Rikara OS: Udhoori Pyaas

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javeria

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Posted: 8 years ago

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AparnaChinnu

@AparnaChinnu

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome...loved it...

you should continue this

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ashuz123

@ashuz123

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Posted: 8 years ago

of course .. please continue ... this is perfect scenario for OM & Gauri.. loved it.👏

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lizzy110

@lizzy110

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Posted: 8 years ago

Just breathtaking! Amazing, would love it if you continue it.

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Genie

@writergenie17

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Posted: 8 years ago

Yay! You wrote something and I get to comment for a change 😆

This was such an amazing read... Omki's inner turmoil through the night and Gauri's perpetual generosity were a pleasure to experience.

The reaction Omki had to Gauri's decision to stay was too cute for words. Omki cursing himself for being unromantic towards his wife is a dream come true!

Please do continue this if you can... would love to see Omkara try his hand at romancing his wife and would love to know Gauri's reaction to that!

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Vrinda

@vrindagupta

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Posted: 8 years ago

Awesome OS

U focused on Omkara's monologue

What he actually feels n wants

Till now he saw Gauri differently

Now that he knows her true self

He wants to know her better

Not as just someone

But as his wife

Plz continue

Make this a TS or SS

Waiting eagerly to read more

Update soon

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Shraddha Dikshit

@Shraddhadikshit

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Posted: 8 years ago

This was so beautiful dear... please do continue...& can u please pm if not I might miss the update...

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Sakura24

@Sakura24

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Posted: 8 years ago

What a pleasant role reversal this is! Today I am commenting! It was wonderful and simple at the same time. What had me in the end was how true Omkara was to his character until the very last bit...glucose wali chaai...seriously Omkara? He is right only he could have said something like that!

I'd love to read how he would express his gratitude to Gauri, if you decided to give us another shot.

Waiting hopefully for that!

Love,

Sakura

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sara1990

@sara1990

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Posted: 8 years ago

Seriously Omkara???? Glucose waali Chaai. Unromantic husband. Lets see how he make it up to Gauri. Waiting for the second part??

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alinaza

@alinaza

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Aw I love it! Such a beautiful chapter! I hope the actual episode tonight is like this. Finally, Omkara Singh Oberoi is listening to his heart again:). The Glucose wallah tea killed me - so sweet, and stupid and married Buddhu Omkieji. I hope you do continue the story. You write so well and wonderfully.

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