llAdvNi:The Aftermathll UP-1 pg3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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AdvNi: The Aftermath:



Its been 2 months to Advay and Chandni's marriage. Advay is very close to finding out the truth who was responsible to plot against her family and who made Chandni a pawn. He has investigated all the people and found out that Indrani and his ex are involved to plot against their family for the wealth and she is also the one to give Alzheimer's tablet to Yash Narayan. Their is always a city function for charity and Advay vouches on himself to put Chandni's mom real face infront of everyone. The City Masquerade Ball arrives and Advay and Chandni go seperately in Advay's car. In the car, Advay looks at Chandni and smiles a little but he is thinking Chandni will hate him if she knows about his plan to unveil her mother. Then he thinks to himself why does he care, he shouldnt bother with his feelings just focus on what he will do.


City Ball Masquerade begins and each couple is asked to dance on the floor, Chandni and Advay step on the dance floor and Rabba Ve song plays in the background. He holds her waist and looks into the eye and turns her around and pulls her back towards him.Chandni is surprised and likes it even though Advay has warned her to keep away from him.


The lights go off and a projector starts, it shows Indrani talking to her Ex about the wealth and how she planned Chandni as a pawn and how she will use the Vashist to every extent possible to get the wealth. Chandni is shocked looks at Advay and runs from the Ball. She takes out her Mask outside and puts her hand on her forehead. She cannot take it the mother whom she trust beyond everyone was actually using her, Advay follows her and puts interlocks his fingers with her..Chadni tries to unlock his fingers when Advay tells her Shush..listen Chandni i know its a lot for you to take in but this is the truth i have been trying to tell you but you ignore it..


Chandi fumbles and finally unlocks his fingers and walks away..she is walking and Advay follows her


Its night and lightning thunderstorms occurs as the street lights flicker on and off, Advay and Chandni are walking down the street all the realization has sinked in them..they are Dev and Chandni of Childhood and Chandni cannot believe it neither does Advay what is he doing? He is supposed to take revenge from her and not get attracted to her whats happening to him why cant he see tears now, why cant he give the pain he wished he would give her? Why?

It starts to rain and Advay takes out his jacket and hold his on top of both of them and tells Chandni to come closer..

Advay: Chandni come closer

Chandni looks away and comes closer

Advay grabs her waist and kisses on her forehead, he lets go of the jacket and they both get wet in the rain..

Chandni tears rolling down from her eyes..

They both look into each other's eyes..Advay too cries and they both hug each other..Rabba Ve..Rabba Ve playing in the background..

Chandni:Advay whatever happened in the past was not intentionally, I didnt mean to and didnt know

Adavy: Shhh..Shhh..let me take this moment and cherish it, I have been through a lot because of you but your eyes somehow prove me wrong, Chandni please help me understand what should i do

Advay: Is it happening to you? Something you cannot explain

Chandni: Yes Advay but I have always been yearning for my dev...and now knowing that You are him and I have been responsible somehow in some manner for the destruction makes me feel worse..she sobs

Advay: lets go home for now or else we will catch cold


The couple heads home...


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Just an attempt, please leave comments and suggestions and whether to continue or not😉 ignore mistakes please😛


-Erum


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ghissapitta thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Love it, Demi! Excited to read about a married AdNi Please continue!
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Nice one Erum...u completed all complicated part of story just in a shot
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Ahh Erum
A married Advni
Can we get more please ?
If possible make it a SS
They just found each other
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice one...
Looks like all problems solved already but will be excited if you continue...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Interesting..concept.. Loved it!😳
Very well written👏
Do continue soon dear. 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: ghissapitta

Love it, Demi! Excited to read about a married AdNiPlease continue!



Thank you dear Will continue for sure
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: deeps_92

Nice one Erum...u completed all complicated part of story just in a shot


😆 I know thanks all problems solved just AdvNi from now on 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: 2filmy

Ahh Erum
A married Advni
Can we get more please ?
If possible make it a SS
They just found each other


Yes yes a married AdvNi..for sure will update soon😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SpriyaS

Nice one...
Looks like all problems solved already but will be excited if you continue...


For sure I will continue if I get more readers😉

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