it will improve in a week or so.

Shyamala Aunty

Thank you dear Aunty for your generous words of praise regarding the chapter. I really hope the condition of eyes will improve soon. This one week was really bad. I have been regularly using the prescribed eye drops and giving complete rest to my eyes but they have been feeling as though they were wrung dry like a wet towel.
Edited by shailusri1983 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Very interesting update shailusri ,

Chandra is making being a great samrat and a loving husband effortless, something our show's chandra is struggling with.

Btw, in earlier chapters you mentioned about Nandini's and Chandra's horoscope details. Is Nandini still in danger and chandra gonna find out it's because of him? Or the pujas done by chanakya neutralized it's effects?

Take care of your eye.
Regards
Neetu
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you for a very beautiful review. My comments are in bold.

Originally posted by: Bronze.

Very interesting update shailusri ,


Chandra is making being a great samrat and a loving husband effortless, something our show's chandra is struggling with.

Clarity and consistency are the key in any kind of writing or showbiz. I wish the show's CVs realize that. One episode turns out to be very brilliant and exceptional followed by a number of episodes that are lack lustre. It is another thing that RT and SBP excel despite such shortcomings which make me wonder what magic they could work with a consistently good script.

Btw, in earlier chapters you mentioned about Nandini's and Chandra's horoscope details. Is Nandini still in danger and chandra gonna find out it's because of him? Or the pujas done by chanakya neutralized it's effects?

The negative effects have not been nullified. By staying together, Nandini's life will perpetually be in danger. However, Chanakya overlooks this in the overall grand scheme of things because Chandini's staying together will boost Chandra's chances for victory.On the other hand, both Chandra and Nandini are ignorant of this whole thing. If Chandra comes to know about this, we may be sure that he will try to send her away

Take care of your eye.
Regards
Neetu

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: shailusri1983

Thank you for a very beautiful review. My comments are in bold.


Thanks for the reply, given you eye condition I wasn't expecting a reply.
Looking forward to see how the horoscope thing will play out, and Nandini- nand meeting. Also how will Arjun, chaaya, Malay & vishkanya meeting playoff.

I hope future chapters will have answers to all these questions.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rajatshweta

Yes dear. Your regular readers are always here with you.

You take care of your health first.

Thank you Sangeeta.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: eshalli

Take care of ur health dear
We'll wait for you

Thank you Eshalli.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Dear Shailaja Akka
I have followed this story from the beginning and have found it fantastic. I apologize for not commenting ever before, I've been meaning to write a detailed message to you. Before I get around to that, I wanted to enquire about your health.

How are you doing? I really hope you feel better soon. Please take care of yourself. I also hope that you will get back to this story when you are better. I don't follow the show, I stumbled upon this story and have been hooked since then. You wouldn't believe the number of times this story has been a source of comfort at the end of long days. Although it seems like the readership is going down, I'm sure there are many silent readers (like me until now) who keep refreshing the page for an update.

Take care, Akka. Get well soon and get back to the story.

Lots of love
M
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Galagala

Dear Shailaja Akka

I have followed this story from the beginning and have found it fantastic. I apologize for not commenting ever before, I've been meaning to write a detailed message to you. Before I get around to that, I wanted to enquire about your health.

How are you doing? I really hope you feel better soon. Please take care of yourself. I also hope that you will get back to this story when you are better. I don't follow the show, I stumbled upon this story and have been hooked since then. You wouldn't believe the number of times this story has been a source of comfort at the end of long days. Although it seems like the readership is going down, I'm sure there are many silent readers (like me until now) who keep refreshing the page for an update.

Take care, Akka. Get well soon and get back to the story.

Lots of love
M


Thank you. My eyes are okay now. I will try to get in the next update in a couple of days.
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Chapter Forty-Nine:

At Toshali,

The royal crier announced, "Prince Madhav of Peeplivan has been adjudged the winner of Princess Malathi's hand in the Swayamvar by the Jury."

Princess Malathi, a garland in hand, her head bent in shyness and her face blushing a deep red, walked in very slow and measured steps up to Prince Madhav to garland the victorious suitor for her hand. Two of her maids followed her holding the hem of her veil while the rest kept on showering flowers petals on Madhav and Malathi to commemorate and celebrate this happy event.

Just when she was about to garland him, Madhav held her hands to stop her drawing the entire ceremony to a screeching halt. A hush and embarrassed silence fell over the entire gathering before the King of Toshali, Rajendra Varma roared, "What kind of impertinence is this! I hope you have an explanation for this or else..."

