OS: || Tujhse Naraz Nehi Zindegi... || - Page 9

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

get ready for part 2 stuti...😆

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Hmmm aab to ready hona hi hoga! 🤣

You always comes with the new ideologies darling... the moment where jodha adjust herself with the new life of hers with the thought of daily soups was a realistic thing as well as light hearted humor hides in that... it am wrong correct me... and your endings also they all are such realistic one that they don't carry a single trace of fantasies in them.. see here also if you want you can make them united n make them single out of love with the twists and turns but you didn't... so only your story stands in a different place among all... if you do that then it would last that practicality with which it started...

Originally posted by: SUSHlovesJOJA

You always comes with the new ideologies darling... the moment where jodha adjust herself with the new life of hers with the thought of daily soups was a realistic thing as well as light hearted humor hides in that... it am wrong correct me... and your endings also they all are such realistic one that they don't carry a single trace of fantasies in them.. see here also if you want you can make them united n make them single out of love with the twists and turns but you didn't... so only your story stands in a different place among all... if you do that then it would last that practicality with which it started...

And finally I really loved this... 😳.. and lot n lots of hugs to you betijaan from your ammijaan... love you...🤗🥺...