Prince Madhav spoke in a highly placatory tone, "Please forgive me your Highness if my actions were in any way rude or insulting towards you or your beautiful and gifted daughter whom it is my good fortune to have won as my life partner. It was not my intention to insult either of you. I would want this ceremony to be solemnized as soon as possible. But when I will apprise you of my predicament, you too would surely feel that my apprehensions in wanting this ceremony to be temporarily stalled for the present very reasonable. Can we talk about this in private?"

Rajendra: The court is adjourned!

In a private royal chamber,

King Rajendra was seething with rage. He just did not want to discuss this matter anymore. His daughter's Swayamvar had become the laugh of the town. He did not see any justification possible for Prince Madhav and his behavior...yet he wanted to hear him out fully before deciding anything further.
Rajendra: Prince Madhav, do you wish to marry Princess Malathi or not?...If not...why did you participate in this Swayamvar? Nobody forced you to!


Madhav: It was my precarious situation which forced me to. I had heard about Princess Malathi's beauty and royal graces from my sister-in-law, Maharani Nandini, the Queen of Magadh who also happens to be a close friend of Princess Malathi. I instantly fell in love with her simply by hearing...

Rajendra: We are hearing...Proceed...

Madhav: Magadh and Peeplivan are at the brink of a major war with Maharaj Padmanand. I hope you must be aware of it...because Maharaj Padmanand has entered Magadh from your side of the border...

Rajendra, a bit apologetically, "I have nothing against Magadh or Peeplivan...I did not stop Maharaj Padmanand when he was passing through Toshali to enter into Magadh to safeguard the best interests of my people. I did not want to antagonize a snake like Padmanand and bring his ire upon me and my people...That is how it goes in politics...

Madhav carefully measuring his words, "I understand that...that is how politics works...neither do any of us blame you for it...but unfortunately...it has precipitated matters for both Magadh and Peeplivan. My brother, Maharaj Chandragupt and my sister-in-law, Maharani Nandini have already left for war. I was also supposed to accompany them to the field of battle. Princess Malathi's Swayamvar was announced at that precise juncture leaving me in a great dilemma. If I did not attend the Swayamvar, I would lose the person whom I loved forever. But now that I have won her hand in the Swayamvar, I cannot afford to ignore the fact that as soon as I go back from here, I will have to join my brother Maharaj Chandragupt in the battlefield. This is a real war and I could lose my life in it as well...

Rajendra: Young man with the kind of bravery and wit that you have displayed in all the competitions of the Swayamvar, I am very confident that neither you nor your side will lose...

Madhav: It is good to be confident but not overconfident when one is up against foes of Maharaj Padmanand and Amatya Rakshas's calibre...I know the very thought would be unpleasant to you...but supposing we lost the war and I lost my life in it...where would that leave your daughter? ...She will become a widow even without seeing anything of marital life...So all I am asking for is a little bit of time and your permission and approval for me to go back to Magadh and return after I am victorious in my endeavors before solemnizing this marriage. I hope you find nothing wrong in this request.

Rajendra: I understand your situation young man...but I don't know whether you realize it or not...Now that you have won my daughter's hand in the Swayamvar, she is as good as married...whether she garlands you or not...whether this ceremony takes place now or later...Nobody else will marry her...

Madhav: I am sorry for that Maharaj. I assure you that I will return as soon as we win the war to seek Malathi's hand. Please permit me to leave now...

King Rajendra Varma after a very long pause and some deep thought said, "Alright...you may go...but...

Madhav with bated breath, "But..."

He was on the verge of clinching what he had set out to negotiate and bargain even without exactly asking for it. He had to do this for his motherland...his brother...his aunt...his own parents...Acharya Chanakya...for everyone back home... who were expecting and relying a lot on him to do his side of the job. So did he or didn't he?

Rajendra: You may leave but ...with our army...The army of Toshali will accompany you to Magadh to help you in the war with Maharaj Padmanand...We will also get a chance to rectify our mistake by helping you and Maharaj Chandragupt...Malathi is my only child. So both you and Malathi are all that I have...I hope you have no qualms accepting my help? I want my child to be happy at the earliest possible...

Madhav heaved a sigh of relief, "Of course Maharaj...I understand...I cannot express how happy I am that you understood my situation...

PS: Dear readers, at this stage in my narrative it will be impossible to have Chandini in all the chapters. There may be a few chapters where they may not even figure just like this one. I hope all of you will understand this. Thank you for being so understanding during this whole while when I went missing. My eyes are fine now. I will try to keep giving one update per week.

Chapter Fifty: Page 97

Edited by shailusri1983 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
I'm really glad for the update. Enlisting help was so strategically done. It was a great read. I'm sure we could do without Chandini for a few updates.

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